jianguo摸考组的第一类题：教育类

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154. Both parents and communities must be involved in the local schools. Education is too important to leave solely to a group of professional educators.

Education is so complex and convoluted, such as the character, morality and personality beside the high grade, that（therefore） the educators can not burden all duties and all-sided facets except the high grades. So, if people can recognize the situation is very emergent and important for cultivate the students in all-facets, parents and communities should involve in the local schools together.

When people mention the education, they would recognize that obtaining the high grades in every course. However, the education involves many facets such as the morality, character, temperate（temper）, and so on. In these facets, every facet(each of them) is very important for students to obtain the successful education. The successful education is inculcating students the necessary knowledge and the way how to succeed in their field, they(which) are very vital for people to make success and perfect the personality. For example, the character is a vital factor for a person to succeed in some fields instead of only the high grade or the solid knowledge. Many corporations employ their stuff commanding that the interviewers have the perfect character and mortality. We can assume that a person, who has abundant acquirement and perfect grades but he/she is very poor in character and mortality, can make great (应该加个否定词吧) achievements and fortunes for company. Every year people will afford the severely loss in computers because of the hackers’ damage, hackers do these detrimental things just for show off their adept technology for satisfying their damage appetite, which is just testify the character is very crucial. So, the education is not the only facet.
论证的不够深入，character 具体到一方面比较好，比如honest……

Moreover, the teacher or educator can only provide the sufficient beneficial knowledge relating student's textbooks and exams instead of (but not) omnipotent learning. With the development of the society and economic (society and economic换一下) , the competition become more and more furious and severe. The students have no choice but to get high grades for attaining more excellent and perfect than others and possess their own spheres in society. So, students and educators all involve in how to obtain the high grades, they have no time and no energy to impose other facets such as cultivating the perfect character and mortality and other interesting.
这一段好像太绝对了
So, the parents and other community are indispensable for student's other facets education. In addition, Parents have the energy and obligatory（energy 去掉） to cultivate students' character and morality. They should recognize the importance of these facets instead of the only high grades and encourage them to form the mature （personal）character and health morality and cultivate them other own interesting. It is well known that people who has （have）the perfect felling status and great health are more important than the students who are always busy in preparing the endless exams which make so nervous and affording heavy burden for obtaining the high grades, The students, who have no good status and condition in every facets become very nervous in everything. However, parents and community always indulge the children and make them only can enjoy the comfortable life and lose the proper attitude for studying（与主题无关）. So, the parents and community should control  the degree （contribute to）of other education facets.

To sum, the education is so important that the parents and communities should participate the local schools for cultivate more perfect and excellent students on every facets.
限时写成这样已经很了不起了，继续努力啊
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