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发表于 2005-7-27 10:19:40 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
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Education encourages students to question and criticize, and therefore does little to promote social harmony.

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Education makes every of us wisdom and learned because it provides our ability of question and criticize. The arguer claims that will do little to promote social harmony. Common sense tells us that this view is something like too extreme.

Firstly, the development of the human being can not proceed without education. Education brings to us not only the accumulation of the knowledge but also the ability of questioning. As a famous philosopher ever said (and I paraphrase)," I think, therefore I am "The ability of questioning and criticizing is the basic quality of a person to be one has its own contribution to the society, such as Einstein, Bruno and Galileo. Those famous scientists all draw their new views from questioning the former ones.

Does this do little to promote social harmony? In short range, it seems to be true. Such as Einstein's theory of gravity, Bruno's heliocentric theory and Galileo's free fall law, all of these even caused big controversy in their times. Einstein's Nobel Prize was not for his theory of gravity; Bruno was sentenced to death for his belief and Galileo had also be in prison for a long time.

On the other hand, in the long run, these questioning and criticizing thoughts have done a lot of contributions to our social harmony. Narrowly speaking, the theory of gravity has maintained the balance beauty of physics: through a serial of symmetric change, the concept of low velocity can be turn to the concept of high velocity which approaches the velocity of light. Generally speaking, these theories promote the development of the science and hence make our whole society progress.

Students who have the ability to question and criticize can think without the restriction of the author's views. If only the springs can take out the opinion to oppose our, the society can progress. As a famous president of America had ever said (and I paraphrase) "Yesterday's answer are inadequate for today's problems –just as today's solution can not fit tomorrow's need" So we should have the spirit of criticizing to accept the knowledge from our precedents. And only through questioning and criticizing, our society could develop with harmony.

To sum up, the ability of questioning and criticizing which the education brings to the students is very important to the social development. Without it our society will be lost into a marsh and can not proceed, let alone harmony.


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发表于 2005-7-27 20:26:48 |只看该作者

看得较草,小拍一下

楼主黙认得思维应该是:social development=social harmony,不管是论述还是所举的例子,都论证的是社会发展,而不是和谐。所以我总觉得还缺几句,用来论述什么是harmony,什么能促进它。若不加上总让我觉得很牵强的样子。

三四两段的观点蛮不错,把时间考虑进来了。


Does this do little to promote social harmony? In short range, it seems to be true. Such as Einstein's theory of gravity, Bruno's heliocentric theory and Galileo's free fall law, all of these even caused big controversy in their times.Einstein's Nobel Prize was not for his theory of gravity爱因斯坦的例子可以,但没得诺奖就不和谐了吗?诺奖又不是和谐奖。直接说该理论引起很大争论就行了吧,我想;Bruno was sentenced to death for his belief and Galileo had also be in prison for a long time.

If only the springs can take out the opinion to oppose our, the society can progress. 这句没看懂。As a famous president of America had ever said (and I paraphrase) "Yesterday's answer are inadequate for today's problems –just as today's solution can not fit tomorrow's need" 好像不太能论证,只能作位背景介绍的感觉

个人感觉啦,欢迎讨论

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发表于 2005-7-28 11:25:04 |只看该作者
提纲列出来!~~

     你整篇逻辑结构很乱的,自己先整理一下思路,要给人清晰的感觉才可以的~~


你举的例子不少,但是不太能证明你的论点,语法错误也不少,再别人批的时候最好把自己能找出的语法错误都找出来改好再说~~
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