issue47 考虑对intellect的理解

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Issue 47
Society does not place enough emphasis on the intellect—that is, on reasoning and other cognitive skills.
社会没有给予智力培养方面足够的重视，比如人的推理和其他认知能力。


As we all know, intellect, including reasoning and other cognitive skills, is an important factor in the process of individual success and social development. However, society does not pay enough attention on it, especially the somewhat unreasonable educational system.观点鲜明~


Intellect, defined as the capacity for rational or intelligent thought, includes reasoning ability, capabilities of analyzing and solving problems, etc. It is a crucial factor in the process of not only individual success, but also the development of society. ts Take Bill Gates, the founder of one famous corporation in the world, as an example.反证法 If he had not owned high intellect, Microsoft under his control, would have had no opportunity to develop advanced computer operating systems and dominate the PC market triumphantly.一直都认为 反证法只是用作补充证明用的，感觉不很充分，所以后面therefore得出的就略显牵强 Therefore, intellect has an important influence on the individual success. As for the development of a society, the function of intellect also could not be neglected. Social development depends on exploring more unknown fields, other than fields being existed. Discovering the unknown areas rests on又是俺没见过的~强 the ability of reasoning, a factor included in intellect and an impetus for social development. As a result, intellect is a basic factor promoting individual success and social development.段落的结构没什么好说得了~~清得很~就是深度不够~~btw没看见语法毛病

The phenomenon that society does not place enough emphasis on the training of intellect is produced by the defect of existing educational system to some extent, such as overemphasizing on scores.这个写起来有数吧~刚写过 :cool: Grades, standards to measure how much knowledge in textbooks being mastered by students, have many defects. For example, the capability trained in the test is the repeating of what the book says, while others, such as creative thinking and reasoning, could not be improved from this process. A consequence of these standard tests is the fact that some students, owning high scores in the school, have difficulties to fit for the job requiring them to use their cognitive skills, other tan repeating. Only if educational systems could pay more attention on the training of the development of students' whole abilities, jobs requiring more cognitive skills are easier to be taken on than ever. Then, the improvement of educational systems will bring advantages to society.写得再深刻点更好啦


The approach of solving this problem is that not only educational systems, but also whole society should begin to attach importance to the training of intellect, as doing in some successful companies and universities nowadays. Some successful companies and universities adopt many measures to overcome defects in existing school education. For example, Microsoft has a strict procedure of enrolling employees, including an elaborate designed test which could scientific evaluate various intellect levels of job-finders. Employees in this company will receive a systematic training to improve their comprehensive intellect not only reasoning, but also other cognitive skills巧妙的把evaluate给转换成了培养~~Good. There is another instance about the successful pushing an approach which reduces the pressure of pursuing high scores in Chinese elementary school recent years. As a result, a survey taken by an authoritative organization shows that the general abilities have obviously increasing after carrying out the approach, and recommends other schools to adopt this approach. From these examples, we could draw a conclusion that some good ways to solve the problem of ignoring intellect could be used as references by both educational systems and the whole society.我感觉这是很不错的一段

To sum up, society should pay more attention on intellect by adopting some effective approaches immediately, since it is too important to be neglected. （557 words）



相当好啦~~~每一个body都至少展开了两个层~~分析得也到位~~~总结的也扣题~~~pf pf阿~~！！呵呵~~
btw "for example"的用法再灵活一点哦~~~

lovebrianUID：157127

真没想到！！ETS的每道题都这样能抠出个陷阱来吗？
看来bill的例子不行了~~~还有intellect的确在理解上出现的问题！
举个爱因斯坦把~~老人家比一般人智商高60

lovebrianUID：157127

不知道imong看了我的语言会怎么说~~sigh

lovebrianUID：157127

你也太不给我面子拉`~55555