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sunliang3361UID: 2502234

10.20 People will spend less time in cooking and preparing food in 20 years later. Do you agree or disagree?

“today I am so busy to cook by myself, Jack, please reserve a restaurant for me. “ This talk we could hear often in our company life. It is undeniable that people seem to have less and less leisure time to do what we thought in the past as “the regular thing” such as cooking and having a dinner with family members. Contrary to the opinion most people hold is my disagreement that people will never give up cooking and preparing food at least in future 20 years.

There is no doubt that cooking and preparing food by ourselves gain its popularity recent years at the advent of fast-food restaurant industry. Also, people are more and more stressful than ever before due to the overload job pressure. They have no time to deal with their job properly no less than spending time in cooking by themselves. In addition, the social status of men and women are gradually equal, the number of women who choose to work outside instead of being housewives is growing greatly. The traditional cooking actor- women, is liberated from housework, which makes the argument that people will spend less time in cooking and preparing food in 20 years later believable.

However, I strongly cast doubt on the above idea, on account of the advantage of cooking and preparing by ourselves holding. First of all, cooking and preparing food on our own could allow us to enjoy a health, clean and delicious food. It is alleged that 9% of consumers are suffering toxin food because of insecurity food condition. Unlike the restaurant food sold outside, foods prepared by ourselves are safe and reliable. What’s more, purchasing all kinds of vegetable and meat in the supermarket to cook is much more inexpensive than that of enjoy the expensive food in the restaurant.

Final and the most important point is that we could enjoy cooking and eating with our family members which can strengthen family relationship. It is reported a lot that children are more likely to suffer mental and psychological problem than that living with a happy family. When parents spare time to cook and enjoy food with their children, there are more opportunities for communication between parents and their kids, in this way parents are easy to find their children’s problems and solve them before that resulting in a big issue.

In summary, I strongly disagree with the statement the writer mentioned. Considering the advantage of cooking by ourselves, I would like to make conclusion that the habit of cooking on our own will not disappear in future 20 years. I am also sure that such long-lasting habits which existed for thousands of year in human history will not be easily given up in future at least in future 20 years.

cinderella1016UID: 2666652

第一段：

“today {句首单词要大写} I am so {too…to句式表示因为什么原因而不能怎样} busy to cook by myself, Jack, please {另起一句，Jack后面改为句号，然后please首字母大写} reserve a restaurant {reserve a table in a restaurant比较合适} for me. “ This talk we could hear often in our company life {语序不对，应该是We could often hear talks of this kind in daily life.}. It is undeniable {建议改为seems} that people seem to {建议删掉} have less and less leisure time to do what we thought in the past as “the regular thing”{daily cores} such as cooking and having a dinner {dinning更简洁，而且与cooking呼应} with {their} family members. Contrary to the opinion most people hold is my disagreement that {模板咩？直接说I am of the opinion that或者I maintain that就可以了} people will never give up cooking and preparing food {用food preparation比较好} at least in future {the coming} 20 years.

cinderella1016UID: 2666652

第二段：

There is no doubt that cooking and preparing food by ourselves gain {gains} its {建议去掉} popularity {in} recent years at {with the advent of是固定搭配} the advent of fast-food restaurant {fast food} industry. Also, people are {have} more and more stressful {stressful是形容词，这里应该用名词stress} than ever before due to the overload job pressure {work pressure}. They have no time to deal with their job properly no less than spending time in cooking by themselves {没看明白，你是想说If they cook by themselves, they won’t have enough time to handle their work properly么？}. In addition, the social status of men and women are {删除} gradually {become} equal, {and} the number of women who choose to work outside instead of being housewives {建议删除} is growing greatly. The traditional cooking actor- women, is liberated from housework {Women who are supposed to cook for their families are relieved of their housework}, which makes the argument that people will spend less time in cooking and preparing food in 20 years later {去掉} believable {convincing也可以}.

cinderella1016UID: 2666652

第三段：

However, I strongly {不用strongly也可以表示质疑} cast doubt on the above idea {above可以作副词、介词和名词，这里用above (n) 就可以表示上文}, on account of the advantage of cooking and preparing by ourselves holding {as cooking and preparing food by ourselves has many advantages}. First of all, cooking and preparing food on our own could allow us to enjoy a {删掉，因为food不可数} health {healthy}, clean and delicious food. It is alleged that 9% of {the} consumers are suffering {have access to} toxin {polluted} food because of insecurity food condition {可以删掉}. Unlike the restaurant food sold outside {prepared by others}, foods {food} prepared by ourselves are safe and reliable. What’s more, purchasing all kinds of vegetable {可数名词，加s} and meat in the supermarket to cook {删掉} is much more inexpensive {直接用much cheaper不好么?} than that of {删掉} enjoy {enjoying} the {去掉} expensive food in the restaurant {复数，加s}.

cinderella1016UID: 2666652

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Final and the most important point is that {最后一个论点，可以用Last but not least引出} we could enjoy cooking and eating {dinning较好} with our family members which can {去掉} strengthen {strengthens} family relationship {ties}. It is {often或者repeatedly} reported a lot {去掉} that children are more likely to suffer {run into} mental and psychological problem{加复数s} than that {those} living with {in} a {去掉} happy family {families} . When {If} parents spare {take} time to cook and enjoy food with their children, there are more opportunities for communication between parents and their kids {they would have more opportunities to communicate.} in this way parents are easy to find their children’s problems and solve them before that resulting in a big issue {Therefore, parents would find it easier to spot problems in their children and have them solved immediately}.

cinderella1016UID: 2666652

第五段：

In summary, I strongly {同上} disagree with the statement the writer mentioned {has made，make a statement是固定搭配}. Considering the advantage {好处多于一种，建议变复数} of cooking by ourselves, I would like to make {a} conclusion that the habit {practice} of cooking on our own will not disappear {exist} in future {the coming} 20 years. I am also sure that such {those} long-lasting habits {practices} which existed {have been in existence} for thousands of year {years} in {the} human history will not be easily given up in future at least in future 20 years {in the coming twenty years}.

sunliang3361UID: 2502234

谢谢你

sunliang3361UID: 2502234

31号integrated writing
In the reading materials, the writer claims that there are evidences proving that Marco Polo might never traveled to China, the professor's lecture casts doubt on the reading by using a number of following points.

Contrary to the belief in the passage that Marco Polo never picked up any Chinese or Mongolian place-names in his  books, the professor says that major language at that time is persian which are frequently taken into use between two Europain countries or maybe Marco Polo had traslated the chinese names into persian language already. Therefore the evidence of this points is unstandable.

Another important points showed in the listening material is that people at that time of northern China had not yet formed the habits of drinking tea and building ubiquitous teahouses which were quite popular only in the southern China. But the reading material holds idea that Marco Polo never arrived China just due to the reason that he did not describe the tea and teahouse in his books which are unique traditional culture.

Finally, the professor stated that the name of Marco Polo are not recorded in Chinese documents because in traditional Chinese documents they did not like to use real name to record in court documents or the records which contain the real name of Marco Polo were mist already. All of above reasons  challenged the standpoints made by the writer who said that no document mentioned Marco Polo therefore no evidence documents that he served at the court of the Mongol ruler.

In conclusion, the lecture completely contradicts the idea in the reading, which makes the evidences in the reading material unbelievable.

melody106UID: 2559573

点都听到了，结构清晰顺畅。不错！