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writing(Class):Some students like classes where teachers lecture (do all of the talking) in class. Other students prefer classes where the students do some of the talking. Which type of class do you prefer? Give specific reasons and details to support your choice.

20：06—20:39(限时没成功……)
To again more and more knowledge, we will listen to the teachers very carefully in the class. Throughout my experience of studying, teachers could be divided into two categories: some teachers like to express their knowledge and their own opinion to the students, while others would like to invite students into discussion. Based on my own experiences, I prefer classes where the students do some of the talking.

To begin with, the classes students could join into may benefit for the students to absorb the knowledge. Firstly, statistics basing on several scientific researches are showing that when children and younger are both speaking and listening, they could remember more things than only listening others. This is because speaking and listening at the same time could mobilize people’s brain more effectively. Moreover, continuous discussion requires students always pay attention to what teachers saying, which is helpful to avoid students getting away from the classes.

In addition, classes where the students do some of the talking will improve the quality of teaching. On the aspect of teachers, they will prepare the classes more carefully considering the students’ talking which would happen in the classes. Teachers will do their best to rich the content of the class and avoid dropping some contents which students could ask or talk. And also, if students have some questions about the classes, they can let the teachers know immediately through the talking to teachers. Obviously, on the contrary, in classes where teachers lecture students have rare opportunities to ask questions.

Admittedly, not all classes are suitable to let student do some of the talking. For example, some classes of basic knowledge are fit for teachers lecture in whole class, such as mathematics, English, and so on so forth. In these case, the knowledge has little room to challenge, because their principle is proved to be tureth by many scientists. So, the way of letting students do parts of talking should be taken in some classes which have much analyzable knowledge.

To sum up, if we can use the teaching methods reasonable, the quality of teaching and the scores of students could enhance greatly.

speaking(X月XX号机经):
1. Describe a social or political celebration event in your culture.
Spring festival the most important celebration event in our culture
All the family will come together and eat some delicious food. In the north, we eat dumplings. Sharp like money in the ancient time, having the meaning of people will be wealthy in the coming year.
Also great party and program on TVs
Firework at the mid-night
In most time, we can talk and play happy games all the night.2. Should governments finance the construction of museum and theater?
Well, I think governments should finance the construction of museum and theater.
M and t could enrich the spare time of residents. Improve level of whole culture
Benefit the economy by bring along some other program beside them, such as more show could bring more tickets-income.

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CRACK 9T小组第9次作业----holding

writing(Class):Some students like classes where teachers lecture (do all of the talking) in class. Other students prefer classes where the students do some of the talking. Which type of class do you prefer? Give specific reasons and details to support your choice.

20：06—20:39(限时没成功……)
To again more and more(more) knowledge, we will (should)listen to the teachers very carefully (carefully)in the class. Throughout my experience of studying(from process of learning), teachers could be divided into two categories: some teachers like to express their knowledge and their own opinions to the students, while others would like(trend) to invite students into discussion. Based on my own experiences, I prefer classes where the students do some of the talking.
我个人感觉如果单词换成括号里面的词的话,会使文章更通顺些.

To begin with, the classes students could join into may(去掉语气强些) benefit for the students to absorb the knowledge. Firstly, statistics basing(based) on several scientific researches are showing that when children and younger are both speaking and listening, they could remember more things than only listening others. This is because speaking and listening at the same time could mobilize people’s brain more effectively. Moreover, continuous discussion requires students always pay attention to what teachers saying(say), which is helpful to avoid students getting away(更标准的词distraacting) from the classes.

两个支持论点材料, 1 统计表明 2是一个细节都相当的不错
In addition, classes where the students do some of the talking will improve the quality of teaching. On the aspect of teachers, they will prepare the classes more carefully considering the students’ talking which would happen in the classes. Teachers will do their best to rich the content of the class and avoid dropping some contents which students could ask or talk. And also, if students have some questions about the classes, they can let the teachers know immediately through the talking to teachers. (不通呀) they can let the teachers know immediately through the talking that whether students have grasp the gist content of lecture or not) Obviously, on the contrary, in classes where teachers lecture students have rare opportunities to ask questions. (啥个意思）

这里指出了classes where the students do some of the talking are beneifical to teachers. 1 offer a chance to teacher get good feedback from students. 2 enhance the quality of teaching such as enriching the content in classes.
结构还好，注意下句子的结构和句子间的衔接

Admittedly, not all classes are suitable to let student do some of the talking. For example, some classes of basic knowledge are fit for teachers lecture in whole class, such as mathematics, English, and so on so forth. In these case（cases）, the knowledge has little room to challenge, because their principle is proved to be tureth by many scientists. So, the way of letting students do parts of talking should be taken in some classes which have much analyzable knowledge.

稍微让步　指出反面　使文章论证显的全面和饱满

To sum up, if we can use the teaching methods reasonable, the quality of teaching and the scores of students could enhance greatly.

总体不错　文章结构没问题　
但要注意下细节问题　比如句子和单词

speaking(X月XX号机经):
1. Describe a social or political celebration event in your culture.
Spring festival the most important celebration event in our culture
All the family will come together and eat some delicious food. In the north, we eat dumplings. Sharp like money in the ancient time, having the meaning of people will be wealthy in the coming year.
Also great party and program on TVs Firework at the mid-night
In most time, we can talk and play happy games all the night.

2. Should governments finance the construction of museum and theater?
Well, I think governments should finance the construction of museum and theater.
M and t could enrich the spare time of residents. Improve level of whole culture
Benefit the economy by bring along some other program beside them, such as more show could bring more tickets-income.

感觉应该用些逻辑词语　这样使说理或者描述更清晰（建议呀）

比如2 well, i think governments should finance the construction of museum and theater for several reasons.
Firstly, museum and theater could enrich the spare time of residents. people can visit museum and see movies in theater to spend their weekend time.
Secondly, them also improve level of whole culture.
Thirdly, these construction can also benefit the economiy of city. with the building of museum and theater, some other programs beside them will emerge supply people service. the money from tickets add income of city government.

用你材料总结下，别介意，我认为一个小的reason后面再加一，２句细节更好些．

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