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“Is your house an intruder's dream?” Once a saleman asked me this question and made me confused. After seeing me at a loss, he went on showing that if I wish to raise my home's security level from feeble to fortress, just a tiny Video Camera would does it well.This is a true story and it in fact tells us such fact: video cameras are more and more used throughout the world to record our daily life. However, do video cameras consequently play a more important role in documatation than written records, as the speaker’s asserts?In my view, it is not necessarily the case.(上新东方时,issue老师说example+position的开头避免写,不过我忘了原因是什么了。)Admittedly, the video cameras have certain advantages when compared to the traditional writen forms. First, they can quickly and precisely record the current events and provide sufficient information and obversation sources for further thoughts and actions. Second, in documenting temporal, spatial events and experiences, video cameras have a better memory than written records. For instance, when retrospecting the ominous ecnonomic crisis took in 1930, by reading the written records,we only know that many factories collapsed,many workers lost their jobs and people endured the hunger and cold at that time. But through the records of video cameras,we could v(w)itness a real world of that time. Third, (为了使语言显得更丰富可以换着使,比如,For one thing,secondly,last but not least)when video cameras are in private use rather than in official’ hands, it can(be) used as a record of personal life. Thus the dream of becoming eternity and immotality can be partly realised. For example, when a couple coming to review their wedding , a video record not only remind them of accurate event, but even to meticulous details, such as how the bridegroom kissed the bride, what is the eyebrow of the bride like. Yet through other forms of recording such as written records, such sights could hardly reappear.Forth, with the invention of automatic video cameras such as surveillance cameras, people can be informed what have happened when they were out. So everyone can have peace of mind when they are not at home or office for video cameras make it easy to watch over our home(home or homes?我不确定。) or small business.
However, in some other realms, written records are more advantageous and appropriate than video cameras. First of all, the tools of written records such as paper and pens are not only cheap but also convenient in constrast to video cameras. Second, written records have the fascination and charms of letters which could not be replaced by video cameras. For example, when reading a historical novel, people would get a full appreciation of the history as well as the mood and spirit of the writer between the lines. In addition, the written records, compared with the records recorded by the video cameras, can provide more detailed and comprehensive information. Common sense tells me, it is difficult and(a) waste of time or money for video cameras to record all the fields of contemporary life, even only recording typical events is still a waste. But as it is familiar with everyone,writing dairy can easily meet with our demands.Moreover,
In conclusion, both written records and the video cameras have their own merits and shortcomings. It is not wise to ignore one form of documentation and emphasize the other’(s) importance because we cannot judge which one is more or most important. So we should take various forms of documentation depending on different situations. Without any of them, we can hardly portray our world thoroughly.(569)
总体感觉挺好的。:)
我也写了这篇,可是写的又短又烂,帮忙看看吧,谢谢哦。
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