我自己的几篇argu开头，请大家赐教

wunonomeiUID：2717257

虽然argu写的不多，但是也可以拿来看一看自己的写作习惯了，真是不看不知道，看了才知道。
原来我自己本来就有了一个写开头的定向思维，只是语言描述差了些。
我感觉这些和66的那篇关于argu开头的帖子的方法是差不多的，但感觉还是不太好，自己没有更好的分析，请大家不吝赐教。

下面红色的是我自己的理解和一些问题。

This argument does not directly hit the target by presenting some report demonstrations without noticing that the basis between the report and the article purpose are totally different.这应该算是套话吧，虽然不是看模版写的，也是分析了题目的错误之后写的，但是和题目联系不够紧密，显得空。

This author makes two conclusions based on the study result, secondary infections keeping some severe-muscle-strain patients from healing quickly and all muscle-strain patients should take antibiotics during treatment. The conclusions lack proofs to support.前面是复述，后面是套话。最垃圾的开头。

The author makes two hasty conclusions about the cause of shyness during infancy and its influence continuing into later life without thorough casual relationship analysis and by confusing readers with different concepts.写得不错，即表明了作者的态度，又明确了下文的论述对象。问：虽然点出了问题，但是没有把题目的内容套进去，算是套话么？

The president makes a hasty conclusion about how to help improve Mira Vista's graduates' employment merely basing on a rough analogy between Green Mountain College(GM) and Mira Vista College(MV), and without thoroughly considering the influencing factors.和上一句的表达方式类似，只是把题目的内容套进去了，这样写正文时比较难写TS。

The author makes a false conclusion of the treatment in two different kinds of hospitals by just listing out several differences between them without considering the inner connection of these facts and the treatment levels.前面的false conclusion是不是带入了主观，改为hasty conclusion更好？

Ignoring timing of the newly found basket, roughly considering several unconvincing reasons of impossibility of crossing the river by boat, groundlessly assuming boating as the only way to cross the river, and wrongly considering today as the old situation, the author fails to connect the recent finding with the unique to Palea of so called Palean baskets.这是看了66的帖子后学写的开头，但总有一点画虎不成反类犬的感觉，又说不出具体原因来；开头直接把下文要说的几点问题都一气写了，是不是不好，有罗列的感觉，虽然本质上看，和我上面的几个开头都差不多。

wunonomeiUID：2717257

顶一下，要想拿高分，就要多分析。

bzr2915UID：2612029

叹 你最近哪去了？ 我觉得开头你把要写的几个错误带一下让阅卷的知道你要写什么就OK 不必拘泥于什么形式 最后留一句话说 以下详细讨论XXXXX

wunonomeiUID：2717257

这也是一种思路，在有限的准备时间里，还是把重心放在正文，只要别写成典型的垃圾开头就行了