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the number of factories in Clearview has doubled   有可能是当地的物质资源丰富,吸引大量的企业。甚至是Frank本不想多建工厂,是政府的其他人促使的。(看到这里我感觉frank本不想建工厂此句似乎很眼熟,大家似乎都是开头先说frank可能不想建工厂,我感觉吧,其实这句话是在说,诚然frank是原来的council的人,但不代表他的执政意向和原来人士一致)
air pollution levels have increased  有可能是周边的城市对其的污染,或人民生活(汽车、供暖)排放了大量的有害气体。(这个其实重点强调非工厂的污染必然性,有理,不过也可以这么写,说工厂的污染可能并非主要污染。因为原来的写法是不否认工厂污染而且还不对工厂污染程度表态,致使论证不充分)

the local hospital has treated 25 percent more patients with respiratory illnesses   有可能前几年有很多病例没上报,(这个真是天才的创意……不过实在是没必要当主要论点)去年监管严格上报,病例增多。(你可以说,生病并不一定是空气污染啊,可能是别的xxxx,你从数字上找茬一定要慎重呢~)
elect Ann Green problems will certainly be solved 有可能其他人比他还能解决这问题。(其实还有一点就是ag也不一定能把问题解决掉,即便能解决环境问题,也不说明她就有资格当官)

时间同时性≠因果关系     必然性不一定成立 (亮点,心里明白就行,别出现在论证过程中)
英文文章我就不批了,让别人给批比较好,注意,选择性无视我
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草莓酱拌饭小组 Issue--7 BY Donna

本帖最后由 Donna.# 于 2009-11-3 20:39 编辑

以下是Iusse7 之前看的追星剑前辈对第一篇的感悟:
  如果不写第一篇,总在看,实际落笔中才能发觉的问题是永远经历不到——而这些恰是备考中着力克服的。比如说写句子构思,用词,段落思路安排,等等,很多方面。所以说,第一篇的“最主要”作用,不是在于写的好不好,写的快不快,而是在于:到底写没写!

"The video camera provides such an accurate and convincing record of contemporary life that it has become a more important form of documentation than written records."


中文的提纲:
1 起:背景+原题的问题+自己的观点(written records are still important)
2“+”  录像等视频记录手段确实提供了一个更加生动的,从某种角度上看(图像,声音等)必书面更加全面的信息,这些可以帮助人们更好的记住,同时也有助于信息的交流与互惠,在电子信息多媒体时代中,以数字音像的方式来记录已在很多领域中发展了。例子:新闻报道(灾难性、政治性、文艺性的新闻报道广告,网络多媒体教学等)
3“-” 加入了媒体的政治倾向,一些video也不是很真实,为了某些目的(政治、经济利益),我们所得到的信息也可能是经过剪辑性的
4“-"  在法律的领域,纸笔记录仍有不可替代的作用,例子:合同,立法,国家档案和重要资料等。纸上的记录能给人想象,思考的空间,反倒是图像画面,已经定了型,例子:电视,电影所翻拍的小说一般没有原著好。再说还有很多不发达的国家及地区,没有video camera 的条件,笔纸是很普遍的。
5合:过分地强调video camera的作用,是有所短,寸有所长,要合理的利用,才能实现高效,发展。


      In the era of rapid development of electronic science and technology, an increasing phenomena that information recorded by video camera becomes popular has emerged gradually. As a high-tech record on image and sound, video camera indeed plays its great role in mass media realm. However, the speaker overstates its importance, and then neglects other realms when considering recording methods.

     

     Without doubt, video camera provides not only vivid image but also sound which assist us to experience and retrospect these unforgettable and significant incidences viewed as milestones for a period of time. As we know, coverage, especially on catastrophic events and political incidences, will attract widespread attention if mass media release reports on live. In fact, the more images the better. However, in order to increase publication of magazines and audience rating, many mass media sacrifice their occupational moral to distort facts by cutting off some pieces of scenes. What is more, governments and political leaders try to gain support so that they dissimulate images in front of video. That is to say, the old saying that to see is to believe does not apply in such realm, except that one experiences in person. As a consequence, record by video camera does not mean convincing and accurate in all cases.


      Moreover, in other realms, such as law, legislation, history and so forth, it is the written words that have legal force. Common sense tells me that if one borrows money from another for fear that he or she would bilk later, written words about that must be the best method for legal protection. Similarly, contractions between companies, even nations are also carried out by written words rather than video camera. Written words provide sufficient evidence and contents serving to review and analysis conveniently, therefore, important documents must be recorded by written words.


    The fact that our living standard has improved fast is out of question. However, there are plenty of people struggle for bread in developing countries in which video camera does not prevail comparing to papers. How can video camera be more important than written words in these countries which mainly focus on written record?

     

    In a word, the video camera does have its own merits, the point lies on that we should make better use of the technology without
abandoning our traditional customs, which also have their own merits that advancing technologies do not have, rather on comparing with each of them.



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3“-” 加入了媒体的政治倾向,一些video也不是很真实,为了某些目的(政治、经济利益),我们所得到的信息也可能是经过剪辑性的
你这个是干嘛的?是评论video和written record的么?政治倾向这个思路很不错,说明你想的很多,不过不能离题啊。我感觉这一段你已经跑题了。
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发表于 2009-11-3 19:59:12 |显示全部楼层
我是在补Iusse 7, 我之前不知道头头留了这个,今天下午我补的。

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本帖最后由 Donna.# 于 2009-11-15 14:47 编辑

又看了前三章的追星,个人总结为红笔。
1 关键字
如果说社会稳定依赖于、取决于其对极端行为的反应的话,窃以为这里的动词未免有些夸张。诡辩一点的说,如果在absence of the extremes的情况下,是不是就没法判断the stability of a society了呢?与其说depends,倒不如说reflect比较合适。我破题的思路,也即从depends这个关键词入手,通过分析找到并建立新的关键词予以取代,从而建立自己的论点。
关键字为动词——考虑它实际的作用,有没有其他更合理的词可以取代。识别题目的关键字至少有两点基本作用:其一,阐明和确立所进行讨论的前提,不仅是为了在文章中明确体现自己的认识,更同时是给自己明确自己的认识——免得因为对关键词的认识从一开始就模糊摇摆然后写到后半背叛前半;其二,明确了关键字,也就抓住题目的核心问题和关系所在,从关键字入手进行思考,自然是打开思路源泉的首选。
找取代的关键字要立题, 也就是确立总结句。时刻牢记关键字!跟着TS!
2 more
实际上,关键不在于是“中庸”了还是“一边倒”了,关键还是看你——具体的——怎么写。
题目说imagination is more important than knowledge,文章给了个回应叫做both are important云云,对题目进行了彻底的藐视。再往下看,人家的b1写imagination的重要性,b2写knowledge的重要性,b3写only the interaction will do us good云云——整个一篇下来,连一点儿补救的机会都没有。完全跑题。——人家要的就是做这个比较,对more的response在哪里???从thesis到body,等效于只字未提。“both of them are important”≠ they are of the same importance是一个超典型的语言背景背叛思维的例子。
所以顺便说一下:表达的时候小心着点,中文背景能淡化就淡化,小心别自己语言背叛自己思维了。有让步的话,注意不要让让步抢了正文的风头;
在more的题目中论述一定要紧扣比较,不能依据中文的语言背景,“含蓄”——老美可不吃那一套!归根结底:把contrast做足了。
Important &necessary
Both are important≠both are necessary题目要对 重要性 这个 “同一属性” 下的 “各自内容” 进行比较,而用both are important,回答回来的是 两个都有“重要性”,却没说各自重要性“究竟多大、哪个更大”,岂不是什么都没说。必要性面前,没有程度差异,只要标准确定了,就只有“是”和“不是”。那么当两者的“必要性”属性的都是“是”,这里,就已经建立了对比了——大家都是必需的。如果要写Equally important的回应,经常是诉诸both are necessary的分析上;而一开始就构思both are necessary的分析时候,结论也经常就落在Equally important上面。(equally important和both are necessary并不是划等号的,只是两者中间可以建立一个since both are necessary, therefore equally important的常规推断,而这自然也不排除although both are necessary, one is more important的。) both are necessary有可能推出equally important,而both are important是肯定无法推出equally important
都important,不叫对比;都necessary, 才叫对比。做好对more题目的应对,其是很简单,无非两点:要有对比,要有结论。写的时候如果能倾斜一下也许更为取巧和轻松。就同样好比issue73,如果立论立在imagination的有用是必须建立在一定knowledge的基础上,凭空瞎想是没用的,两者差别一体现(实际上是把knowledge放到前提的位置了),这个more,两边高下立判了。
必要性可用without举行体现!
3 1+1
这类题目实际上相当的好写。实际上我认为这类题目除了前后均同意原题的时候可能展开还略费心神之外,只要前后出现一处反对或者拆分关键字,那就根本不愁展开了,明确论点例证(或理证)支持一篇文章很轻松就能出来。
前半句为一个论述,后半句为一个论述,这种题要充分体现brainstrom.

4 事实与倾向
issue163. "Most people live, whether physically or morally, in a very restricted circle. They make use of a very limited portion of the resources available to them until they face a great problem or crisis."
该命题对people的一种行为进行了阐述,是一个标准的事实性命题。Okay, 如果在issue文章里面出现people should learn to better make use of their resources这样的分论点的话,恐怕这篇文章就要出问题:题目提出的是一个状态,而自己的文章立论无非是要论证题目提出的这个状态是对的,是错的,或者不一定的,或者etc. 无论如何,people should learn to better这一倾向性命题都没法拿来论证文章的论点——总不能因为应该是,所以就是吧?

从过去的经验看,大家把should题目给弄糟的情况不多见——should题目给立成了is的似乎没见过,而把is题目给弄砸的相比而言是普遍现象。
前者是用should来作为分论点——这样分论点帮助证明题目的is的主论点了吗?应该如何没法证明状态是什么。既然不能帮助立论,扯那么多干什么?这种所谓的补充说明实际上完全多余——对主论点一点帮助都没有。
过去我们在这里犯的错误不算少。我的总结观点:

1
.倾向不能拿来证明事实
2
.不涉及价值判断的事实不能拿来证明倾向
要分清论述的是事实还是倾向, 才能写到点子上。原来一直将其搞混,此处一定要小心。对倾向性陈述进行支持必然要有涉及价值判断的事实性陈述
5 not ...but 选择题

明确你的判断标准是什么,把这个标准拿去实施评价,说清楚这个评价的过程和结论,文章就能够写出来了。无论怎么写,只要自己先明确:我为什么支持/反对?我的判断标准是什么?就好。而当你能够再进一步,分析出你的对立观点背后的价值标准的时候,就可以把它拿出来放到文章里面去批判了。
总论点就是这个, 判断标准是写作的大方向,例子等都要支持它,这样才不跑题。
6 conditioning拆分
Terminology讲的是对题干的进行识别分析拆分定义etc,而如果题目里面出现了详细的展开(有破折号,such as等),直接照着这个展开继续下去是个不错的思路,尤其是出现了every aspect和any field的时候。当然,手头的准备和素材要够用才行,如果没把握洋洋洒洒的展开下去,可能还是要另找入手点,把原因说清楚。Thesis : Different situations different conclusions, for example when A … how ever when B的样子。而同样的内容有的人可能写成:Thesis: The conclusion depend on a specific quality of the situation. When quality=A ….. However when quality=B … 在这里:后者对situation的quality的明确,对文章有很大的提升和帮助,效果就比前者大为加强。可以看出,前者只是识别了不同的场合下的happening,而后者从开始就提出场合不同背后实质性的性质差异,然后依照这一差异进行展开。
找到cases的不同应用范围并不能有很好的效果,真正应该是背后的quality很重要!
1.In some fields people must depend on outsiders….. However, in some other fields people need not to…..
2.In fields derived from the cross linking and interaction of the fundamentals people have to depend…. However in those fields so fundamental that they are self-sustainable…..
两者的差异并不算大,只是后者要把关键核心明确出来并且放到指导位置来强化并引领展开。光知道Case不够,condition要明确。后者才是决定性的。(决定了:以后使用conditioning这个词代替case by case,nod……

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发表于 2009-11-6 18:34:50 |显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 Donna.# 于 2009-11-6 19:21 编辑

今天又看了五个杨鹏的长难句,用组长的指示,收获很大,在这里总结一二。
首先,要明确阅读的禁忌:                                         正确的方法:(当然不一定防止四海皆准,但大部分人都是用)
1看不懂也不要回视                                                  1按照意群来读(但最后要不拘泥与它)
2不要死抱着语法(考场上没时间分析语法)                     2要进行合理化推测
终极目标:独到每个词,每一句话,大脑中第一反应就是其意思而不是其中文释义。
GRE阅读常用句:极长的插入语同位语(往往把主语搞的如隔千山万水)  复杂的修饰成分(把句子弄得巨长)  形式繁多倒装(让读者摸不着头脑)   省略(极易产生歧义)   
我现在在合理化推测上差的很多,语感天生就不好,高中时英语就是会的答对,不会的根本猜不准的。现在正痛苦地改掉回视的毛病。不回视的读法,让我阅读速度下降了好多,但回过头来看看,总体时间还是有些提高的。

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发表于 2009-11-6 20:18:25 |显示全部楼层

Issues185 草莓酱拌饭小组 BY Donna

本帖最后由 Donna.# 于 2009-11-14 18:27 编辑

185 “ Sandals--whether in politics, academia,or other areas--can be useful. They focus our attention on probems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could."

关键词:scandals     useful    attention  
总论点:Scandals atrract people's interest in many fields and favor our society in some degree.
分论点:1 why do scandals  focus our attention on problems better than speaker or reformer.
           2What is the benefit of attention bring from scandals? learn from it.   example:
            政治上,人们更加关注政治,推动民主发展,道德标准完善。社会上政治舞弊、贪污的关注加大,会警惕一些想要干坏事的政客;
            娱乐圈,很多明星是需要scandals提升自己的知名度,这样媒体得到更大的利益;(这个没写,待定)
            学术,提高了该领域的关注度,科学家对其领域的兴趣会更加浓厚,并且不意味破坏科学的基础(Hwang Woo Suk  stem cell line)。
           
Scandals seem to be such an indispensable element in today’s newspapers and magazines that people have been accustomed with them, no matter the truth behind them. Can we make use of scandals perceived absolutely as about negative evaluations, but almostly central issues arousing wide concern? In some degree, our society benefit from scandals beyond perception.

To begin with, people cannot reject the attraction brought from scandals, especially celebrities and big counties playing important roles in the world, for the natural character is inherited as human beings. Enforced by this internal character that people show great interest in others’ secrets and private life, we focus on the scandals beyond consciousness. Therefore, sandals have a greater advantage in wide spread when compared with propaganda coming from speakers and reformers. These scandals deprived from many realms can influence an individual, a nation or even the whole world.

Moreover, conceded that some scandals merely about trivial and boring things, which provide recreations and topics for idle people; others, mostly relating to hidden problems in the society, reflect great significance on moral, humanity, science and so forth. As an old saying goes that failure is the mother of success, people can learn more from frustrations. In political realm, it is no wonder that some governors are accused of corruption or sexual harassment, for example, Clinton's sex scandal and Watergate scandal leading to the resignation of President Nixon, as if politicians lie in a condition inspected from all the people in any given time or place. What does it mean by that? The public of scandals not only show up the hidden problems existing in the policy and government, but also indicate that our society does not lake of right of freedom speech, one viewed as the necessary part of democracy. Furthermore, the scandals warn other politicians deal well with their private life and never dream of breaking the law because all men are born equal before law.

In scientific realm, scandals generally impact little on the foundations of science tested for centuries by a great deal of descendents. Similarly, considering its great power in focusing attention, scientists probably pay much more attention on projects which serve to be the mark of hot projects and directions predicting future research in the scandal. Hwang Woo Suk, a Korean scientist, lies about cloning stem cell line of human at last considered as a big scandal in science. How does it do harm to our society? In fact, it provoked a broad concern about cloning in ethic prospective aside from scientific technology. Such concern helps us find the real meaning of scientific research and prevent some extreme scientists mainly care for the research in itself rather than cultivate a prospective on the whole.

To sum up, sandals plays its important role gradully in many fields. Only if we think over the real things behind scandals, can we make better use of them to utilize the scrutiny of people and improve the deficiency of the scociety.


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本帖最后由 dairyman 于 2009-11-6 20:50 编辑

看了你的思路,感觉你好好看了追星箭……
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发表于 2009-11-7 00:41:02 |显示全部楼层
谢谢奶男的夸奖,我真是有好好的看了啊,可以说再一次感到审题的难度,与重要性。

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Argument_草莓酱拌饭小组 BY Donna

The following proposal was raised at a meeting of the Franklin City Council.
"Franklin Airport, which is on a bay, is notorious for flight delays. The airport management wants to build new runways to increase capacity but can only do so by filling in 900 acres of the bay. The Bay Coalition organization objects that filling in the bay will disrupt tidal patterns and harm wildlife. But the airport says that if it is permitted to build its new runways, it will fund the restoration of 1,000 acres of wetlands in areas of the bay that have previously been damaged by industrialization. This plan should be adopted, for it is necessary to reduce the flight delays, and the wetlands restoration part of the plan ensures that the bay's environment will actually be helped rather than hurt."

assumption:
1 Building new ranways will help reduce the flight delays.

2 Airpot management will keep its promise to fund restoration wetlands destroied by industialization.
3 The restoration will work out well and actually be helped,for 1000 acres are larger than 900 acres.
  
analysis:
build new runways =》reduce flight delays
restoration damaged wetlands of 100 acres offset 900 acres filling wetlands=》help rather than hurt
in all: This plan should be adopted.

alternative explanation  or counterexample:
flight delays 有可能Franklin Airport的顾客本来很少,增加容量没用,而是机场管理制度,和建设的问题,例行的安检和相关登机手续的办理十分不方便及效率低下;天气原因,Franklin City 地理位置导致天气情况一般不适合起飞,大雾,气压低。
restoration wetlands 有可能没有兑现他的承诺;没说重整的结果,若污染严重,根本就很难治理,效果不好。
helped rather than hurt 有可能filling的那块比industrialization更具环保价值,野生动物多;


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发表于 2009-11-9 21:31:26 |显示全部楼层
Scandals seem to be such an indispensable element in today’s newspapers and magazines that people have been accustomed with them, no matter the truth behind them. Can we make use of scandals perceived absolutely as about negative evaluations, but almostly central issues arousing wide concern? In some degree, our society benefit from scandals beyond perception.




To begin with, people cannot reject the attraction brought from scandals, especially celebrities and big counties playing important roles in the world, for the natural character inherited as human beings. Enforced by this internal character that people show great interest in others’ secrets and private life, we focus on the scandals beyond consciousness. Therefore, sandals have a greater advantage in wide spread when compared with propaganda coming from speakers and reformers. These scandals deprived from many realms can influence an individual, a nation or even the whole world.(先对比媒体宣传与丑闻,强调丑闻对于吸引眼球的作用力与影响力,我认为这种写法如果用在一分为二分析丑闻时也很好用)



(从政治界角度分析)
Moreover, conceded that some scandals merely about trivial and boring things, which provide recreations and topics for idle people; others, mostly relating to hidden problems in the society, reflect great significance on moral, humanity, science and so forth. As an old saying goes that failure is the mother of success, people can learn more from frustrations. In political realm, it is no wonder that some governors are accused of corruption or sexual harassment, for example, Clinton's sex scandal and Watergate scandal leading to the resignation of President Nixon, as if politicians lie in a condition inspected from all the people in any given time or place. What does it mean by that?(对例子进行深入解析,赞!) The public of scandals not only show up the hidden problems existing in the policy and government, but also indicate that our society does not lake of right of freedom speech, one viewed as the necessary part of democracy. Furthermore, the scandals warn other politicians deal well with their private life and never dream of breaking the law because all men are born equal before law.(强调了丑闻对于维持政治界廉洁的重要性)



(从科学界角度分析)
In scientific realm, scandals generally impact little on the foundations of science tested for centuries by a great deal of descendents. (在下不才,第一句话有些看不懂)Similarly, considering its great power in focusing attention, scientists probably pay much more attention on projects which serve to be the mark of hot projects and directions predicting future research in the scandal.(引出例证,又学了一招) Hwang Woo Suk, a Korean scientist, lies about cloning stem cell line of human at last considered as a big scandal in science. How does it do harm to our society?(引出科学丑闻的重要意义,本段论证关键所在) In fact, it provoked a broad concern about cloning in ethic prospective aside from scientific technology. Such concern helps us find the real meaning of scientific research and prevent some extreme scientists mainly care for the research in itself rather than cultivate a prospective on the whole.




To sum up, sandals plays its important role gradully in many fields. Only if we think over the real things behind scandals, can we make better use of them to utilize the scrutiny of people and improve the deficiency of the scociety.


读完Donna的文章深感自己的不足,从现在可以我必须要更加努力啊!祝愿大家一同迈入成功!

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【备考日志】草莓酱拌饭小组 eco BY Donna

本帖最后由 Donna.# 于 2009-11-15 14:51 编辑

Seeds of discontent


Oct 22nd 2009 | DES MOINES, IOWA
From The Economist print edition


America’s farmers threaten to block (阻碍)climate legislation



Illustration by David Simonds


AUTUMN is always a busy time in America’s farm belt. This autumn, however, it is particularly so. In early November farmers’ organisations across America’s states will receive packages of materials, such as cards and stickers(小貼紙), to wage an assault against climate-change legislation. Their goal is not to amend a bill, but kill it.


As the Senate considers carbon reducing laws, farm lobbyists(说客) have grown increasingly demanding. Tom Vilsack, Barack Obama’s agriculture secretary, insists that the benefits of a climate-change bill will outweigh the costs of expensive fuel and fertiliser. Farmers are not so sure. The House vision of the bill, a 1,200-page whopper(弥天大谎)passed in June, was loaded with concessions to appease farm-state politicians. Now farm lobbyists may win even more handouts(缴交讲义)in the Senate, or even ensure a bill fails. Because there are two senators for every state, rural states are over-represented in the Senate and farmers intend to take full advantage.


Mr Vilsack, who hails from Iowa, argues that legislation will do much for America’s farmers. Failing to reduce emissions could be disastrous, as warmer temperatures unleash(释放)floods and pestilence(瘟疫). But a bill also offers the opportunity for new farm revenue. Windmills would rise from grain fields. Farmers could sell carbon offsets, with dairy producers, for example, installing methane(甲烷) digesters.
Energy costs would, of course, rise. In an effort to mitigate(减轻) this, Collin Peterson, the chairman of the House agriculture committee, packed the House bill with perks. The Agriculture Department (USDA), not the Environmental Protection Agency, would oversee (监督)the agricultural offset programme. Rural electric co-operatives would be given more free allowances. Farmers would receive credit not just for new activities that reduce emissions, but for those already adopted, such as reduced tillage(耕作).
The Senate bill, presented in late September by Barbara Boxer and John Kerry, gives much less to agriculture. However, the proposal is a mere 821 pages long. The Senate agriculture committee is one of several likely to offer hefty(大幅)additions. Roger Johnson, the president of the 250,000-member National Farmers Union (NFU), favours unlimited domestic offsets (the House bill caps them at 1 billion tonnes) and more allowances for agriculture. Such changes, Mr Johnson argues, would create “significant income opportunities while doing the right thing environmentally”.
However the American Farm Bureau, whose members include huge producers as well as small, remains opposed to any bill. It argues that higher fuel and fertiliser costs would put American farmers at a competitive disadvantage. And fruit and vegetable growers would not benefit from an offset (抵消)programme. In its new campaign, the Farm Bureau urges members to send not just cards to politicians, but personally deliver their bureau caps, signed with the demand, “Don’t Cap Our Future”.
This fury arouses consternation in some corners. The House bill already overindulges agriculture, argues Craig Cox of the Environmental Working Group, a research and advocacy organisation. Furthermore, a USDA study of the House bill found that annual net farm income would decline by only 0.9% in the short term (2012-18), though it would fall 3.5% in the medium term (2027-33) and 7.2% in the long term (2042-48). And the USDA did not account for new demand for biofuels or likely changes in production practices. Mr Johnson of the nfu remains confident that the climate bill will be a boon. “People who say this is a huge cost increase and it’s going to put ag out of business—that’s just not so.”
Mr Vilsack thinks that a cap-and-trade(限额交易)system will eventually win over wary (警惕)farmers. “There’s a history of scepticism,” he explains. Farmers were reluctant to use mechanised farm equipment. They were reluctant to use hybrid(杂种) seeds. They now embrace both. In a few years, Mr Vilsack says, farmers may recognise the many benefits of a climate law, too. Assuming, that is, that one ever gets passed.这种类比的论证思路值得学习,精妙无误的类比!

Endangered species


Red alert


Nov 3rd 2009
From Economist.com


The number of species in danger of extinction



MORE than a third of the 47,677 species of plant and animal surveyed this year by the International Union for Conservation of Nature were found to be at risk. The IUCN's latest “Red List” includes 17,291 species in some degree of danger. This is an increase from 2008, although since more species are examined each year, more are found to be endangered. A further 875 species are considered extinct including 66 that are extinct in the wild. Habitat loss or a change in land use are frequently to blame. One of the six species categorised this year as being extinct in the wild is the Kihansi Spray Toad, which was last seen in its natural habitat in Tanzania in 2004. Nearly a third of all amphibians assessed by the IUCN are under threat, though that pales(相形见绌)by comparison with the three-quarters of plant species found to be in danger.



Tricks of the trade


Nov 2nd 2009
From Economist.com


Can the world stop governments from paying for the over-exploitation(过度开发) of fish?



OVERFISHING erodes(侵蚀) future prosperity by destroying today a resource that could yield benefits indefinitely.(无限期地,不确定地) Yet it is subsidised by billions of taxpayer dollars, euros and yen. Now a new chance to halt this insanity(疯狂) has emerged in the unlikely form of climate-change negotiations.


Landlubbers hand pots of money to fishermen. Rashid Sumaila, a researcher at the University of British Columbia, estimates that in 2003 (the most recent year for which data are available), the world’s fishing subsidies were $25 billion-30 billion. The value of fish landed in the same year was $82 billion. Furthermore, Dr Sumaila reckons(推算) that $16 billion of the subsidies either promote overcapacity by helping fishermen buy new or bigger boats or encourage overfishing by subsidising fuel.


AFP


In theory, this problem could be sorted out by the World Trade Organisation (WTO). But the issue has languished(冷落) over the years and the current Doha round of trade negotiations remains moribund. (垂死)Oceana, an environmental pressure group, argues that the subsidy of fisheries should now be “decoupled” from the Doha round.


Victor do Prado, deputy chief of staff at the WTO, thinks the chances of that happening are slim. “Fisheries is part of the overall Doha mandate,” he says. “As long as this issue is treated within the WTO it is difficult to decouple it from the rest of the round dossiers. What would countries like Japan and Korea be gaining by decoupling?” In other words, a global deal on fisheries subsidies is unlikely because countries such as China, Japan, Korea, Taiwan and Spain—all of which have large fishing fleets—do not want to cut subsidies.


Moreover, Mr do Prado argues that his organisation is the only one that could broker a deal. “The advantage of negotiating within the WTO is that nothing is agreed until everything is agreed,” he says. “Trade-offs in one area may mean that some countries will give in on another area. And if you don’t discuss fisheries subsidies within WTO where else are you going to do it?”


Yet the global fate of fisheries does not entirely hang on a stalled trade agreement. That is because, in the run-up to the United Nations Climate Change Conference taking place next month in Copenhagen, fuel subsidies are on the political agenda. Fisheries account for 1.2% of global oil consumption and emit more than 130m tonnes of carbon dioxide a year. That makes the industry similar in scale to the Netherlands, the 18th-most prolific oil-consuming country.

On September 25th leaders of the G20 group of countries said they would phase out(逐步淘汰)
fossil-fuel subsidies in the “medium term”. So unless the world’s fishing fleets covert to biofuels, there may be some hope for dealing with the subsidy of overfishing. As for fleet overcapacity, that would appear to remain within the remit of the WTO. Efforts to address it should be redoubled. That is because, in subsidising unsustainable practices, governments are promoting a licensed form of theft by one generation from the next.

The recent banking crisis has so far swallowed about $3 trillion dollars and caused great outrage. Over the past decade, fishing subsidies have cost $250 billion. If there were only a twelfth of the outcry(强烈抗议), your correspondent suspects that the practice would be halted.

For peat's(泥炭) sake, stop

Nov 5th 2009 | BARCELONA
From The Economist print edition

The world’s wetlands are big sources of greenhouse gases

BOGS(沼泽), mires(泥泞), marshes(沼泽), swamps(沼泽), fens (沼泽)and quagmires(沼泽)—whatever they are called, and wherever they are found, peaty wetlands emit about 1.3 billion tonnes of CO2 a year as a result of human activity that drains(枯竭) them and thus exposes them to the oxidative(氧化) effect of the atmosphere. Nor does this figure include the effect of fire on dried-up bogs. That can double the amount of CO2 released in a year, in those places it affects.

That, at least, is the conclusion of a report published by Wetlands International, a lobby group, at the United Nations Framework Convention on Climate Change meeting being held in Barcelona this week. Hans Joosten of the University of Greifswald, in Germany, who is one of the report’s authors, said that although drained peat occupies a mere 0.3% of the world’s land surface, it is responsible, in total, for 6% of man-made CO2 emissions.

The report also apportions(分发) blame. Top of the list, by a long way, is Indonesia—which emits 500m tonnes of CO2 a year, not including the consequences of fire. But richer countries are guilty, too. The next culprit (罪魁祸首)is Russia, followed by China, America and Finland (see chart).

The report’s findings, raising the profile of peat, contrast with the conclusions of a paper on deforestation published this week in Nature Geoscience. This suggests the volume of emissions caused by cutting down trees may not be as great as is generally believed.

The conventional figure is that tree-felling causes 20% of man-made CO2 emissions. Guido van der Werf of the Free University of Amsterdam, who wrote the paper, reckons the figure is closer to 12%. There is probably some double-counting in the two sets of figures, because many peat bogs are found in forests, and are thus drained as those forests are cleared. Nevertheless, the coincident publication of these studies suggests a change of emphasis may be needed, and that efforts should be made to preserve not just forests, but also bogs.

One approach might be to encourage uses of marshland that do not desiccate(失水)the peat—for example, growing moisture-loving rubber trees rather than oil palms(棕榈油), which need dry soils. Another might be to pay for the “reletting” of abandoned land. Controlling fires is also important. Indeed, a recent report for the Indonesian government by McKinsey, a consultancy, suggests that a combination of avoiding the further deforestation of non-converted marshes, better water management, reletting dried peat and fire control might reduce the amount of CO2 emitted from the country’s peatlands by 900m tonnes a year out of a total—fire-damage and all—of 1.5 billion tonnes.

Wetlands enthusiasts are thus calling for the climate-change convention that will, with luck, be agreed in Copenhagen next month to include financial incentives either to avoid the drainage of marshes in the first place or to rewet(再润湿)them. Such incentives are not, at present, proposed. Time is short and negotiators are currently trying to shrink the text of the agreement, not add to it.

Should the politicians fail, however, it would leave a door open for the private sector. Many individuals and companies choose to ameliorate(改善) their CO2 emissions on a voluntary basis, using so-called carbon offsets. The leading provider of standards for such offsets, the Voluntary Carbon Standard, based in Washington, DC, is, even now, considering new rules to bring peatland reletting and conservation projects within its ambit.(范围)

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【备考日志】草莓酱拌饭小组 A4 BY Donna

本帖最后由 Donna.# 于 2009-11-18 23:06 编辑

The following was posted on an Internet real estate discussion site.
“Of the two leading real estate firms in our town-Adams Realty and Fitch Realty-Adams is clearly superior. A has 40real estate agents. In contrast, Fitch has 25, many of whom work only part-time. Moreover, Ad’s revenue last year was twice as high as that of Fitch, and included home sales that averaged $168,000compared to F’$144,000. Homes listed with A sell faster as well: ten years ago, I listed my home with F and it took more than four months to sell; last year, when I sold another home, I listed it with A, and it took only one month. Thus, if you want to sell your home quickly and at a good price, you should use A. “
assumption:
1 The part-time workers have less quality for the job than full-time workers. The more the agents are, the more efficient and effective the company will be.
2 It is totally the same situation before as the one in last year considering revenue.
3 The two cases are comparable even though ten years have passed by.



analysis

conclusion:  choose A

more agents of A + many part-time workers of F==>F does not have an advatage on employors
more revenue of A than F last year==> A  make more profits
a personal case, ten years VS last year ==>A works more efficiently

alternative explanation  or counterexample:
140 workers of A do not work well. To the contrary, 25 part-time workers of F have more qualification in real estate. 错误类比qualityquantity,但从数量和人工作的时间来比较,忽略了工作效率和能力, 还有可能人多反而机制等运行不好,管理上有更多的问题。
2That the situation happened last year was a aberration. 即不完全比较一直以来F都比A好,只用一年的不能说明问题, 去年A 接收的房子比F大,质量高, 自然买的比F好。
3无可比性。买的快:十年前房子不好买,现在时房地产业的春天;十年前的房子情况不好,现在的条件等都很好;人口的剧增,房子的需求增加。买的价格高:房子质量不同,本身价格就高;物价上涨,通货膨胀。

In this argument, the arguer recommends that people should use A rather than F to sell their home, because A is superior considering some of evidence, that A has more agents while many agents of F work part-time, and that A earns double last year. However, the arguer relies on several unsustainable assumptions which make the argument dubious as it stands.

In the first place, the arguer fails to consider the differentiate capabilities of the agents from two firms. The mere fact that A has more agents than F does not mean the additional agents will definitely help A increase profits and improve efficiency. Similarly, part-time workers can work productively or even better than full-time workers. As a result, it is entirely possible that F’s agents have more experience and abilities compared to A’s. If so, the evidence cited here cannot serve to demonstrate A firm is superior.

In the second place, the arguer overlooks situations before last years, which is also important when evaluating these two firms. Perhaps, the situation happened last year is just an aberration, namely, F had been earning more money than A for couple of years except last year. Chance that A received a lot of great business not that A do favor for selling them in high price, but that home itself than that of F.





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【备考日志】草莓酱拌饭小组 I50 BY Donna

本帖最后由 Donna.# 于 2009-11-15 21:12 编辑

50" In order to improve the quality of instruction at the college and university level, all faculty should be required to spend time working outside the academic world in professions relevant to the courses they teach."

关键词:quality    all faculty   working outside
总论点: As the quality of instructin contains many things

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