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发表于 2010-9-22 16:42:03 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

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发表于 2010-9-22 21:41:31 |只看该作者

9月23日作业

Education is primary and essential for any nation to improve its comprehensive national power. How to improve the quality of education is an interesting topic. In my opinion I am not agree with such view that the best way to improve the quality of education is to increase teacher’s salaries. Education includes many elements such as basic facilities, study materials, teachers and so on. To improve quality of education we should consider more aspects besides teacher’s salaries. The best way to do this is to carry out a complete set of comprehensive resolutions which contain rising salaries, equipment of basic facilities and some others.

Increasing teacher’s salaries will not give any benefit to basic facilities for schools. Basic facilities are always the limitation of education. This problem is not serious in the developed areas of China but it did lower the progress of education in many developing areas in our country. Nowadays many schools are still poorly equipped in western China and many students can’t even have enough classrooms to study in. These facilities are the prerequisites for education activities, which means more and more supply of government should be prepared for these poor areas.

Learning materials is another issue which should be considered. Learning materials containing basic sciences and other common sense courses are one of the core elements of education. What the teachers teach and what the students learn are all defined by these courses. In these days many countries have renewed the courses to make the materials more efficient and interesting. Reducing outdate materials and increasing update ones would be greatly helpful to improve efficiency of education.

Otherwise, it is easy to see that increasing salaries of teacher is the first step to improve quality of education but not the all. Needless to say, teachers play a very important role in education. The quality of teacher decides the quality of education. Training, decent salaries and advanced management will make this part more active and racially improve the quality of education. Government should offer opportunities to training teachers and build up advanced management system which will stimulate teachers to do their jobs well.

Based on discussion above, it is safe to say that the best way to improve quality of education is to implement a set of comprehensive resolutions, rather than any one of them.

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发表于 2010-9-24 09:42:28 |只看该作者

小猴子改好拉··

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发表于 2010-9-25 21:27:48 |只看该作者

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Advertising has taken an important part in our daily life nowadays. Advertises are shown on TV, movies and internet, varying from traditional media to new-emerged media. It is no doubt that advertising has changed our thought in every aspects, among which eating habits is. The advertising, taking sorts of food to final consumers, redefine the items of our diets and affect our habits of eating. However advertise is not the most important cause of unhealthy eating habits, it is just a tool by which food cooperation offer their products to meet the requirement of consumers.

Unhealthy eating habits can be simply divided into two categories, one is causing by the diet and the other is causing by disorder. Nowadays more and more fast food supplied by food stores is emerged to adapt the rapid pace of work. Fast food has loose kinds of food in consumers’ diet but it actually make dinners more convenient and easier. Such as in Changsha, most white-collars have their breakfast and lunch just in their office. But there is few cooperation can offer facility for food preparation, which makes them refer to fast food. That means meals are always rapid and simple. When they chose their fast food for meals they tend to the food with brands they ever saw or heard in advertisement. Hence it is definite that the advertising just influents decides of consumers but won’t change their requirement.

Another factor of unhealthy eating habits is disorder of meals. People who don’t care about their bodies always make themselves hungry for several hours till they have spare times from interesting activities. This will do less good to their health and is far away from the affecting of advertising.

Advertising gives some advantage for food supply. But it is just a tool and has no power to change our eating habits. It can and only can accelerate habits forming during our daily life.

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发表于 2010-9-26 00:55:17 |只看该作者

仅个人观点，不妥处可讨论。

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发表于 2010-10-1 17:55:06 |只看该作者

Advertising has taken an important part in our daily life nowadays. Advertises(这个是动词啊) are shown on TV, movies and internet, varying from traditional media to new-emerged（nice） media. It(there is) is no doubt that advertising has changed our thought in every aspects, among which eating habits is(这里用is不太对吧，可以用incorporating). The advertising, taking sorts of food to final consumers, redefine the items of our diets and affect our habits of eating. However advertise（不能用原型） is not the most important cause of unhealthy eating habits, it is just a tool by which food cooperation（s） offer their products to meet the requirement（s） of consumers.; D. {* f: ~+ ?; m

0Unhealthy eating habits can be simply divided into two categories, one is causing（caused） by the diet and the other is causing by disorder. Nowadays more and more fast food supplied by food stores is emerged（这里主动比较好） to adapt the rapid pace of work. Fast food has loose kinds of food in consumers’ diet but it actually make dinners more convenient and easier. Such as in Changsha, most white-collars have their breakfast and lunch just in their office. But there is few cooperation（s） can offer facility for food preparation（语病！！！can offer应改为offering之类的）, which makes them refer to fast food. That means meals are always rapid and simple. When they chose their fast food for meals they tend to the food with brands they ever saw or heard in advertisement. Hence it is definite that the advertising just influents decides of consumers but won’t change their requirement.* X2 W2 O2 m* S, c
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Another factor of unhealthy eating habits is （the）disorder of meals. People who don’t care about their bodies always make themselves hungry for several hours till they have spare times（s去掉） from interesting activities. This will do less good to their health and is far away from the affecting of advertising（这里可以再详细阐述下）.
Advertising gives some advantage for（感觉用to更习惯些） food supply. But it is just a tool and has no power to change our eating habits. It can and only can accelerate habits forming during our daily life.

楼主准备什么时候考托福呢？是大学生不？我觉得文章挺流畅的，不过写好之后要细细检查下哈~加油加油~肯定会有不少的进步~字数可以再多些。

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