issue88 题目号不错！但是文章写的不咱样，大家帮看看吧！

feier521UID：109747

88"Technologies not only influence but actually determine social customs and ethics."
立场：科技确实影响风俗和道德，但并不能决定它们。是人们自己决定了这些意识形态
1. 风俗和道德的形成、发展经历很长的过程。
2. 是人们创造了风俗和道德。
3. 科技影响确实影响了风俗和道德，有的甚至使它们到了崩溃的边缘。还是人们去修复、完善它们，使之步入正途。

I concede that technologies influence the social customs and ethics, however, they can not determine them. Actually, it is people who determine social customs and ethics by their thoughts, standards of activities and perspectives of the value and life through a long period of time rather than technologies themselves.

The system of customs and ethics has experienced a long process of trial and error from initiation, modification, replenishment, development till to mature. In ancient society, our ancestors had to cooperate each other to prey on wild animals, or else, they would confront the danger of starving. So teamwork, a kind of virtue, came into being. They allotted for what the hunters gained more to elders and children than to the adults, in which we learn the origin of respecting the old and caring for the youth. Later on, when people bartered what they cannot consume for necessities, and then equity, a trading rule, appeared. It is difficult to enumerate the origins of all social mores and ethics, however, each one have an enduring process, and till today they have already entrenched in people's mind.

How does one dare to say that it is just the technologies determine these ideological stuffs? If so, he or she is very presumptuous. From the forming process of customs and ethics, it is people themselves who established them, it is through their thoughts, standards of value that they determine which activity is moral and which one is immoral. And those were deemed as moral perpetuated and became today's conventions and ethical standards. Although someone may argue that materials really determine ideologies, these conceptions only belong to the philosophic category, customs and ethics are far from determined by practical things. Even so, it does not follow that technology is the decisive factor for them.

However, do technologies have no any bearing with social customs and ethics? No at all, actually, they have deep impact on them. Nowadays many traditional moral standards are challenged due to the introduction of technologies. Many of them have to complement and amend themselves to meet today's needs. For example, the nuclear technology all too often threatens the lives of mankind all over the world; the cloning technology damage today's moralities if it was used to clone people themselves. But the previous ethical standards can not relate concerning new technologies at all, so it is the responsibility of people themselves to change them to employ these technologies to the beneficial aspects, while avoid their disadvantages. Furthermore, even some moralities are encountering the edge of collapse due to technologies. For instance, the medicine technology and advanced medical apparatus make abortion and euthanasia possible, which seriously damage the traditional moralities, and people still cannot determine these activities are true or not in light of today’s standards. It is also people’s duty to do their utmost to make them on the right track.

In the last analysis, technologies do influence social customs and ethics, even some seriously destroy them, but they can never determine them. It is people who create them in the initial era, it is also people who amend and perfect them if they are outdated and greatly damaged. We should abide by proper ethical standards to make the world a beautiful and stable place.

langsiuUID：122509

写的好好啊,很佩服的说!

feier521UID：109747

赞誉了！！呵呵

梦如烟雨UID：137365

你的文章的确很值得学习。
我想与你探讨一下这个文章的内容：
如果把人们创造了风俗和道德，风俗道德经历了很长的发展过程（总之就是说与科技关系不大，不起决定性作用）合并在一起，作为第一个层次。然后，论述风俗道德的形成是个动态的，发展的过程，它的形成包括诸多因素，其中科技也是一个源泉。然后从正反两方面论述先进的科技给人们带来什么新的道德的要求和什么样的不良影响。这是第二个层次。
你觉得如何？

feier521UID：109747

最初由 梦如烟雨 发布
[B]
如果把人们创造了风俗和道德，风俗道德经历了很长的发展过程（总之就是说与科技关系不大，不起决定性作用）合并在一起，作为第一个层次。然后，论述风俗道德的形成是个动态的，发展的过程，它的形成包括诸多因素，其中科技也是一个源泉。然后从正反两方面论述先进的科技给人们带来什么新的道德的要求和什么样的不良影响。这是第二个层次。
你觉得如何？
[/B]

谢谢你的意见！很佩服你的分析issue 的思维深度！
你的意思是把一二段合起来吗？
呵呵，我也觉得第一段单独留出来，好像和topic 有点无关。
在道德形成过程中，科技也起了一定的作用（这一点没有写）
科技的正方面我也没有提啊。正方面如何说呢？

gteryyUID：114434

顶楼的进步很大。

楼上的想法也很不错！

feier521UID：109747

谢谢yy的鼓励。
就这篇文章，我觉得我没有写custom， 老是关于ethics。
还有，斑竹啊，
我觉得好久才可以写一片令自己比较满意的。而且还是改了好久。
所以，斑竹可能看到的进步只是一个假象吧。
心里话：我觉得我的作文水平真的比我贴上来的差很多很多。
不知什么时候，拿过一题就可以，思路泉涌，下笔飞快。

auteurUID：139302

最初由 feier521 发布
[B]谢谢yy的鼓励。
就这篇文章，我觉得我没有写custom， 老是关于ethics。
还有，斑竹啊，
我觉得好久才可以写一片令自己比较满意的。而且还是改了好久。
所以，斑竹可能?.

以下省略...... [/B]

分析的很不错。请问楼主花了多少时间呀？算上修改的话，如果1.5~2个小时的话，应该说是不错的。很多文章可以不必过多注意细节。抓住主旋律而且适当展开就OK了，毕竟，考试的时候，在细节上是不大个能尽善尽美的。

梦如烟雨UID：137365

正面的，我能想到的就是：
1。用信用卡，银行可以透支，为传统的诚实的品质增加了讲求诚信的内容。
2。高科技使人们生活，工作节奏加快，要求人们更加珍惜自己和他人的时间，更加强调守时。
45分钟写篇思路清晰，结构完整的文章，太困难了。
这些想法也只是慢慢想出来的，真怕考试的时候看见题目傻眼。

feier521UID：109747

最初由 auteur 发布
[B]分析的很不错。请问楼主花了多少时间呀？

以下省略...... [/B]

谢谢autuer。写了一个多小时吧，然后在word里改一些拼写等语言错误。

最初由 梦如烟雨 发布
这些想法也只是慢慢想出来的，真怕考试的时候看见题目傻眼。
以上省略...... [/B]

是啊，有思路还好写一些，就怕到考场的时候，啥也想不出来，就晕了。
还有，很佩服你的思维深度，怎么练的？？是不是平时阅读大量的文章？你分析的很多方面我都想不到。要向你学习！：D

立花道雪UID：114678

8楼的签名档好像是
i came i saw i conquerd
那个那个凯撒还是谁来着说的
意大利文吧