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发表于 2009-5-25 22:32:44 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

Admittedly, pragmatic behavior is taking the essential role in some realm of life. But, that do not mean we could not ignore the significance of idealistic like the speaker claims.

Undoubtedly, in considering the social the pragmatic behavior is more important.
Because there are a lot of social problems in our sociality, like people in a society are hungry and out of work or lack the basic skills to survive. All the problems are exit in recent sociality, not idealistic thing, when we realize this we would rather take practical measures such as create jobs, afford extra welfare, strengthen construct the basic installation than do idealistic thing like support art . After all, what a starving person would prefer a good paint to a bad meal.
When it comes to academic, we have to admit that pragmatic behavior is also important. Especially in area of science because, all inventions were need to own to its practicality.

However, the idealistic bring the strong motivation to the scientist, which render them to research these area -they ever know about it and help them overcome problem and innovate. What’s more, in the area of
literature idealistic is more important than pragmatic behavior. As Arnold Bennett says “There can be no knowledge without emotion. We may be aware of a truth, yet until we have felt its force, it is not ours. To the cognition of the brain must be added the experience of the soul.”
Without idealistic the literature just literature, Renaissance have no means and Monet will never be a painter.
When it comes to business world, we need to realize that both significance of idealistic and pragmatic. Commerce is full of chances and trap so that without a clear direction the company would be lost. Idealistic as a Lighthouse, which can help a company find the direction and pragmatic behavior as a boat, which transport a company to destination. In the company an idealistic as a leadership which did not care more about short-term profit than long-term improvement of company. Certainly, some practical staffs also needed in company to make the instruction of leadership come true. So, without either pragmatic behavior or idealistic the company could not improve or survive.

In general, even though someone tend to succeed in practical way, but the significance of idealistic should not be neglected. For the ultimate success, we need to combine pragmatic behavior with
idealistic.

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发表于 2009-5-25 22:35:18 |只看该作者

Admittedly, pragmatic behavior is taking the essential role in some realm of life. But, that do not mean we could not ignore the significance of idealistic like the speaker claims.
Undoubtedly, in considering the social the pragmatic behavior is more important.  Because there are a lot of social problems in our sociality, like people in a society are hungry and out of work or lack the basic skills to survive. All the problems are exit in recent sociality, not idealistic thing, when we realize this we would rather take practical measures such as create jobs, afford extra welfare, strengthen construct the basic installation than do idealistic thing like support art . After all, what a starving person would prefer a good paint to a bad meal.
When it comes to academic, we have to admit that pragmatic behavior is also important. Especially in area of science because, all inventions were need to own to its practicality. However, the idealistic bring the strong motivation to the scientist, which render them to research these area -they ever know about it and help them overcome problem and innovate. What’s more, in the area of literature idealistic is more important than pragmatic behavior. As Arnold Bennett says “There can be no knowledge without emotion. We may be aware of a truth, yet until we have felt its force, it is not ours. To the cognition of the brain must be added the experience of the soul.”  Without idealistic the literature just literature, Renaissance have no means and Monet will never be a painter.
When it comes to business world, we need to realize that both significance of idealistic and pragmatic. Commerce is full of chances and trap so that without a clear direction the company would be lost. Idealistic as a Lighthouse, which can help a company find the direction and pragmatic behavior as a boat, which transport a company to destination. In the company an idealistic as a leadership which did not care more about short-term profit than long-term improvement of company. Certainly, some practical staffs also needed in company to make the instruction of leadership come true. So, without either pragmatic behavior or idealistic the company could not improve or survive.
   In general, even though someone tend to succeed in practical way, but the significance of idealistic should not be neglected. For the ultimate success, we need to combine pragmatic behavior with idealistic.

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发表于 2009-5-28 11:43:19 |只看该作者

Admittedly, pragmatic behavior is taking the essential role in some realm of life. But, that do （But it doesn't）we could not ignore the significance of idealistic like the speaker claims.
Undoubtedly, in considering the social （the brutal competition in society), the pragmatic behavior is more important. Because there are a lot of social problems in our sociality, like(like 在举例子时不引导句子，建议补充一下such as, for example,like三个词在举例子时的用法。此句可以用for example,)people in a society are hungry and out of work or lack the basic skills to survive. All the problems are exit in recent sociality, not idealistic thing, when we realize this we would rather take practical measures such as create jobs, afford extra welfare, strengthen construct the basic installation than do idealistic thing like support art . After all, what a starving person would prefer a good paint to a bad meal. 表达有问题哦。改成How could people expect a starving person to choose a fine paint but give up a bad meal?是不是更好？

我是先改了你的argument再改issue的。
这篇issue举例很到位。阐述得很好。从第一段以后看下来一路清晰畅通，没太多要改动的。除了第一段的一些不太清晰的表达。下面的表达也都很好。
观点平衡也控制的很好。继续加油！

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