issue74 G-89-互助社-8.10日同主题作文 求互拍, 有拍必回

niuniu1983UID：2117413

Issue74  第11篇 让砖头来得更猛烈些吧！
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The most effective way to communicate an idea or value to large groups of people is through the use of images, not language.
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I agree with the speaker's assertion that in order to communicate an idea or value to others, use of images is superior to that of language, for the reason that image can depict  the meanings much more accurate and lively rather than by ways of language. However, in some cases, language has its advantage to express an idea or value.

In the first place, it is much easier and more effective to communicate an idea or value to people by means of images, which is accurate and vivid to express ideas deep. As a student, it is sure that we have some experiences involving study. When faced with something abstract, or uneasy to express by words, we will appeal to the means of images. For example, teachers educate us the idea science is of great power. They will show some images about astronauts discover secret universe, and with help of electron microscope, human has observed little size particles such as molecule, atom, electron, and so forth.  If not through images, such conceptions are too abstruse to understand. In short, when it comes to such abstract conceptions and values, the most effective ways, maybe the only way to communicate those to large groups of people is through use of images.

In the second place, when to express a idea or value to many people involving different education levels and social backgrounds, it is arduous to deal with. People with different perception levels, social backgrounds, and living experiences understand the same idea in dissimilar way. To the idea that we should protect our environment, a farmer with little education perhaps does not care it anymore for the reason that he thinks of it of no relation with his interest. On the contrary, a engineer with high education working in a major city may become very worry about this pressing social problem because he takes it as the duty of everyone in the earth. Thus, to communicate a value to a large quantity of people which have different backgrounds, it is difficult to address by use of language.  

Admittedly, when it comes to something emotional, the best way to deliver his ideas to others is through the use of language. Common sense tells me that words have a magical power. They can bring either the greatest happiness or deepest despair and words are also capable of arousing the strongest emotions and prompting all man's actions. A telling example involving the claim by President Roosevelt after US suffered a swift surprise attack, Pearl Harbor, amply illustrates this point of view. The claim motivated whole citizens' patriotism to protect their nation and peace. This event also became the watershed in the World War II.

To sum up, on the one hand, to communicate abstruse and abstract value, what the most effective way is just by way of images. On the other hand, to express something emotional or inciting people to share the some sense, the best way is through use of language.

melinda2036UID：2108044

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niuniu1983UID：2117413

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melinda2036UID：2108044

I agree with the speaker's assertion that in order to communicate an idea or value to others, use of images is superior to that of language, for the reason that image can depict  the meanings much more accurate and lively rather than by ways of language. However, in some cases, language has its advantage to express an idea or value.

In the first place, it is much easier and more effective to communicate an idea or value to people by means of images, which is accurate and vivid to express ideas deep. As a student, it is sure that we have some experiences involving study. When faced with something abstract, or uneasy to express by words, we will appeal to the means of images. For example, teachers educate us the idea（that） science is of great power. They will show some images about astronauts discover secret universe, and with(the) help of electron microscope, human（前面在讲image是一种教学手法，那对象应该是学生，不应该用human吧，感觉象是人类借助科技观察到这些，） has observed little size particles such as molecule, atom, electron, and so forth.  If not through images, such conceptions are too abstruse to understand. In short, when it comes to such abstract conceptions and values, the most effective ways, maybe the only way to communicate those to large groups of people is through the use of images.

In the second place, when to express an idea or value to many people involving different education levels and social backgrounds, it is arduous to deal with(it指带的什么呀). People with different perception levels, social backgrounds, and living experiences understand the same idea in dissimilar ways. To the idea that we should protect our environment, a farmer with little education perhaps does not care it anymore for the reason that he thinks of it of no relation with his interest. On the contrary, a engineer with high education working in a major city may become very worry about this pressing social problem because he takes it as the duty of everyone in the earth. Thus, to communicate a value to a large quantity of people which have different backgrounds, it is difficult to address by use of language.  觉得这一段论证很精彩，向你学习。

Admittedly, when it comes to something emotional, the best way to deliver his ideas to others is through the use of language. Common sense tells me that words have a magical power. They can bring either the greatest happiness or deepest despair and words are also capable of arousing the strongest emotions and prompting all man's actions. A telling example involving the claim by President Roosevelt after US suffered a swift surprise attack, Pearl Harbor, amply illustrates this point of view. The claim motivated whole citizens' patriotism to protect their nation and peace. This event also became the watershed in the World War II. 这一段也很不错哦。

To sum up, on the one hand, to communicate abstruse and abstract value, what the most effective way is just by way of images. On the other hand, to express something emotional or inciting people to share the some sense, the best way is through use of language.
觉得语言很流畅，表达清晰，通篇布局也很好，就是第2 段用显微镜那里不是很清楚，因为重点是显微镜把image呈现给学生让他们理解问题，可楼主那里感觉是人类用显微镜观察发现了这些东西，觉得可以改进下，其他的都很好。

fairy115UID：200324

看啦~~感觉melinda说的很清楚了，再补充一点，似乎论证的方法有些单调，可以穿插quote什么的？显得多变一些~~~
还有一个问题啊，我的文章你是不是贴帖子的时候没有注意呀，怎么是原文贴上去了阿？

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polymathUID：179557

发现几处错误，还是指出来吧！:)
In short, when it comes to such abstract conceptions and values, the most effective waysway,你后面就用的单数, maybe the only way to communicate those towith large groups of people is through the use of images.


In the second place, when toexpressing express an idea or value to many people involving different education levels and social backgrounds, it is arduous to deal with(it指带的什么呀). People with different perception levels, social backgrounds, and living experiences understand the same idea in dissimilar ways. To没有对于的意思！可以用As 作为代替 the idea that we should protect our environment, a farmer with little education perhaps does not care it anymore for the reason that he thinks of it of no relation with his interest. On the contrary, a engineer with high education working in a major city may become very worry about this pressing social problem because he takes it as the duty of everyone inon the earth. Thus, to communicatewhen conmunicating a value to a large quantity of people which have different backgrounds, it is difficult to address by use of language.

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ladzhUID：2105328

I agree with the speaker's assertion that in order to communicate an idea or value to others(a large number of people), use of images is superior to that of language, for the reason that image can depict  the meanings much more accurate and lively( rather删) than by ways of using language. However, in some cases, language has its advantage to express an idea or value to audience.

In the first place, it is much easier and more effective to communicate an idea or value to people by means of images, which is accurate and vivid to express ideas deep. As a student, it is sure that we have some experiences involving study. When faced with something abstract, or uneasy to express by words, we will appeal to the means of images. For example, teachers educate us the idea science is of great power. They will show some images about astronauts’ discover(ing) secret(用mysterious更好一些) universe, and with (the) help of electron microscope, human  (beings) has(have) observed little size(minute) particles such as molecule, atom, electron, and so forth.  If not through images, such conceptions(这两个例子是不是符合主题句当中的idea 和value呢？) are too abstruse to understand. In short, when it comes to such abstract conceptions and values, the most effective ways, maybe the only way to communicate those to large groups of people is through(换个词吧，重复率太高，比如by) use／using of images.

In the second place, when to express a(an) idea or value to many people involving different education(al) levels and social backgrounds, it is arduous to deal with. People with different perception levels, social backgrounds, and living experiences understand the same idea in dissimilar way(ways). To the idea that we should protect our environment(简单写成as for the idea of environmental protection), a farmer with little education perhaps does not care it anymore for the reason that he thinks of it of no relation with his interest. On the contrary, a(an) engineer with high education working in a major city(cosmopolitan) may become very worry(worried) about this pressing social problem because he takes it as the duty of everyone in the earth(on the earth). Thus, to communicate a value to a large quantity of people which(who)  have different backgrounds, it is difficult to address by use of language.(在这段你没有论述图象与语方相比有什么优势呀？最好指出，如果通过图像的方式，那么不同背景的人认识这个观念的差异将会缩小。  这样的话，才使你的论点有说服力。)  

Admittedly, when it comes to something emotional(这算不算idea或value呢？是否有必要指明？), the best way to deliver his ideas to others is through the use of language. Common sense tells me that words have a magical power. They can bring either the greatest happiness or deepest despair and words are also capable of arousing the strongest emotions and prompting all man's actions. A telling example involving the claim(speech) by President Roosevelt after US suffered a swift surprise attack（unexpected attack）, Pearl Harbor, amply illustrates this point of view. The claim(权利要求？演讲用speech) motivated whole(all the) citizens' patriotism to protect their nation and peace（删除）. This event also became the watershed in the World War II（最后一句是为了服从主题句呢）.

To sum up, on the one hand, to communicate abstruse and abstract value, what the most effective way is just by way of images. On the other hand, to express something emotional or inciting people to share the some sense, the best way is through use of language.（开头和结尾呼应的好。）
总体感觉不错，指出一些问题， 水平有限，仅供参考。