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发表于 2009-6-18 22:56:28 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

好纠结的写完这篇，字数貌似不够
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DATE: 2009/6/18 15:14:10

Observation, which is a scientific method of research, has long been an issue which is debated among all walks of the life in contemporary society. Some people argue that there is no such thing as absolutely objective observation and all observation is subjective which is always guided by the observer's expectations or desires. I fully sanction that the former view is reasonable while the speaker fails to take into account other evidence to prove that the latter is true.
To begin with, it is universal known that purely objective observation does not exist in almost every region of the world. Furthermore, given that we humans have no enough time and energy to observe every thing which we want to recognize. What it meant by this is that most of our observations stem from others' narrative contents which is packed with their expectations and desires. Therefore, our observation could be more or less filled with subjective minds.
Moreover, human beings, as emotional animals, could be affected inevitably by subjective minds. Hence, when observers place more emphasize on behavior they expect to find, they would take error measures to observe objective subjects. For instance, a stubborn view ----geocentric theory, had an impact on residents' observations for hundred years by the inquisition and the result was that the citizens insisted on recognizing the phenomenon that the Sun is moved around the Earth. As a consequence, absolutely objective observation is nothing more than a fantasy for the human beings.
On the other hand, there is no doubt that observation is influenced by the observer’s subjective or objective understandings and desires. However, it does not mean that all observation is subjective. Relatively observation should be taken into account when we talk about science. It is vital significant that the information about the surrounding world and the objects of study should be accurate and as reliable as possible. The science methods conform a cycling----“construction, query, overthrow, construction”. It is obvious that in this procedure each scientists should obtain a relatively observation to measure scientific information.
Meanwhile, with rapid urbanization occurring everywhere, the subjective or objective observations catch up with the pace of the progress and development of society. What will happen is that the understanding of the same things could be innovated and more and more objective observations of these things would be generated. Consider the Darwin’s theory of evolution as an example, person in our society tended to believe that we humans’ ancestors are pithecanthropus after observing many fossils since the fifth decades of twentieth century.
In sum, it is said that relative and objective are two opposite definitions in the theory of materialism, notwithstanding, most of observation is relative and sometimes which is always guided by the observer's expectations or desires. We humans should keep the balance between objective and subjective observation, and particularly in the realm of science.

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发表于 2009-6-21 11:26:32 |只看该作者

Observation, which is a scientific method of research, has long been an issue which is debated among all walks of the life in contemporary society. Some people argue that there is no such thing as absolutely objective observation and all observation is subjective which is always guided by the observer's expectations or desires. I fully sanction that the former view is reasonable while the speaker fails to take into account other evidence to prove that the latter is true（想表达有条件性的同意？最后半句话怎么感觉像在写Argument呢~）.

To begin with, it is universal known that purely objective observation does not exist in almost every region of the world. Furthermore, given that we humans have no enough time and energy to observe every thing which we want to recognize. What it meant by this is（前后意思一致么~想表达借鉴别人的或受别人的思想影响？） that most of our observations stem from others' narrative contents which is packed with their expectations and desires. Therefore, our observation could be more or less filled with subjective minds.

Moreover, human beings, as emotional animals, could be affected inevitably by subjective minds. Hence, when observers place more emphasize on behavior they expect to find（表达？）, they would take error measures to observe objective subjects. For instance, a stubborn view ----geocentric theory, had an impact on residents' observations for hundred years by the inquisition and the result was that the citizens insisted on recognizing the phenomenon that the Sun is moved around the Earth. As a consequence, absolutely objective observation is nothing more than a fantasy for the human beings.（第一句是人受制于主观思想。第二句人过于强调expect to find就会错误的衡量观察的客体。举例是人们受地心说的影响坚持认为太阳绕着地球转。结论是完全客观的观察室不可能的。怎么觉得。。。。这几句话之间没有必有必然联系？还是表达的？~~？）
On the other hand, there is no doubt that observation is influenced by the observer’s subjective or objective understandings and desires. However, it does not mean that all observation is subjective. Relatively observation should be taken into account when we talk about science. It is vital significant that the information about the surrounding world and the objects of study should be accurate and as reliable as possible. The science methods conform a cycling----“construction, query, overthrow, construction”. It is obvious that in this procedure each scientists should obtain a relatively observation to measure scientific information这句话想说明什么呢~與中心句的關係 ⊙﹏⊙b汗，可能是理解问题，望LZ点拨.

Meanwhile, with rapid urbanization occurring everywhere, the subjective or objective observations catch up with the pace of the progress and development of society. What will happen is that the understanding of the same things could be innovated and more and more objective observations of these things would be generated. Consider the Darwin’s theory of evolution as an example, person in our society tended to believe that we humans’ ancestors are pithecanthropus after observing many fossils since the fifth decades of twentieth century.

In sum, it is said that relative and objective are two opposite definitions in the theory of materialism, notwithstanding, most of observation is relative and sometimes which is always guided by the observer's expectations or desires. We humans should keep the balance between objective and subjective observation, and particularly in the realm of science.

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发表于 2009-6-22 00:57:07 |只看该作者

本帖最后由 kren_crazy 于 2009-6-22 01:02 编辑

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好纠结的写完这篇，字数貌似不够
WORDS: 480
TIME: 01:08:50
DATE: 2009/6/18 15:14:10

Observation, which is a scientific method of research, has long been an issue which is debated among all walks of the life in contemporary society. Some people argue that there is no such thing as absolutely objective observation and all observation is subjective which is always guided by the observer's expectations or desires. I fully sanction that the former view is reasonable while the speaker fails to take into account other evidence to prove that the latter is true.
To begin with, it is universal known that purely objective observation does not exist in almost every region of the world. Furthermore, given that we humans have no enough time and energy to observe every thing which we want to recognize. What it meant by this is that most of our observations stem from others' narrative contents which is packed with their expectations and desires. Therefore, our observation could be more or less filled with subjective minds.
Moreover, human beings, as emotional animals, could be affected inevitably by subjective minds. Hence, when observers place more emphasize on behavior they expect to find（这里表达的是什么？行为？or想象？）, they would take error measures to observe objective subjects. For instance, a stubborn view ----geocentric theory, had an impact on residents' observations for hundred years by the inquisition and the result was that the citizens insisted on recognizing the phenomenon that the Sun is moved around the Earth. As a consequence, absolutely objective observation is nothing more than a fantasy for the human beings.
On the other hand, there is no doubt that observation is influenced by the observer’s subjective or objective understandings and desires. However, it does not mean that all observation is subjective. (这应该是的论点吧？) Relatively observation should be taken into account when we talk about science. It is vital significant that the information about the surrounding world and the objects of study should be accurate and as reliable as possible. The science methods conform a cycling----“construction, query, overthrow, construction”. It is obvious that in this procedure each scientists should obtain a relatively observation to measure scientific information.
你这里的“should”是你的愿望，并没有说明measuring scientific information 是客观的，证据不很cogent.

Meanwhile, with rapid urbanization occurring everywhere, the subjective or objective observations catch up with the pace of the progress and development of society. What will happen is that the understanding of the same things could be innovated and more and more objective observations of these things would be generated. Consider the Darwin’s theory of evolution as an example, person in our society tended to believe that we humans’ ancestors are pithecanthropus after observing many fossils since the fifth decades of twentieth century.
In sum, it is said that relative and objective are two opposite definitions in the theory of materialism, notwithstanding, most of observation is relative and sometimes which is always guided by the observer's expectations or desires. We humans should keep the balance between objective and subjective observation, and particularly in the realm of science.

:O把发帖的格式写好依据 https://bbs.gter.net/thread-686856-1-1.html

no choice, but have to

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