本帖最后由 lixinjiayou 于 2010-2-25 18:22 编辑
Should people live in the same place all of their live or move to another place frequently(加了这个frequently是不是就太明显篡改的题目的意思?)? Considering this question, some persons may well prefer to live in the same place since there would be various remorable(表达什么意思?) things. While I would like to move to another place following the feeling of my heart.
Admittedly, there is a series of reasons for people to choose live in the city or country lastingly. The city would have the kinds of familiar things and people who are valuable for us. What is more, if you have a good job, it would also be a reason for you to live(加个there,不然就是活着的意思了^_^). However, moving to another place, in some degree, means a new beginning when we left unhappy things and perpare
(prepare)for a new life. Common sense informs us that the effective way of forgetting before(换成the past) would be scaping. Thus, moving to another place frequently can give me an oppotimistic(optimistic) attitude towards my life.+ v2 i# b* Q' |: K
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Secondly, It would provide you much opportunity to make new friends. We can learn much from these friends and also they will beome(become) a part of my life. Furthermore, I can change my job and hence work(in)
a different company with different people. All of these advantages would be of benefit for me to increase(experience不好说increase吧,改成enrich) my experience. In other words, living in modern society, people have to possess(换成acquire) the ability of getting well with different persons in a short time. From this angle, moving to another place, working with differnet, feelling cultures of differnet companies, all of these can exert positive effect on people’s growth.. P% _. a5 H9 p' q* h0 W
Lastly, living in the highly compitive era, people have little time of opportunities to travel. To some content(应该是extent吧), the process of choosing a place to live in is also a process of seeking a dream place which has beautiful scenary, historical sites, delicious food and so forth. This is to say, people can find a perfect excuse for themselves to relax and enjoy the beautiful nature. One of my dream is possessing my own motor home. So I can enjoy living in my motor home and travelling to different cities, without any worries, that is a real happy life.* s- C. [+ o. A
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Summarily, I agree that some people like to live in the same place all of their live, also I can understand them as the old place would have sorts of reasons from them to live. Nevertheless, I prefer moving to a new place, which can enrich my social experience, make me enjoy beautiful nature and forget any unhappy things.
呵呵作者的拼写错误比较多哦,有的就没有纠正了啦……我想你是不是在规定时间掐时间完成的呢?呵呵我是用word编写的啦
分论点是不是过于散了呢,或许抓住一个论点详细的写就会好很多呢? |