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发表于 2012-7-31 20:04:36 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Teachers should give students homework every day.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answers.

Some people believe that it is good for students to do as more homework as possible to enhance what they have learned, so the teachers should give students homework every day. However, as far as I’m concerned, doing homework every day will affect students’ normal life and it is not good for the development of children. I believe that students should have their own time to do what they are interested after school.
To begin with, students need time to relax and refresh themselves, everyday homework will deprive them of the rights to rest and play with their friends. One of the most important factors in the work place is efficiency, compared to a tired person, the energetic and vigorous one can finish his or her work better and faster. Proper rest is of great importance to the efficient study of students as well, for it will help them renew themselves. If students are pushed to do homework every day, they will get tired and be fed up of learning. I remembered when I was a small child at primary school, my math teacher always left a lot of homework to us. And I felt quite desperate and often cried while doing homework. Therefore, students’ should have time to rest and relax.
Besides, students need time to develop their interests and talents, which is important to the healthy growth and future career of young people. As the advancement of the modern world, to command a certain skill can help the student to be unique and obtain more advantages over the fierce competition in the work place. What’s more, children’s potential can be greatly evoked if they have enough time to practice. If Zerkerberg only did homework every day, he wouldn’t be able to set up the Facebook company. It is possible that our world could become better due to these special talents, so as long they have time to develop their potential.
In the final, instead of leaving students homework every day, we should guide the students to find out their strong points as well as their interests, and encourage them to be creative by introducing some open questions. According to the recent reports of some high school in Beijing, which have tried the education for all-around development, students there have a lot chance to learn knowledge outside the books and to develop their own interests, and the outcome turns out to be very promising.
To conclude, I strongly believe that students shouldn’t be given homework every day. Instead of repeating what they have learned again and again, it is more useful and important to development their interests and talents, which is of great significance not only to their personal development, but also to the whole society.

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发表于 2012-8-6 09:35:46 |只看该作者

Teachers should give students homework every day. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answers.

Some people believe that it is good for students to do as much homework as possible to enhance what they have learned, so the teachers should give students homework every day. (I find this reasoning rather awkward because setting homework every day doesn't necessarily mean setting as much homework as possible..the frequency of homework is not related to the amount at all.) However, as far as I’m concerned, doing homework every day will affect students’ normal life and it is not good for the development of children. I believe that students should have their own time to do what they are interested in after school.(Again, this seems to actually go down on the train about 'students would have too much homework to do and therefore no personal time, if they are given homework every day' – but this is not necessarily true. It is absolutely possible for a teacher to set homework every day but each day he only sets 10 minutes worth of homework..)

To begin with, students need time to relax and refresh themselves, and/but everyday homework will deprive them of the rights to rest and play with their friends. One of the most important factors in the work place is efficiency. Compared to a tired person, the energetic and vigorous one can finish his or her work better and faster. Proper rest is of great importance to the efficient study of students as well, for it will help them renew themselves. If students are pushed to do homework every day, they will get tired and be fed up of learning. I remembered when I was a small child at primary school, my math teacher always left a lot of homework to us. And I felt quite desperate and often cried while doing homework. Therefore, students’ should have time to rest and relax.(Now I'm pretty sure that you've equated 'homework every day' with 'lots of homework every day'. As I said, 'homework every day' doesn't necessarily mean 'lots of homework every day' – so basically if all of your arguments rest on the assumption that 'homework every day' == 'lots of/too much homework every day', and never explained why you think it's proper to equate the two, you're just writing the wrong argument..)

Besides, students need time to develop their interests and talents, which is important to the healthy growth and future careers of young people. As the advancement of the modern world(I don't know who started this erroneous template sentence but you need a verb here, i.e. 'as the advancement of the modern world <verb>'. Otherwise this is not a proper sentence.), to command a certain skill can help the student to be unique and obtain more advantages over the fierce competition in the work place. What’s more, children’s potential can be greatly evoked if they have enough time to practice. If Zuckerberg only did homework every day, he wouldn’t be able to set up the Facebook company. (There, you said it yourself – if Zuckerberg only did homework every day..Doing homework every day is NOT the problem; ONLY doing homework every day and nothing else is – but these two are not the same thing!) It is possible that our world could become better due to these special talents, so as long they have time to develop their potential.

In the final ('final' as a noun doesn't mean 'finality'. Just use 'finally'.), instead of leaving students homework every day, we should guide the students to find out their strong points as well as their interests, and encourage them to be creative by introducing some open questions. (It's not like a teacher can't set open questions in homework, or must do something non-homework-y if he wants to introduce open questions..again, you've been making an assumption that doesn't really hold.) According to the recent reports of some high schools in Beijing, which have tried the education for all-around development, students there have a lot of chance to learn knowledge outside the books and to develop their own interests, and the outcome turns out to be very promising.

To conclude, I strongly believe that students shouldn’t be given homework every day. Instead of repeating what they have learned again and again, (But the homework doesn't necessarily need to be just repetitions of what the students learnt..homework can be fun and creative depending on how the teacher sets it..again you're having such a strong stereotype of 'homework' that it has completely impeded your ability to make realistic, sound arguments.) it is more useful and important to development their interests and talents, which is of great significance not only to their personal development, but also to the whole society.

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好吧我只能说我理解你的不愉快记忆但是你这是跟‘作业’二字有多大的仇才能让你全篇就在对homework every day各种无理由狂踩啊。。每天做作业不等于作业就会很多，也不等于就会只有做作业的时间没得干别的，更不等于完全是背书做练习题不可以有开放式问题启发思考，老师每天留一道十分钟的小组讨论题这也可以叫每天做作业啊。。你给‘每天作业’安上很多不好，但是又没有证明你这样安是合理的，全篇都是在硬把论据往论点上靠。。那我只能说你这写法就是典型的欲加之罪何患无辞了。。

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