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楼主辛苦啦~~帮忙改一下吧~就快考了~谢谢~~~

75. Some universities require students to take classes in many subjects. Other universities require students to specialize in one subject. Which is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

According to a recent survey conducted by experts, about 60 percent of college students have no interest in their majors, and a part of them may likely to switch their study direction if they have another chance. It follows that these students are willing to learn much other subjects except for their original majors. Although undergraduates will become more special if they merely study one subject in college times, while from my perspective, it is to learn widely than only to learn one subject.

Few college students know what kind of job they will certainly do in the future for the reason that the knowledge we learned at university is so limited and basic. Meanwhile, unfortunately, the major we choose may not the excellent majors we are dreaming for owing to our lower score or careless decision. Consequently, that studying various subjects in college will provide us more opportunities when we are seeking for job in the near future. Numerous illustrations can be given, but this one will suffice, the original subject of Bill Gates is not computer, with the increasingly and widely study in university, computer greatly attract him and eventually he achieve significant success in setting up the Microsoft company.

In fact, only when people are interested in some matter, can they do them well. College students are too young to accurately judge which major they like most, leading to the phenomena that some students' subjects are totally determined by parents, others wrongly choose the subject which they are not good at. Luckily, some problems can be solved through taking many classes in many subjects. Thus students in university have the chance to learn what they really love and maybe they can alter a favorable research direction when they are graduates. My roommate LuLu is a good example, she was major in biology in college but her hobby is literature and she took plenty of literature courses, after graduation she decided to study Chinese traditional literature in graduates and she succeeded.

Last but not least, when we have to face with a variety of subjects, at the same time we can make many friends from different areas or even build intimate contact with them. Students can learn a lot from others, considering they all have special knowledge and different strongpoint.

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还有一篇,最近写的~~请多指教啦~~

154. In some countries, people are no longer allowed to smoke in many public places and office buildings. Do you think this is a good rule or a bad rule? Use specific reasons and details to support your position.

People seldom agree with each other even in such trivial issue that whether smoking in public should be allowed. There is a growing awareness of keeping healthy so that many people strongly oppose smoking in public, while this sort of argument damages smokers' benefits and they try to vote for their right. In fact, it is a little bit haste to say that smoking in public places should be permitted or vice versa. And I will illustrate my standpoint step by step as follows.   
To start with, people who support smoking in public dramatically neglect others' feeling as well as health. According to a recent survey conducted by a group of experts, four million people die each year from diseases linked to smoking. We can conclude that public smokers damage not only their own body but also the health of the people nearby, including some strangers, their partners, lovers and even children. In my point of view, people should not be self-centered when it comes to the matter of smoking in public because fresh air resulted from non-smoking in public ensures a healthy living.
  From another perspective, smoking in public easily makes fire disaster available. Let us recall how much fire disasters in forests are caused by a lighted cigarette and we cannot forget the vast tragedy forever. When a person smokes in a street, he or she may careless throws the lighting cigarette into the garbage bin, thus it is possible to lead the garbage bin be fired. Just image that a staff smokes in his office and meanwhile he is busy with printing some materials, then he put his cigarette on the coffee table with pieces of vital papers on it. Owing to his concentration on printing, he does not realize how dangerous effect the cigarette may has on those papers and himself and even the whole office building. It is no denying that smoking publicly whether in a public place or in an office building is relatively unsafe and may cause the loss of life.

The last thing I would like to mention is that it is unfair for others when you smoking in public places or in office apartments. Some non-smokers cannot tolerate the smell of smoking and some others may be sensitive to the odor of cigarette, it follows that they become the victims of the smokers, and if things get worse, quarrels will be inevitable. If an employee always smokes in office, thus his colleagues will be bothered and they can hardy build an intimate and respectful relationship with each other. So smoking forbidden in public areas is a crucial prerequisite of positive relationship between people.

By and large, I personally stand on the ground that smoking in public or in office buildings should not be allowed due to the reasons above. Only through this rule, can most people be guaranteed a healthy and happy life.

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发表于 2009-11-20 20:39:13 |显示全部楼层
12月5号就考了~~~一星期前发了2篇作文(70#和73#的)~~~帮忙赶紧改一下吧~~~跪谢啊~~好人有好报啊~~~

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