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发表于 2009-7-21 23:32:40 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

"How children are socialized today determines the destiny of society. Unfortunately, we have not yet learned how to raise children who can help bring about a better society."

No other era of history ever regarded children's education more crucial than nowadays. As the rapid development of the society, new generation of parents take education into account more and more significantly.Some even concerns that how children are socialized today settles the destiny of society. Undoubtablaly, progress of the next generation does play an important role to the development of the society. However, I suppose that this statement is somehow overestemated. As we all know that destiny of a society is not only determined by socialization of children, but als other crucial factors are involved.

Our society is composed of complex elements not only children. All the elements are interwaved with each other so intensely that we should combine each elements together and analize them considerately.As we can imagine that the exhibition of a society is manifested not only by a small group of children, but other circles. Children represent a fixed portion of people, they interpret our quality of education and reflect our hope to the future. Moreover, the other citizens of the societ, like adult and old people associating to exhibits the thriving of our contemporary society in several aspects. In politics area, our elites manipulate diplomacy concisiously to tackle the relationship with other countries so that we can flourish steadfastly and keep a well-rounded momentous in contemporary world which full of competition and pressure. And also in scientific arena, scientists exert fullheartedly to abtain the goals they have set to promote the equipment and well-being of the country so that a signal of strength displays in the front of world audience. All memebers in this society compose the harmony scope as a whole.

There are no other era of the history that ever takes children's education so crucially as nowadays do. As so many people even consider that how children are socialized today will eventrually settles the destiny of society and on the other hand people are concerned about insufficient education to our next generation and even worried day and night. Children's behavior do play a significant role in the formation of the society as they indicate our unknow future and lead the society how it evolves. However, the society is composed of several groups of force and it seems too partial to put too much emphasises on socializing of children. Following, I would like to demonstrate my point of view by several reasons.

The destiny of a society is not a univocal dedinition.When it comes to the concept of "destiny of the society", we refers to term that the society was consitituted by several groups of aspects. And also, the fade of the society also signaled in many aspects. Here we could refer to specific areas that are related to the fate of the community. For instance, the adult are representing the pillar group of comtemporary. They dominate the arena of business, politics, arts and even every region that are operating for pubilc well-being. And also they take the resposibility of cultivating the next generation and teach them all they know so that children will thrive and make extradinary progress in the preocess of growing. This is a course of departure. For example, there are many people who are regarded as adols by teenagers to mimik their accomplishment and their way of doing things and attitude toward life. Susun was a disabled women but still keep the heart of pursuing dream without neglect and eventually stand on the stage she had imagined millions of times in her dream and huanting here over and over again. That is the spirit of toughness and willing ness that drive people to strive for one’s life all life long.Susun is not a paragon to the children but also to the contemporary who are meriting our respect. And on the other hand, old people in our society also take a considerable portion as well. They are not rarely living in this world, they also make contributions to the society as they depart their precious experience to the next generaton and warn them timely to some extend so that make nonessencial dangers and tragedies far away from them. Knowledge are accumulated during the procedure of grouth. Undoubtabley
Society will achieve more than ecpected from old generation as they portray our history which denotes avoiding mistakes and flaws that have been encountered before. When we mentions that history is a mirror, our old generation, as well as a part of history guiding us directly to the future.

Children's education are deemed progressing promisingly as time goes. After long time of evolvement in education, people have devised various kind of padegoguy and accmulating aboundence of knowledge. Especially nowadays devises and material such as Internet, TV, remote-educaton,etc..All can be used conveniencely during the procedure of study. Children of nowadays are exposed with aboundance of materials that assist their comrehension of the world so that futher their deeper explore of the society. Our children generation will lead our society to a more prospers and promising and harmonious community that we are imagined for thouds of years. The education system is making progress so that people are free from worring about insufficient education.

In conclusion, destiny of our society is not only dependen on the struggle of children but also adults and old generation are invloved. Only by combining all people can our society develop into a better world.Knowledge is updated everyday and people are making progress daily so that a more homoniours and promising society is taking place every day.

triumph…………

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