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发表于 2009-2-25 22:48:57 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
TOPIC: ISSUE43 - "To be an effective leader, a public official must maintain the highest ethical and moral standards."
WORDS: 472          TIME: 00:45:00          DATE: 2009/2/25 22:04:59

Whether the highest ethical and moral standards are the required abilities of an effective leader, it is a complex problems, and I would like analyse this issue with three respects-- first one is that how to define "effective" in leadership; the other one, what are the necessary abilities of an effective leader; and the last one the status of ethical and moral standards.

At the beginning, I have a doubt at the entirely meaning of effective. Is it only meaning successful or an outstanding talent of every respects in one's own realm. In business area, an effective leader means he or she with a talent on pursue benefits and lead the system of company harmonious and efficient. In the political area, moreover, to define a leader, we always evaluate from the following respects the ability of handling the serious society problems, improving the the national status , stimulating economical progress, and even the moral quality of one's own. From this situation, we could have a fair point on "effective", not only a successful resulting to a leader is enough, but also we could evaluate with all-side respects.

This issue is about the political area, and this problem is also complex that we should discuss what the required abilities of a political leader. For instance, definitions of successful political leadership are mostly depending on how they obtain and use their power to make decisions with a significant influence of our society. When the resulting of policy is satisfied and with a further effect, we conclude this leader is effective and overlooked the other respects. Such a series of this kind evidences prove that, in fact, the most important characteristic of a leader is the ability of making a profitable decision for public and the whole human society.

However, in our modern society, only a scandal could destroy any superior politician even the most powerful groups. So that whether the moral standards of individuals especially the political leader is the most important quality over the other respects  including the above respect? Of course not. I concede that scandal is one of the most serious factors of a politician, but it only plays a role when the opposite groups want to attack him or the media review one's history. In most cases, the moral standards only have a effect on lead the public to a correct direction of moral development, and we always focus on the abilities of handling problems and leading country.

In sum, when we need to evaluate the leader, a detailed survey of entirely respects of he or she such as these abilities, here I want to cite a sentence of the present secretary of state  Hillary, the responsibility of the leader in modern society is three D, defence, diplomacy, and development, however, a good ethical and moral standards are also necessary.
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发表于 2009-2-27 20:06:53 |只看该作者
Whether the highest ethical and moral standards are the required abilities of an effective leader, it is a complex problems, and I would like analyse this issue with three respects-- first one is that how to define "effective" in leadership; the other one, what are the necessary abilities of an effective leader; and the last one the status of ethical and moral standards.这样子定内容就有点偏了啊,对effective的定义最好插到每种情况中写,主要还是要针对moral standard

At the beginning, I have a doubt at the entirely meaning of effective. Is it only meaning successful or an outstanding talent of every respects in one's own realm. In business area, an effective leader means he or she with a talent on pursue benefits and lead the system of company harmonious and efficient. In the political area, moreover, to define a leader, we always evaluate from the following respects the ability of handling the serious society problems, improving the the national status , stimulating economical progress, and even the moral quality of one's own. From this situation, we could have a fair point on "effective", not only a successful resulting to a leader is enough, but also we could evaluate with all-side respects.

This issue is about the political area(题目没有说是political area), and this problem is also complex that we should discuss what the required abilities of a political leader. For instance, definitions of successful political leadership are mostly depending on how they obtain and use their power to make decisions with a significant influence of our society. When the resulting of policy is satisfied and with a further effect, we conclude this leader is effective and overlooked the other respects. Such a series of this kind evidences prove that, in fact, the most important characteristic of a leader is the ability of making a profitable decision for public and the whole human society.前面定义应该到这段里写

However, in our modern society, only a scandal could destroy any superior politician even the most powerful groups. So that whether the moral standards of individuals especially the political leader is the most important quality over the other respects  including the above respect?So that are the moral standards of individuals especially the political leader the more important quality than other respects  including the above mentioned ones?  Of course not. I concede that scandal is one of the most serious factors of a politician, but it only plays a role when the opposite groups want to attack him or the media review one's history. In most cases, the moral standards only have a effect on lead the public to a correct direction of moral development, and we always focus on the abilities of handling problems and leading country.写丑闻有点偏题了

In sum, when we need to evaluate the leader, a detailed survey of entirely respects of he or she such as these abilities, here I want to cite a sentence of the present secretary of state  Hillary, the responsibility of the leader in modern society is three D, defence, diplomacy, and development, however, a good ethical and moral standards are also necessary.
   唯一有的就是单纯的好奇心
   结果就是 他认为是好的东西
   就毫不掩饰的赞美 完全敞开心胸
   也就是说 这家伙太危险了
   对他而言 什么鉴定的眼光根本没有

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