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发表于 2009-11-12 23:14:33 |显示全部楼层
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In the reading materials, the passage attempts to explain the prescribed burning is not a sound practice. However, in the listening lecture, the speaker closely reexamines explanation  by the different perspective, which challenges what are stated in the reading passage. Thus, the speaker expresses the opposite view of supporting the prescribed burning.

First of all, the speaker says that there are many advantages of prescibed fire since it is a powerful force of changing nature. The lecture states that the prescribed fire can be of benefit to the soil by recycling nutrients and giving more sunlight. In addition, it can mitigate the wildfire hazard. All of the goodness could hardly achieved by Disk. This view casts doubt on the passage,and support  prescribed fire is a benefit way.
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Second, the speaker believes that prescribed burning is safe, regarding that participants are well trained. On the contrary, from the passage we know that the writer don’t think so. Although some people do not feel good about the prescribed fire, the speaker suggests that participants know scientific methods about when and where to make a prescribed fire. Thus, a safe and efficient fire work can be reached.

Third, the professor also raises the issue that for the descriped fire, the cost is comparatively smaller than the damage of wild fire, which  differs rom one of the passage’s ideas of making a large cost. Considering that the
Damage of wild fire is ten times higher than the prescribed fire, and at the same time hurt a large amount of families and homes, the prescribed fire will take less cost and be qualified as a good choice.

As a conclusion, the speaker does not agree with the ideas of casting doubts on the prescribed fire
in the reading passage. At the same time, he holds the different ideas that prescribed fire is a efficient and economic method to protect the forests and safeguard the residents.

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发表于 2009-11-14 23:44:30 |显示全部楼层
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In the set of reading materials, the writer makes the point there are some negative impacts caused by the importing species. However, the lecture casts doubts on such a view of the passage and gives his reasons about the discussion.

First of all, the lecture suggests that it is the air pollution rather than the imported species that triggers the decline of native species' population. Even though the reading passage says that the imported species are the threatening competitors over the sources, the lecturer clarifys that it is the inviriental pollution trigers some disease .In addition, it has not been proved the imported species lead to the extinction of some native species in the end.

Second, the lecture make point that rather than making some troubles, the imported animals would be of benefit to(benefit) the balance of native ecosystem. Though the passage gives the cane toad as an example of the destructive maker to the native ecological balance, the lecture tells us it is a exception, Furthermore, the lecturer says, under the appreciate control, some imported species would manage the invironment and make benefits

Third, the speaker also insists that the the imported species would generate the economic value, which cast doubt on the view in the reading material of treating them as the economic burden. The lectures give an example of an imported tree, which can be used to make fire and so on, leading to some profitable benefits.

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发表于 2009-11-19 22:24:18 |显示全部楼层
2# pop^melon In the set of reading materials, the writer makes the point there are some negative impacts caused by the importing species. However, the lecture casts doubts on such a view of the passage and gives his reasons about the discussion.+ ^- O8 E2 d! S+ C* n0 U1 g( L

First of all, the lecture suggests that it is the air pollution rather than the imported species that triggers the decline of native species' population. Even though the reading passage says that the imported species are the threatening competitors over the sources, the lecturer clarifys that it is the inviriental pollution trigers some disease .In addition, it has not been proved the imported species lead to the extinction of some native species in the end. 感觉in the end 没有什么意义 前面很连贯
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Second, the lecture make point that rather than making some troubles, the imported animals would bring some benefits to the balance of native ecosystem. Though the passage gives the cane toad as an example of the destructive maker to the native ecological balance, the lecture tells us it is an exception, Furthermore, the lecturer says, under the appreciate control, some imported species would manage the invironment (environment)plants manage environment 不对吧and make benefits

Third, the speaker also insists that the the imported species would generate the economic value, which casts doubt on the view in the reading material of treating them as the economic burden. The lectures give an example of an imported tree, which can be used to make fire and so on, leading to some profitable benefits. 最后的叙述稍微单薄了 应该再键入点细节 不过总体来说非常好

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