！！神了！！今天抽到的i和a的题号都是147！！

问啊问啊UID: 2519774

这是什么征兆？竟然题号相同，买彩票还是干吗去？


地点：大连
时间：2009年9月4日10:30
Issue：147     【spectacular】AW修订版高频28
Argu： 147       大连机经090301修订版高频31



我的语言写的超烂啊，都是大白话，小学生作文的样子
147"Tradition and modernization are incompatible. One must choose between them."
Issue除去开头结尾，我就写了两段
正文第一段写了modern代替tradition的地方，举了通信和交通两方面的例子，进行了对比，段尾来个反问，真的是可以替代二选一，incompatible么？
然后第二段论述了一个关于中国春节的例子，说明了传统和现代是怎么融合在一起的
最后来个总结
结构和分析上感觉还可以，就是语言太白痴了，简单句和简单词充斥行文，总共大概500多字，好囧


147The following appeared in an editorial in a business magazine.

"Although the sales of Whirlwind video games have declined over the past two years, a recent survey of video-game players suggests that this sales trend is about to be reversed. The survey asked video-game players what features they thought were most important in a video game. According to the survey, players prefer games that provide lifelike graphics, which require the most up-to-date computers. Whirlwind has just introduced several such games with an extensive advertising campaign directed at people 10 to 25 years old, the age-group most likely to play video games. It follows, then, that the sales of Whirlwind video games are likely to increase dramatically in the next few months."

我攻击了4处:
1.调查样本的随机性和样本容量缺乏可靠性
用的北美上的一个通杀段落：
A threshold problem with the argument involves a survey, whose statistical reliability is dubious. Namely, the speaker provides no concrete evidences that the number of the respondents is statistically essential or that the respondents are representative of ...... universally. In other words,...the survey merely involves…A…and…B… . It is entirely possible that A and B cannot represent...... Lacking datum referring to the randomness and the size of the survey’s sample, the speaker cannot draw a broad conclusion based on the survey.

再往后有点慌，错误分析的不够仔细，论述不深入，imong老大的3篇写argument的论文反复强调要深入分析，写details，可考试我就是想不出来怎么写
于是后面的3个错误都是一样的攻击模式：
(1)作者的unfairly得出了什么什么结论；(2)这不对，完全有可能是因为。。。。。。；(3)所以作者的这个结论没有说服力
下面三个错误是：
2.10到25岁的人可能不是购买游戏的主力军，可能25岁以上的才是主力军
3.就算他们是主力军，也不能说在few months里就提高销量，因为这个年龄段正好多为学生，很可能他们开学了没时间玩游戏
4.还有一个错误就是一开始提到的调查说玩家最喜欢的lifelike graphic，没有进一步的资料表明这个调查结果用于提高游戏质量，增加了这一功能了，很可能调查规调查，实际上游戏还是和调查之前一样没有改进，因此不能说销量会有提高

argu的语言也是写的比较烂的

我估计我这个样子只能3分啊，各位大侠看看呢？

还有，我准备笔试的囧况在这里：https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1003585-1-1.html 麻烦了

jjs1986UID: 2478040

3分肯定有

草木也知愁UID: 2487572

考完就别多想了 安心去准备笔试 留下的时间不多了

问啊问啊UID: 2519774

谢谢草木版主和沙发的朋友鼓励，我还有个问题 ，更新在帖子最底下了，连接到笔考板块的，谢啦