task1,2都只能说45s,楼主说得太多了。。
T1
后面不太流利,估计只说45s的话楼主会说的更好。
The good leaders is the good ..不是are
good conduction是什么?后面说的是in什么atmosphere?
our mentor, a very humous lady, who can always take part in us and know...主句没动词。只要在 mentor 后面加一个is就好了。
T2
a coffee or a good restaurant前面没介词,加个in。
share...enjoy那句一句有两个动词,应该说成and enjoy
relax就行了,没有relaxable,feel right 是什么?
not a big fan of party 就行了,it is那句说成it is just a waste of time. On the party, people just drink a lot of wine....
楼主还要加油啊,这应该是一遍录成的吧,刚开始的时候可以不限时间准备,多录几遍。