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Topic: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A teacher who is a serious and strict person is more effective in teaching than a teacher who is a humor and easygoing person.
Although there's(are) many different situations on cultivating students, based on different diciplines, I still strongly disagree that a strict teacher is more effective. Education is not restricting the children and force(forcing) them to do jobs, which they don't like or they have their own thoughts (on), there's(are) more aspects of initiating and inducting(inducing?).)
An easy going teacher could open students mind, and let them think or imagine, make them love the course or the major. After they've fasinated with what they are learing, they would have more motivations that generate from the bottom of their own will, it(those motivations?) won't come out by forcing them with orders and rules.
A humor teacher could make the course more interesting, because there're so many courses are obiously not very attractive, and often make ones who learn it(them) feel painful and miserable. A good teacher can change the aura of the class(I am not sure this is a correct expression.), student will have the image that connect with their facetious teacher, and their will would be more positive, which make them learn better.
Besides, the two kinds of teachers that the topic gave is not always black or white, a great teacher can achieve that(what does the word "that" refer ) they behave humor and interesting(you need adverbs here instead of adjective) in the class, make the boredom numbers and calculations vividly, while on the other hand, they also very serious and have their own strict rules. Students will love the charisma of the teacher (teachers) while they don't have guts to do homeworks casually.
A teacher, who's the delegate of the course, is the conductor of the class. Sometimes the most vital thing is not what to teach, but is how the (to)teach. It's like putting food into a baby's mouth, which way do you think would help? Tell him the percentage of every kind of nutrition he would get with a cold face, or just smile?
总结:
1. 定冠词用得不大对。
2. 习惯用逗号连接两个主句,这在英语中是不对的。要把其中一个变成从句,或者用and, but ,so等等连接
3. 建议同学多看些优秀的文章,同勉,加油
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