进军美利坚作文小组9.3作业-goback

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9.3 是否同意，年長的朋友的建議比同年紀的 advice 更要valuable


Tosome people, when they face with some difficulties, they would prefer to resortto older friends, such as their elder cousins, sisters and even their parents.No one can deny that all of them would give you some helpful advice becausethey experienced more. However, the discussion is about which advice is morevaluable, the advice from the older friends or that from the contemporaries. Asfor me, I think I believe the viewpoints of the concurrent friends. There arethe reasons listed as following.

Firstly,the contemporaries have the same experience or the same thoughts with us, notas the older ones. With the development of the society, many thoughts of thepast are out of date nowadays. Only catching up with the time, we can find thebest solution. As we know, the older friends do not live in the same age withus, and many of the ideas of them would be somewhat out of date, or do notmatch with our behaviors at least. Thus, the information from them would haveless value than that from the contemporaries. For example, when I face withsome problems, I would resort to my roommates first. Because I think the advicefrom them would match the age.

Secondly,we spend less time together with the older people. As for me, most of my timeis spent in the school, which I do everything together with the contemporaries.However, in one year, I only can spend one or two month with my family membersor other older people when I am not at school. Perhaps, some older people areup to date, but they have less chance to understand our difficulties. Thecontemporaries have the lives together with us, as a result, they can know whatthe problem really is and how to solve would be better.

Inaddition, in general, we wish to get more agreement from the contemporaries,but not others. So if we can follow the contemporary advice, we will feel morecomfortable because we get praise or permission from people who have the sameage with us. When I wanted to buy my first phone, I ask for help to my parentsand roommates at the same time. But they gave me two different solutions whichbrought me into dilemmas. As last, I followed my roommates since theunification with the contemporaries leads me to feel safe and attainment.

Inconclusion, I do not agree with the title statement, that the advice from olderfriends is more valuable than that from the contemporaries. The older peoplegive us some important information, but the advice from the contemporarieswould be more valuable since they are more close to us, no matter from theaspect of geographic distance or from the spiritual world.

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To some people, when they face with some difficulties, they would prefer to resort to older friends, such as their elder cousins, sisters and even their parents.No one can deny that all of them would give you some helpful advice because they experienced more. However, the discussion is about which advice is more valuable, the advice from the older friends or that from the contemporaries. As for me, I think I believe the viewpoints of the concurrent friends. There are the reasons listed as following.

Firstly,the contemporaries have the same experience or the same thoughts with us, not as the older ones. With the development of the society, many thoughts of the past are out of date nowadays. Only catching up with the time, we can find the best solution. As we know, the older friends do not live in the same age with us, and many of the ideas of them would be somewhat out of date, or do not match with our behaviors at least. Thus, the information from them would have less value than that from the contemporaries. For example, when I face with some problems, I would resort to my roommates first. Because I think the advice from them would match the age.

Secondly,we spend less time together with the older people. As for me, most of my timeis (were) spent in the school, which I do everything together with the contemporaries.However, in one year(each year), I only can spend one or two month with my family members or other older people when I am not at school. Perhaps, some older people are up to date, but they have less chance to understand our difficulties. The contemporaries have the lives together with us, as a result, they can know what the problem really is and how to solve would be better.

In addition, in general, we wish to get more agreement(~s) from the contemporaries,but not others. So if we can follow the contemporary advice, we will feel more comfortable because we get praise or permission from people who have the sameage with us. When I wanted to buy my first phone, I ask for help to my parentsand roommates at the same time. But they gave me two different solutions whichbrought me into dilemmas. As last, I followed my roommates since the unification with the contemporaries leads me to feel safe and attainment." ~4 G2 \$ K& e  j

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In conclusion, I do not agree with the title statement, that the advice from olderfriends is more valuable than that from the contemporaries. The older peoplegive us some important information, but the advice from the contemporarieswould be more valuable since they are more close to us, no matter from theaspect of geographic distance or from the spiritual world.

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