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第二次模考题
Pets should be treated as family members

There is a long debate as to whether we should treat the pets like our family members. Someone suggests that the Pets are the close friends of us, and do help us a lot in our ordinary lives. Therefore we should tread them as our family members. Others, who have the opposite ideas, clam that the pets bring us a vast problems, such as the disease, people should leave away the pets. from my view, I agree the suggestion of the former group.
Firstly, in our country, pets is acceptable by people. I take dog for the example. Dog has become an excellent symbol of the pets in today's society. It is known as its loyalty and motional to the human being. No matter its owner is poor or rich, beauty or ugly, health or sick, it will always follows him and never betray.
Secondly, pets typically give the people great help. For example, when children own pets, they will learn how to protect and take care of these little animals, and become more and more responsibility. Moreover, pets also play an very important role in our ordinary lives. blind-seeing dog help the blind men walk as normal persons. police dog can find illegal drugs and help policemen to catch the criminal. Pets are also good actors, which bring us great happiness and make our lives colorful and enjoyable.
However, we should also admit that pets also bring us many problems. because of the large amount of animals, many disease have been created and spread very quickly, which leave us a serious social problem.
According to those above, though the pets have disadvantages, they are still very important friends of us, so we should take care of them, just as family members.
第三次模考题
The college years are the best time in a person’s life

There is a long debate as to which time of a person's life can be concerned as the best time. Someone suggest that the time when we were children is the most wonderful time that people ever have. Another persons, who have different views, say that the adult time is the best time during the human life. As far as I concern, I think the college years are the best time in our life. The reasons are as follows
Firstly, the college years are definitely important to one's later life. In today's society, with the rapidity development of the technology and modern civilization, people need to access more information than before, and learn more skills and knowledge in order to survive during the increasing competition. Because of these, go to the college become the basic condition for today's adults to get success.
Second of all, college typically provide opportunity for people to learn many skills and access a large amount of information. people can learn their professional technologies in the college, besides that, the students also can improve their ability of community, and learn how to cooperate with a group, which is consider as a very significant characteristic for their later lives.
Finally, college provide a very ideal atmosphere for those young teenagers to find their friends. Everyone needs friends. No one doubt the important role that his friends play in his life, and making friends is also very important for one to get success. Many people that I have met said that they found their best friends during the college years. So we can see how wonderful the college life could be!
According to those above, no matter what kind of times that people said is best. in my heart, the college years can not be replaced, and I will never forget those amazing moments in my college time.

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