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发表于 2011-7-7 08:34:00 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

对于新G每个短文下面的要求感觉太模糊了，找不到重点捏，写起来没什么差别呀？
举例子说吧，这是第5个和159个，短文内容差不多，但是要求不一样，请问一下写作重点是什么？？？？？

5.On Balmer Island, where mopeds serve as a popular form of transportation, the population increases to 100,000 during the summer months. To reduce the number of accidents involving mopeds and pedestrians, the town council of Balmer Island should limit the number of mopeds rented by the island's moped rental companies from 50 per day to 25 per day during the summer season. By limiting the number of rentals, the town council will attain the 50 percent annual reduction in moped accidents that was achieved last year on the neighboring island of Seaville, when Seaville's town council enforced similar limits on moped rentals."

Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the recommendation is likely to have the predicted result. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.
这个是在说这个建议怎么怎么样

159.The population on Balmer Island increases to 100,000 during the summer months. To reduce the number of accidents involving mopeds and pedestrians, the town council of Balmer Island plans to limit the number of mopeds rented by each of the island's six moped rental companies from 50 per day to 30 per day during the summer season. Last year, the neighboring island of Torseau enforced similar limits on moped rentals and saw a 50 percent reduction in moped accidents. We predict that putting these limits into effect on Balmer Island will result in the same reduction in moped accidents."

Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the prediction and the argument on which it is based are reasonable. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the prediction.
这个又在说prediction怎么怎么样的

单看要求也大概能明白要写的是什么，但是自己总结一下写起来还是一样的，求指点，谢谢～～

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发表于 2011-7-10 00:57:58 |只看该作者

行文套路上偶觉得木有差别...the recommendation is likely to have the predicted result和the prediction and the argument on which it is based are reasonable，这两句话所表达的是一个意思，我觉得LZ有点过于去抠字眼了

其表述差别的原因在于：
第一篇中

By limiting the number of rentals, the town council will attain the 50 percent annual reduction in moped accidents that was achieved last year on the neighboring island of Seaville, when Seaville's town council enforced similar limits on moped rentals.

第二篇中

Last year, the neighboring island of Torseau enforced similar limits on moped rentals and saw a 50 percent reduction in moped accidents. We predict that putting these limits into effect on Balmer Island will result in the same reduction in moped accidents.

这两句话的排列顺序所致。第一篇是给出建议和推测，然后引证例子，使观点具有说服力。第二篇基由例子来预测。

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