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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? A person's job has more effects on his or her happiness than this person's social life does. Use specific reasons to support your answer.
I don't agree with the opinion that a person's job has more effects on his or her happiness than this person's social life does.
First of glance, job seems to have more effects on person's happiness. As you know, job brings us money and satisfaction. Meanwhile if you have lots of money, you can buy anything you want, like BMW and house. Even if you want, you can have a tourist over the world. What's amazing! But as everyone knows, money is not omnipotence. Love, for instance, cannot get through purchasing. So I think social life is more important than money. For instance, we get lots of love from our parents since we came into the world. With our growing up, we meet our friends, who always approve of us no matter we are in good situations or get difficulties in life. We feel so happy because of the love, which is origin of our social relationship.
Secondly, the abundant social life gives us more surprise and make us have a good acquaintance of the world and the life. It's an amazing thing that we meet and talk with kinds of people. We never feel alone when we are take part in the social activity. It's much more fun than working in the office.  
Last but not least, the spirit is always essential factor in life. We could live without something, which is bought by money, but we could not live without spirit. For instance, I live in a poor family and I live in a rent house. But I feel happy because I have a harmony family and people I love. In addition, I get the opportunity to go to college through my own endeavor.  
That's why I don't agree with the opinion  
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我爱寄托爱我 发表于 2012-10-7 13:48
改的不是很仔细,有的地方是能力有限多包涵

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Flaviapq 发表于 2012-10-7 17:40
改完了,加油

Thx!

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我爱寄托爱我 发表于 2012-10-7 13:48
改的不是很仔细,有的地方是能力有限多包涵

谢谢,新手,还请多指教!

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秋雨荆州 发表于 2012-10-6 19:49
加油~

:),嗯,谢,能力欠缺很多!!

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改完了,加油
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