1.26日T1&T2回复
首先,楼主的录音杂音有点大,呵呵
例子举得很好,我英语也不太好,只能挑出一点小问题,希望有所提示。
because our gyms is very poor,gyms is?
I think many student in our... many 后student 是否应为复数?
a lot of student would like to go,同样的student应为复数。最后一句没听明白。
另外,楼主的一些单词发音有待提高。加油!!
in primer school, 楼主是否想表达in a primary school?没太明白
from the books? books的发音需注意一下
1.30
T1 第一句 the library is...in the city, and because... ,这个and 最好不用
I usually go to the second floor with my friends to read, 个人觉得不加这个to read 更好一些
28秒左右的 and these books are very ? 这句没太挺明白,不知道是要表达书很棒吗?
to forgot to time? 是forgot time 么?还有go back to door是说回家吗? until 的发音再注意一下就更好了
T2的例子举得很详细,个人认为最后一句稍微重复,而且是否用champion更好呢?