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接楼上,偶觉得问题的关键不是说应该说一面还是两面,这个是勿庸置疑的,事务没有绝对性,所以你不能片面的只说其一,特别是两个观点都有余地的时候.
这个问题偶现在清楚一点了,所以老贴重提,说说想法.
看高分作文,老胡是这么说的:
写作时,应该注意审题:写作指令是"请就此讨论,"考生应当从正反两方面进行阐述,但如果写作指令是"你在多大程度上支持这一观点",考生就必须提出支持这个观点的几点理由.
★几类写作:
◆1.Discuss 类
样 例: The benefits of computers to modern society far outweigh the disadvantages .[B]Discuss.[/B]
写作策略: 两种写法:一种是两方面的,就是对题目提供的观点从相对的两个方面进行论述,一种是一边倒的写法,明确表明赞 同哪一方,并对其进行论证.
◆2.Problems+Reasons+Recommendations类
样 例:It's generally acknowledged that families are now not as close as they used to be.Give possible reasons and your recommendations.
写作策略:首段:现象描述
主体段:说明产生现象的理由和具体表现形式
结尾段:提出建议和措施.注意,建议措施不能只写一点,最好和正文中的理由一一对应,提出解决方式.至少给出两点建议.
◆3.Your Opinion类
样 例:Many people think that nowadays people are being subjected to more and more pressure in their work,and thus are having less and less time to relax.What's your opinion?
写作策略:首段:表明态度,让阅卷人知道你赞同的观点
主体段:一边倒的写法,单方面阐述,用具体的理由支持所提出的观点.[I][B]这类文章应尽量采取一边倒的写法,只能讲自己的观点如何,不要从两个方面去写.[/B] [/I]
◆4.[B]Agree or Disagree 类[/B] (同类型提示句:Do you argree or disagree,to what extent do you support this satatement,to what extent do you agree to disagree?)
样 例:It's often said that the subjects taught in schools are too academic in orientation and thati it would be more useful for children to learn about practical matters such as home management ,work and interpersonal skills .To what extent do you agree ro disagree?
写作策略:[I][B]此类和your opinion 很象,实质相同[/B] .[/I] your opinion类的文章常常会说I agree 或者I disagree"我同意/我不同意~~"两类文章布局思路没有大的差别,最后一段考生需要重申首段提出观点.
◆5.Advantages or Disadvantages类
托福常考题型.
样 例:With the increasing popularity of computers and caculators ,student literacy is decreasing dramatically.What are the positive and negtive effects the process fo science and technology has brought about?
写作策略:首段:设置场景
主体段:分两部分写,一部分写优点,一部分写缺点.
结尾段:走向折中的结论.
终于打完了,呜呜一个个打上去的:)我还给出了样例,因为都是真题,也便于大家理解.希望大家有所启示.总的来说,我觉得说得很清楚了.
[B]黑体是我想强调的.偶个人觉得斜体部分我不理解[/B] ,这就是当初我发此帖的原因,这是第二次看到这样的说法了.毕竟是名师如是说,所以我来征求大家意见以及对以上说法特别是斜体部分一面倒的理解.当然,这里一面倒,我想老胡的意思是写作重心偏向一方,而不是只写一方.这个问题,之前bqiana没有给我明确的答案.[B]However,这不过是一个思路指导,Agree or disagree应该仍是考察重点.大家可以不用完全遵循,落入俗套.[/B] |
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