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发表于 2003-12-1 20:18:08 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

我发现Ivy0929的文章中排比用的突出的好，下面是我摘出来的，大家可以学习。
Just take a look into America history, one need look no further to find that without Washington’s rational choice of independence and democracy, or Lincoln’s reasonable choice of equality, or Martin Luther King’s wise choice against racial discrimination, these value as freedom, democracy, and equality would not be so deeply rooted in American’s mind.

However, if only one remembered the failure of Prohibition during the 1930s, and more recently, failed federal legislation to regulate access to adult material via the Internet, as well as the innumerable rules and regulations under continuous amending in order to adapt the updated situations, may he or she clearly realize that it is also people’s reasonable consideration to decision which law is feasible to carry out, which law should be edited, and even which law should be abandoned.

From the germinal view that the earth is in a fixed position at the center of the universe, which is completely wrong, to Copernicus’s theory that the earth evolves around the sun, to the corroborating observation of Galileo, and ultimately to Newton’s principles of gravity upon which all modern science depends, human beings have not only greatly enhanced themselves but also gradually rectified their deficient recognition of the universe.

Thus, every one should keep on lifelong learning to absorb new knowledge and technique in order to improve the job, to broaden and widen his or her ken, to keep up with the pace of the society and to avoid being left behind peers, and in short, to improve themselves to be able to adapt to the increasingly complicated society full of drastic competition.

If we take a look into the human history, we might readily find that the highly advance democracy we modern people enjoy today should be owned to the Independent Revolution leaded by Washington, the later Civil War leaded by Lincoln and the movement sponsored by Martin Luther King.

Another striking example is the differences of right and freedom that people enjoy, which act as a positive catalyst to stimulate innumerous individuals to fight against the racial discrimination, from the Independent Revolution led by Washington, to the civil war sponsored by Lincoln which abolished the slavery in the South, and ultimately to the movement led by Martin Luther King, and now we can enjoy the democracy and equality of the society.

另外我发现GRE词汇用的也很恰当，大家可以学习。

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