issue+【GRE作文互助组】parrotking的作业帖---issue习作帖

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哈哈 第一篇GRE作文帖~~刚刚了解完GRE作文的一些东西，感觉类似于高中时考试英文作文的一些东西，只不过要求更加明确并且严格了，很高兴以前对待英文作文的态度都很认真，也对英文写作有点点小的总结，虽然有两年没写英文作文了。。。捡起来，总结起来应该还不错滴~~

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parrotking 发表于 2012-12-14 12:56
嗯 不过我还是感觉题目的意思是要探讨艺术家怎么样才能创造价值更高的艺术品呢~再多瞅瞅其他人的理解去~欢 ...

可以啊...如果你觉得这样写更能突出自己想法，OK啊...但一定要提供好的例子...

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kanping 发表于 2012-12-14 01:05
我是用中文理解的。如果一件艺术品是有价值，那么这件艺术品必须多数人能看明白“。大概是这样，就是说艺 ...

嗯 不过我还是感觉题目的意思是要探讨艺术家怎么样才能创造价值更高的艺术品呢~再多瞅瞅其他人的理解去~欢迎继续讨论~

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parrotking 发表于 2012-12-13 21:51
谢谢同学的修改~~
1、我很认可你给我的意见，艺术家的职责确实不是创造让人们能懂的艺术品，我想他们的职 ...

我是用中文理解的。如果一件艺术品是有价值，那么这件艺术品必须多数人能看明白“。大概是这样，就是说艺术品是否有价值的先决条件是多数人能否看明白。多数人能明白，就有价值，不明白就没有价值。所以我就觉得应该更多从艺术欣赏者角度去看。而且我想如果像你提到，艺术家奔着怎样能够创作出更有有价值的艺术品去做，可能会有更多时候会违反作者本身的创作意念。我想说是，价值是艺术欣赏人定的，不是艺术家创作出来的，艺术家创作的只有艺术作品。我是这样理解。

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kanping 发表于 2012-12-12 09:23
改了55，其他的我还没写就没改，到时候写提纲再交流一下

谢谢同学的修改~~
1、我很认可你给我的意见，艺术家的职责确实不是创造让人们能懂的艺术品，我想他们的职责应该是真实地记录、表达、反应大自然、人、社会等万事万物的片段，做到这点就够了~
2、我那个软件开发的例子看上去的确是不太合适呢，因为艺术品创作是个感性的过程，而软件开发是需要理性的控制，如果艺术品创作也跟软件开发一样的话，就不叫艺术品了呢~~嗯 这个例子我得好好琢磨下。
3、你说我的出发点是创作者角度，而题目的角度是欣赏着角度。然而我反复读了题目，还是觉得这个issue就是应该从创作者角度出发，怎么才能创造出价值更高的艺术品呢，因为你看题目的开头是“In order for ...... ”，当然是从创作者的角度出发才是“为了。。。。”，欢迎继续讨论

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parrotking 发表于 2012-12-11 23:29
12月11号的issue提纲和习作

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改了55，其他的我还没写就没改，到时候写提纲再交流一下

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12月11号的issue提纲和习作

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kihouka 发表于 2012-12-5 06:07
LZ加油，我刚开始复习作文

嗯 好的呢，我今天把最后一篇提纲更新了，并且写了完整的一篇issue，更新了附件呢~

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LZ加油，我刚开始复习作文

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12-4号的issue提纲，第一篇相当于习作了。。。思路和字句都出来了，最后一个提纲没来的及列~
明天完成

嗯完成了第一篇的正文，并且加上了第四篇的提纲，重新上传附件
21 Laws should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places. 法律应该根据不同的环境、时期和地点而足够灵活。
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
完整的文章：
        Our society is developing in a rather rapid speed, not only we people have to adapt to the speeding society, but also our companies, our countries and almost everything around us. Then, how can laws not be flexible enough to the society?
        Laws are made to solve many problems in our society, and if it is not suitable to our society, it can bring about many problems.
        Firstly, the authority of laws will be damaged. Laws are established by a group of authorized people in legislators which are enforced to any person under the jurisdiction of the government. And they are of great authority, if they are not suitable to the society and wrongly enforce people to do wrong things, people will suspect their authority. Thus, influencing the execution of laws.
Besides, the social development will be restricted. Population and Family Planning is suitable to China several years ago, for the population was booming. But nowadays, China’s population is aging at unprecedented levels, the law of Family planning is no more suitable to China. The laws will aggravate the aging problem. So the laws should be set by the time and circumstances.
Lastly, the interests of people will be harmed. Once there was a citizen, he was suspected by the police and brought to the police station. According to the newest laws he should be sent back home if policemen have no certification to charge him. If the law hasn’t been updated, the citizen even probably will be sent to prison without any reason.
       How important it is to making flexible laws! While it is quit difficult to considering all kinds of circumstances, times, and places.
       To begin with, people who making the laws are with limited knowledge, and it is difficult to think of every possible situation to make a certain law. Then come to the second, time limitation. And last but not least, Too much consideration on different situation also weaken the binding of the laws.
Just like the process of developing a software, we should explicit the laws binding range, considering its suitability under the range. Then, thinking various of situations to the law. And if possible, Adding an time limit, checking the binding of the law in time and modify it in time. Thus we will have flexible laws that promote our social evolution rapidly and healthily.

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liliudodo 发表于 2012-11-24 20:21
楼主写得比较小清新，加油

哎呀  我还要大大的加油哇

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楼主写得比较小清新，加油

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11-20号的作文，写了好久啊。。。将近1个小时了都。。。效率太低了。。。之后要提速啊。。。

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liliudodo 发表于 2012-11-20 21:43
已改，加油，我看好你

嗯 好的呢~谢谢批改~~我会加强词汇的积累和运用的~~感觉现在在积累gre词汇，但是没有掌握它们的用法，也不敢乱用呢~~