10.13进军美利坚作文组

LeviathaZUID: 2456472

不好意思，我习惯性地把题目理解成‘可以说赞同或者不赞同题目观点’，于是就按不赞同的说，改作文的同学辛苦了……就当换个角度看问题吧，谢谢：D
10.13 The parents do not understand their children as well today as parents understood their children 50 years ago

No matter how the world is changing and developing, parents still want to know what their children think about. However, comparing to the parents 50 year ago, parents today receive a higher education and keep a more open mind, so they can understand their children better.

Nowadays, due to the improvement of the parents' education background, the importance of communication with children is recognized by more and more people. 50 years ago, people held the idea that only the strict parents could bring up excellent children. That was, parents set a high standard for children to achieve, which gave the kids greater pressure, and would push them to be successful. However, the thought is evolving. Strictness does not mean everything, what's worse, it would build a wall between children and parents because children consider that they never be really concern about. People now believe that a parent should stand in the children's point of view to think about. As a result, they can understand their children.

Moreover, since parents today keep a more open mind, children would be inclined to talk with their parents about the problems met in their lives. As I mentioned above, children might find it difficulties to communication with their parents 50 years ago, due to the inequality between them. Now, the relationship becomes something that more like friends. Therefore, parents can understand their children easier.

Finally, the development of technology also provides some convenience to connect the parents and the children. Communication is the first step of understanding. 50 years ago, cellphone was not as prevalent as today, and internet also could not be use such often. How did parents and children keep connection with each other usually? The answer was by letter, which took too much time to send and was at a risk of lost. At present, parents can know what their children think immediately, as long as the children want to tell them.

In conclusion, parents today actually understand their children better than the parents 50 year ago. They are more conscious to understand their children, and children want to communicate with them accordingly. Also technology causes the communication become more possible.

我是chineseladyUID: 2662783

No matter how the world is changing and developing, parents still want to know what their children think about. However, comparing to the parents 50 year ago, parents today receive a higher education and keep a more open mind, so they can understand their children better.开头很干脆好

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Nowadays, due to the improvement of the parents' education background, the importance of communication with children is recognized by more and more people.呵呵父母跟孩子的沟通跟父母教育没啥关系吧 50 years ago, people held the idea that only the strict parents could bring up excellent children. That was, parents set a high standard for children to achieve, which gave the kids greater pressure, and would push them to be successful.貌似是现在父母的本质,50年前吃都吃不上还啥high standard..现在我家教小学生9岁都学新概念,,父母逼的呗 However, the thought is evolving. Strictness does not mean everything, what's worse, it would build a wall between children and parents because children consider that they never be really concern about-they have never been concerned. People now believe that a parent should stand in the children's point of view to think about. As a result, they can understand their children.

Moreover, since parents today keep a more open mind, children would be inclined to talk with their parents about the problems(they) met in their lives. As I mentioned above, children might find it difficulties to communication用动词 with their parents 50 years ago, due to the inequality between them. Now, the relationship becomes something that more like friends. relationship between parents and children are more like friendship now. Therefore, parents can understand their children easier.

Finally, the development of technology also provides some convenience to connect the parents and the children. Communication is the first step of understanding. 50 years ago, cellphone was not as prevalent as today可以说那时候经济有限社会根本没电话, and internet also could not be use such often..MM那时候好像连美国佬都没用上的说. How did parents and children keep connection with each other usually? The answer was by letter, which took too much time to send and was at a risk of lost-->being lost. At present, parents can know what their children think immediately, as long as the children want to tell them. 对 你这里都是说了as long as ,那如果他们不想跟父母说, 那他们不是还是不了解的说..

In conclusion, parents today actually understand their children better than the parents 50 year ago. They are more conscious to understand their children, and children want to communicate with them accordingly. Also technology causes the communication become more possible.句子很简练的我喜欢, 语法有点小的地方,不过还好都不影响理解. 观点只说了一点communication. 观点的...呵呵有点让我笑的感觉. 50年前人们生活在水深火热中吃都成问题的发展更是那个啥...字数很多的

arimidyUID: 2673973

No matter how the world is changing and developing, parents still want to know what their children think about. However, comparing to the parents 50 year ago, parents today receive a higher education and keep a more open mind, so they can understand their children better.

Nowadays, due to the improvement of the parents' education background, the importance of communication with children is recognized by more and more people. 50 years ago, people held the idea that only the strict parents could bring up excellent children. That was, parents set a high standard for children to achieve, which gave the kids greater pressure, and would push them to be successful. (50年前应该没现在的孩子压力大啊)However, the thought is evolving. Strictness does not mean everything（don't 后面能跟everything?是anything吧）, what's worse, it would build a wall between children and parents because children consider that they never be really concern about（逻辑，我不懂啊）. People now believe that a parent should stand in the children's point of view to think about. As a result, they can understand their children.（这段总体来说论证过于牵强啊）

Moreover, since parents today keep a more open mind, children would be inclined to talk with their parents about the problems met in their lives. As I mentioned above, children might find it difficulties（find it difficult） to communication（communicate） with their parents 50 years ago, due to the inequality between them. Now, the relationship becomes something that more like friends(relationship的话用friendship更好). Therefore, parents can understand their children easier.

Finally, the development of technology also provides some convenience to connect the parents and the children. Communication is the first step of understanding. （有种通篇都在讲communication的感觉）50 years ago, cellphone was not as prevalent as today, and internet also could not be use such often. How did parents and children keep connection with each other usually? The answer was by letter, which took too much time to send and was at a risk of lost. At present, parents can know what their children think immediately, as long as the children want to tell them.

In conclusion, parents today actually understand their children better than the parents 50 year ago. They are more conscious to understand their children, and children want to communicate with them accordingly. Also technology causes the communication become more possible.
communication出现的太多了，要重视understanding啊。没有实在的例子