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36"The greatness of individuals can be decided only by those who live after them, not by their contemporaries." 36． 只有后来人评价以前的人，而不应该同时代的人相互评价
The greatness of individuals cannot be appreciated by their contemporaries in large part is due to their outstanding talent and their transcendental intelligence which surpass the common cognition of general public and their peers.
Besides, to test the validity of theories, works and ideas of the great individuals need a long time even centuries.
In a democratic society, individuals have full free to express their ideas and show their unique talents and characters.

  The speaker assert that the greatness individuals made can be decided only by those who live after them, not by their contemporaries. However, I think the assertion is too extreme. Some greatness of individuals can be appeciated by people who live at present while the other cannot be decided by their contemporaries.
  In the kingdom of invention, the patent should be registerd as soon as possibel in order to prevent other people pirate it. Bell invented the telephone and registered the patent of phone, which is now widely used in every corner of the world. So why should he register the patent? The answer is obvious. The other people would be likely to use his invention to make profit. And this just indicate that his greatness, which is the invention of telephone, was appreciated at the beginnig. For instance, the bulb, invented by the great inventor—Edison, bring lights to our nights. It was one of great inventions in human history and Edison was well-known by this masterpiece at his lifetime even until now. The greatness of individuals can ususally be decided by those who live with them.
  Notwithstanding, the greatness individuals made may not always be understood by their contemporaries. We can consider some examples from the politics. Alaska is one of states in the United States. However, it was once belong to Russia and finally brought by the government of US. Many America could not understand why the government pay so much money to this “deserted and unfirtilized” land from Russian and the US government needed money because the Civil War has just finished. But a few years later people found oil and other minearl resources in Alaska. The decision made by the president is surely wise but it should take some time to test whether it is right or wrong. The people live at preset cannot tell earlier without a long effort to test.
  Sometimes the greatness of individual in the region of art can not only decided by people who live after them but also by their contemporaries. The famous novel called the Story of Stone, were evaluated at the time it was printed. People enjoy the interesting pot and the high skill of writing. And until now there are still a number of professors who study the novel. They can still absorb new knowledge from every pore of that outstangding work. Mozart, a talent in music, was famous while he was young. His symphonies are played for centuries and the audiences did not limited by the time. The people who both live in his age and live in today can appeciated the greatness of Mozart.
  In sum, the assertion that greatness of individuals should be decided only by those who live after them is unilateral. Invetions, which is obvious to show their advantages, can be deciede by people who live in the same period with the inventor. While politics are somewhat different, the politician should need a insightful and long-run eye to see the world. So their opinions are more leading. And in the region of art, greatness can be decided both by those who live after them and by their contemporaries.

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36"The greatness of individuals can be decided only by those who live after them, not by their contemporaries." 36． 只有后来人评价以前的人，而不应该同时代的人相互评价
The greatness of individuals cannot be appreciated by their contemporaries in large part is due to their outstanding talent and their transcendental intelligence which surpass the common cognition of general public and their peers.
Besides, to test the validity of theories, works and ideas of the great individuals need a long time even centuries.
In a democratic society, individuals have full free to express their ideas and show their unique talents and characters.我觉得这个开头太象提纲了吧.特别是这一句,显得稍有些脱节

  The speaker assert that the greatness individuals made can be decided only by those who live after them, not by their contemporaries. However, I think the assertion is too extreme. Some greatness of individuals can be appeciated by people who live at present while the other cannot be decided by their contemporaries.
  In the kingdom of invention, the patent should be registerd as soon as possibel in order to prevent other people pirate it. Bell invented the telephone and registered the patent of phone, which is now widely used in every corner of the world. So why should he register the patent? The answer is obvious. The other people would be likely to use his invention to make profit. And this just indicate that his greatness, which is the invention of telephone, was appreciated at the beginnig.这个例子扯的好远哦.其实不用说专利啊什么的,直接说这个发明就知道了啊.而且这一句好象有语病 For instance, the bulb,怎么没有任何过度就跳了个例子 invented by the great inventor—Edison, bring lights to our nights. It was one of great inventions in human history and Edison was well-known by this masterpiece at his lifetime even until now. The greatness of individuals can ususally be decided by those who live with them.
  Notwithstanding, the greatness individuals made may not always be understood by their contemporaries. We can consider some examples from the politics. Alaska is one of states in the United States. However, it was once belong to Russia and finally brought by the government of US. Many America could not understand why the government pay so much money to this “deserted and unfirtilized” land from Russian and the US government needed money because the Civil War has just finished. But a few years later people found oil and other minearl resources in Alaska. The decision made by the president is surely wise but it should take some time to test whether it is right or wrong. The people live at preset cannot tell earlier without a long effort to test这个例子叙述角度不对啊.你连哪个伟大总统的名字都没提.
  Sometimes the greatness of individual in the region of art can not only decided by people who live after them but also by their contemporaries. The famous novel called the Story of Stone, were evaluated at the time it was printed. People enjoy the interesting pot and the high skill of writing. And until now there are still a number of professors who study the novel. They can still absorb new knowledge from every pore of that outstangding work. Mozart, a talent in music, was famous while he was young. His symphonies are played for centuries and the audiences did not limited by the time. The people who both live in his age and live in today can appeciated the greatness of Mozart. 觉得有点乱呢?你不是第一段已经讲过可以被同代决定了吗

In sum, the assertion that greatness of individuals should be decided only by those who live after them is unilateral. Invetions, which is obvious to show their advantages, can be deciede by people who live in the same period with the inventor. While politics are somewhat different, the politician should need a insightful and long-run eye to see the world. So their opinions are more leading. And in the region of art, greatness can be decided both by those who live after them and by their contemporaries. 我觉得这样结尾会不会有点罗嗦呢?能不能压缩总结一下

我觉得例子有点太多了.而且好象结构有点乱呢.不知作者是否同意我的意见.

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36"The greatness of individuals can be decided only by those who live after them, not by their contemporaries." 36． 只有后来人评价以前的人，而不应该同时代的人相互评价
The greatness of individuals cannot be appreciated by their contemporaries in large part is due to their outstanding talent and their transcendental intelligence which surpass the common cognition of general public and their peers.
Besides, to test the validity of theories, works and ideas of the great individuals need a long time even centuries.
In a democratic society, individuals have full free to express their ideas and show their unique talents and characters.我觉得这个开头太象提纲了吧.特别是这一句,显得稍有些脱节

  The speaker assert that the greatness individuals made can be decided only by those who live after them, not by their contemporaries. However, I think the assertion is too extreme. Some greatness of individuals can be appeciated by people who live at present while the other cannot be decided by their contemporaries.
  In the kingdom of invention, the patent should be registerd as soon as possibel in order to prevent other people pirate it. Bell invented the telephone and registered the patent of phone, which is now widely used in every corner of the world. So why should he register the patent? The answer is obvious. The other people would be likely to use his invention to make profit. And this just indicate that his greatness, which is the invention of telephone, was appreciated at the beginnig.这个例子扯的好远哦.其实不用说专利啊什么的,直接说这个发明就知道了啊.而且这一句好象有语病 For instance, the bulb,怎么没有任何过度就跳了个例子 invented by the great inventor—Edison, bring lights to our nights. It was one of great inventions in human history and Edison was well-known by this masterpiece at his lifetime even until now. The greatness of individuals can ususally be decided by those who live with them.
  Notwithstanding, the greatness individuals made may not always be understood by their contemporaries. We can consider some examples from the politics. Alaska is one of states in the United States. However, it was once belong to Russia and finally brought by the government of US. Many America could not understand why the government pay so much money to this “deserted and unfirtilized” land from Russian and the US government needed money because the Civil War has just finished. But a few years later people found oil and other minearl resources in Alaska. The decision made by the president is surely wise but it should take some time to test whether it is right or wrong. The people live at preset cannot tell earlier without a long effort to test这个例子叙述角度不对啊.你连哪个伟大总统的名字都没提.
  Sometimes the greatness of individual in the region of art can not only decided by people who live after them but also by their contemporaries. The famous novel called the Story of Stone, were evaluated at the time it was printed. People enjoy the interesting pot and the high skill of writing. And until now there are still a number of professors who study the novel. They can still absorb new knowledge from every pore of that outstangding work. Mozart, a talent in music, was famous while he was young. His symphonies are played for centuries and the audiences did not limited by the time. The people who both live in his age and live in today can appeciated the greatness of Mozart. 觉得有点乱呢?你不是第一段已经讲过可以被同代决定了吗

In sum, the assertion that greatness of individuals should be decided only by those who live after them is unilateral. Invetions, which is obvious to show their advantages, can be deciede by people who live in the same period with the inventor. While politics are somewhat different, the politician should need a insightful and long-run eye to see the world. So their opinions are more leading. And in the region of art, greatness can be decided both by those who live after them and by their contemporaries. 我觉得这样结尾会不会有点罗嗦呢?能不能压缩总结一下

我觉得例子有点太多了.而且好象结构有点乱呢.不知作者是否同意我的意见.

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issue36

36"The greatness of individuals can be decided only by those who live after them, not by their contemporaries." 36． 只有后来人评价以前的人，而不应该同时代的人相互评价
The greatness of individuals cannot be appreciated by their contemporaries in large part is due to their outstanding talent and their transcendental intelligence which surpass the common cognition of general public and their peers.
Besides, to test the validity of theories, works and ideas of the great individuals need a long time even centuries.
In a democratic society, individuals have full free to express their ideas and show their unique talents and characters.我觉得这个开头太象提纲了吧.特别是这一句,显得稍有些脱节

  The speaker assert that the greatness individuals made can be decided only by those who live after them, not by their contemporaries. However, I think the assertion is too extreme. Some greatness of individuals can be appeciated by people who live at present while the other cannot be decided by their contemporaries.
  In the kingdom of invention, the patent should be registerd as soon as possibel in order to prevent other people pirate it. Bell invented the telephone and registered the patent of phone, which is now widely used in every corner of the world. So why should he register the patent? The answer is obvious. The other people would be likely to use his invention to make profit. And this just indicate that his greatness, which is the invention of telephone, was appreciated at the beginnig.这个例子扯的好远哦.其实不用说专利啊什么的,直接说这个发明就知道了啊.而且这一句好象有语病 For instance, the bulb,怎么没有任何过度就跳了个例子 invented by the great inventor—Edison, bring lights to our nights. It was one of great inventions in human history and Edison was well-known by this masterpiece at his lifetime even until now. The greatness of individuals can ususally be decided by those who live with them.
  Notwithstanding, the greatness individuals made may not always be understood by their contemporaries. We can consider some examples from the politics. Alaska is one of states in the United States. However, it was once belong to Russia and finally brought by the government of US. Many America could not understand why the government pay so much money to this “deserted and unfirtilized” land from Russian and the US government needed money because the Civil War has just finished. But a few years later people found oil and other minearl resources in Alaska. The decision made by the president is surely wise but it should take some time to test whether it is right or wrong. The people live at preset cannot tell earlier without a long effort to test这个例子叙述角度不对啊.你连哪个伟大总统的名字都没提.
  Sometimes the greatness of individual in the region of art can not only decided by people who live after them but also by their contemporaries. The famous novel called the Story of Stone, were evaluated at the time it was printed. People enjoy the interesting pot and the high skill of writing. And until now there are still a number of professors who study the novel. They can still absorb new knowledge from every pore of that outstangding work. Mozart, a talent in music, was famous while he was young. His symphonies are played for centuries and the audiences did not limited by the time. The people who both live in his age and live in today can appeciated the greatness of Mozart. 觉得有点乱呢?你不是第一段已经讲过可以被同代决定了吗

In sum, the assertion that greatness of individuals should be decided only by those who live after them is unilateral. Invetions, which is obvious to show their advantages, can be deciede by people who live in the same period with the inventor. While politics are somewhat different, the politician should need a insightful and long-run eye to see the world. So their opinions are more leading. And in the region of art, greatness can be decided both by those who live after them and by their contemporaries. 我觉得这样结尾会不会有点罗嗦呢?能不能压缩总结一下

我觉得例子有点太多了.而且好象结构有点乱呢.不知作者是否同意我的意见.

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The speaker asserts that the greatness individuals made can be decided only by those who live after them, not by their contemporaries. However, I think the assertion is too extreme. Some greatness of individuals can be appreciated by people who live at present while the other cannot be decided by their contemporaries.

  In the kingdom of invention, the patent should be registered as soon as possible in order to prevent other people pirate it. Bell invented the telephone and registered the patent of phone, which is now widely used in every corner of the world. So why should he register the patent? The answer is obvious. The other people would be likely to use his invention to make profit. And this just indicates that his greatness, which is the invention of telephone, was appreciated at the begining. For instance, the bulb, invented by the great inventor—Edison, bring lights to our nights. It was one of great inventions in human history and Edison was well-known by this masterpiece at his lifetime even until now. The greatness of individuals can usually be decided by those who live with them.
这两个例子都不能证明你要说的观点啊~~而且这一段连ts都没有(不要告诉我第一句是)

  Notwithstanding, the greatness individuals made may not always be understood by their contemporaries. We can consider some examples from the politics. Alaska is one of states in the United States. However, it was once belong to Russia and finally brought by the government of US. Many America could not understand why the government paid so much money to this “deserted and unfertilized” land from Russian and the US government needed money because the Civil War has just finished. But a few years later people found oil and other mineral resources in Alaska. The decision made by the president is surely wise but it should take some time to test whether it is right or wrong. The people live at present cannot tell earlier without a long effort to test.
这个例子之前一直讲US government,之后突然转president, 牵强啊~~

  Sometimes the greatness of individual in the region of art can not only decided by people who live after them but also by their contemporaries. The famous novel called the Story of Stone, were (highly) evaluated at the time it was printed. People enjoy the interesting plot and the high skill of writing. And until now there are still a number of professors who study the novel. They can still absorb new knowledge from every pore of that outstanding work. Mozart, a talent in music, was famous while he was young. His symphonies are played for centuries!!?? and the audiences did not limited? by the time. The people who both live in his age and live in today can appreciated the greatness of Mozart.
这段立论有问题,既然那些同时代的人可以认识到famous people 的greatness, 那后人肯定是承认的, 因为前人已经验证了,后人已经没有decide的可能了, 而且你这两个例子说明的是前人后人都欣赏他们的作品,与making a decision无关

  In sum, the assertion that greatness of individuals could be decided only by those who live after them is unilateral. Inventions, which is obvious to show their advantages, can be decided by people who live in the same period with the inventor. While politics are somewhat different, the politician should need an insightful and long-run eyesight to see the world. So their opinions are more leading. And in the region of art, greatness can be decided both by those who live after them and by their contemporaries.  

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