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blackswitch给改得很好,不重复同一问题
I strongly agree with the speaker's assertion that government should maintain publicly owned wilderness in their natural state, no matter how remote and accessible to only a few of people,because these areas have alot of benefits of doing history、biological and other formals of reserch. However,not only government, but others also have their own responsibility to protect these areas in that earth is our mutual mother.
保险的开头模式
To begin with, in such protect areas, it has a significant meaning for reserchers删 for reserch of biology and history of human etc. Reserchers are likely to continue to seek the answers of the origination and evoluation of life. Such things as chinese historian found our ancestor- anthropoid relic in a remote area called Zhou kou Mountain. And laterly studied their bones from doing this, we find how our organs evoluated, what habit we have before, and countinue studying of their ecological system which may have effect on protecting our living circumstance. If the government of that time don't do enough things to preserve wilderness and publicly owned areas.I believe主观性表达,尽量避免 that medical and our living standard would be worse than todays' Because of that we need to find more in-direct evidence to prove our evolution and biological understaning, and making benefits for them will be a big task what is costly and lastingly.
However, under the contemporary time, the firstly appeared in most people's eyes is money.With money, they can do anything, without money, they could do nothing. 这个作为TS有点糟糕,这个句子本身价值观就有问题They chase for their instant benefits, not to the long range. For instance, in most areas of contemporary china, a remote areas means building factories and commercial houses. It dramatically destroied these publicly owned wilderness areas. Deteroriating scientific reserch of historical and evolutional etc. It will be serious like what I mentioned before. Because in such remote areas things are retained of natural state, reserch will be a easy thing as reading books, is lost some pages books easy to read or the whole one easier to read? The answer absolutely is the latter one. Not only the government, but also the common people should have their responsibility, and long range to do protect these areas, dont build houses or factories on these areas, for our communal goals, to protect them for doing more benefical reserchs.
本段论述没有说服力,构不成因果关系,再想
Nevertheless, actually say, government, a policy making administration, their responsibility can not be omitted, if chinese government can put lots of investment on protecting it, the result would bebetter. In a village of Jilin Province. There is only 50000 dollars for protecting a wilderness area. Studing bilogical and evolution of us has a significant benefits, if we don't take good care of them, may next disappeared will be us as the same as some disappeared animals and ecological circumstance.
In sum, I stronly agree with the author's speaking, but not the government, also our common people should take our responsiblity to protect these areas, for our living, and future.
三段论述的部分都意犹未尽,blackswitch改得很中肯,仔细看看他的意见,主要问题都指出来了
参考提纲:
1)to the environment's sake, it is necessary to do so . leaving some pristine not polluted surrounding to the posterity, and remain the last resident to the prosecuted and protected animals.
(2)for the economic's sake, reserving the wildness can conserve some of the race that it may perhaps porfitive in the use beyond nowadays our research's ability for the future.
(3)in order to presever the widerness not to dig out to be a place of interest, there is no need to be comvenient to access. on the other hand, the more remote and unacessible it is, the more significance effect it can attain.
(4)so the government should keep an eye on the protection on the wildness |
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