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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing sports teaches people more lessons about the life.
When ask about advantages of sports, you may say sports do good to health, make firends with differnet people,relax body and so on. But if say playing sports teaches people more lessons about the life,it will magnify the the effort of the sports.I ,therefor,would like to say that there are myraid of approachs that contribute to the life.
One of the channels that is crucial to the leesons we learn from life is study in school.We go to school and start our formal study when we are six years old.We enrich our knowledg , improve our quailty and form our thought in school.At the same time,we not only learn the knowledge from teachers but also make friendswith other students.
According to a research from Youth Digest,almost 70% of people make friends fof life during their school time. After few years stduy ,we grow up and face the society.
Another significant way that is experience,we meet different things and everyday,maybe challenges or some opportunities.we should use the knowldge in our life.People always say practice makes prefect.More experiences we have, more wonderfulour life will be.Consequently,we will get For instance,Bessie Smith,my favorite singer, made a name for herself at a very young age.By 1923,she made her first record which sold thousands of copies.However,because of the economic depression,her
music become old-fashioned.her status of the musical world was moved.But Bessie kept writting songs and made moive with Armstrong,finally she came back to the
stage .Never,never,never give up.These experience make your life fill of excitement
and teach you the lessons which benefit all your life.
A third approach involve with ourselfves,that is we should summarize and learn from past .These knowledge and experiences make our life fill of excitement,but we need to recognize our mistakes and get rid of them.We can draw the lesson by summary of past.
As for me,I am used to write diary everyday and I always read the past diaries.These mistakes remind me and these success
encourage me.I can see what lessons I have taken and what progess I have made.
There are other channels we can get lessons about the life ,but these three of the most important ones. In summary,studyrich our knowledge,experiences wide our vision,summary make us progess.Playing sports also can teach us lessons about the life,
but that just a small part, and more approaches need for us to learn lessons.
这是我第一次写托福作文,请问楼主能否帮我修改下~我总觉得写得很奇怪~而且感觉偏题~怎么办~该如何改阿~~~~~~跪谢之~~~~~~~ |
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