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发表于 2011-4-9 21:40:16 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
题目:ISSUE130 - "How children are socialized today determines the destiny of society. Unfortunately, we have not yet learned how to raise children who can help bring about a better society."
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In the current society, how to better cultivate a child becomes a difficult problem for parents, schools and the society. I strongly agree that children represent the future of a society. Even though, people find raising children harder, most of them know some means about how to educate children to be people that can make contributions to society. Factually, whether children can bring us a better society depends more on our cultivation other than their own ability.

In the first place, education background and studying ability of children will have a great influence on the whole society. In modern China, the government claims that education must be set as the most important affair of our nation. Besides, several fundamental and effective strategies have been executed, such as the prevalent of primary education, the reeducation of teachers, education methods reformation and so forth. From this point of view, primary educational revolution in China will surge and encourage more students to take the opportunity to study hard. Thus, if we want to control the destiny of society, grasping the education in school is essential. After all, improving the level of the knowledge of the common people plays a critical role in the development of the whole nation.

Moreover, telling and instructing children how to be good citizens are more significant. With the development of people's knowledge and ability, as we all know, there come various kinds of severe problems. For instance, as computers proliferate, numerous people are familiar of the skills and techniques of computers, such as dealing with information, writing programs. Nevertheless, hackers are rampant on the Internet. Despite their strong ability in computer science, they create tens of thousands of crisis for big companies, national departments and common people. Obviously, these people are lack of the education of moral and ethical. They bring difficult problems for people and society. Therefore, it should be noticed that not only the education of professional is important, instruction of morality and ethics must be placed emphasis on.

On the other hand, undoubtedly, there exit several errors and confused problems that prevent us from educating children to be able to bring us a better society. However, we should pay attention to our feat and success on educational business and build our confidence to create a better society together with children. In China, some parents restrict their children to do what they really interest in and regulate future routes and plans for them. Admittedly, some children followed their parents get stable jobs and live comfortably. But for some other Chinese children, they tend to conflict with their parents and feel disappointed about family, society and their future. On the contrary, some other nations advocate children to pursue their inner desire and dreams with offering them adequate freedom. This kind of education indeed cultivates a great number of great minds. Yet, at the same time, it is demonstrated to cause some negative effects, such as teenage crimes, addiction to cigarettes, drugs and unwed pregnancy and so on. Compared the merits and demerits, some more powerful and more effective measures should be added in our current education.

Taking all my discussion above into account, it should be advocated that the socialization and education of children is essential to nations' future and even the destiny of the whole world. Our nations and educationists should connect the advantages of our current education with some new methods to make children adjust to the society better.
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发表于 2011-4-9 21:41:03 |只看该作者
自己顶一下 因为这次没有参加作文组 所以自己都不知道写的到底怎么样。。。

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发表于 2011-4-9 22:20:32 |只看该作者
你偏题了。。。

What you are discussing is not how children are socialized but what might be children's education.
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发表于 2011-4-10 16:11:15 |只看该作者
3# 咖啡盐 恩,对,我写完也这么觉得,但是孩子的社会化,难道不是应该怎么教育,让他更适应社会吗?

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试着把两者联系起来

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