issue同主题写作第五类 8月20-21日

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128) Some people argue that successful leaders in government, industry, or other fields must be highly competitive. Other people claim that in order to be successful, a leader must be willing and able to cooperate with others.

Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.

While craftsmanship requires traits such as diligence and determination, leadership, is an art that require the ability of cooperation. Leaders, whether in government, industry or in other fields like public institutions, should be able to unify team members by working along harmoniously with them and by means of which, creates an environment of cooperation among members of the team.
Leaders in government should be willing to cooperate with others. As head of the state, government leaders are responsible for attending to various state issues. In order to carry out certain policies successfully, s/he must work along with heads of departments including department of finance, public health, security, etc. In circumstances when head of governments cannot cooperate well with other officials or institutions, not only will the public watch an amusing fight between these public figures, but the policies or regulations cannot be put into operation as well, making the society take the loss.
Leaders in business must be willing and be able to cooperate with others. A good business leader is an expert at setting up connections. To run a successful business, leaders should be able to make use of various resources. This requires them to cooperate with others, including other companies or institutions. In addition, a good business leader should be able to make the best of his/her employees. Finding the most suitable person for certain position, s/he must cooperate with his/her staffs in order to make good performances. …
Leaders in other fields including public institutions must be able to cooperate. NGOs such as Grass and Roots need to cooperate with governments and industries in order to promote their green ideas and to improve the environment by encouraging broad participation. …
In conclusion, as for leaders, no matter in government, industry or other fields, those who are willing and be able to cooperate can be successful.
分析连贯性
Consider the leadership in business world first. With the separation of ownership and management in modern corporations, it is important for the stockholders to trust the managers of the businesses.  But to earn the trust of the stockholders often takes a relatively long period of time.  The managers will need to demonstrate their competence as leaders through years of services and accumulate more experience while working with the staff to develop the best strategic plans for the long-term development of a company.  Once the manager reaches the top management, s/he will become a valuable asset that the company cannot afford to lose.  If s/he has to leave the position in five years, the company will have to start over the process of cultivating a leader all over again.  Therefore, to save money for the investors of the company, this rule should not apply.