12月8日 03 的综合写作 那些石头建筑是用来做什么

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12月8号
综合写作    字数貌似有点少，我这次还算是严格按照时间来做的。 大家狠点批！

In the set of the materials, we can know three theories about the usage of the massive stone buildings in New Mexcio in the American Southwest in the reading part. While, in the lecture we can find opposite information.

First of all, taking about the opinon that the Chaco structure were residential, the professor says that since there were few fire places for cooking, it is not likely that the stone builings were used for living.

In addition, when professor mentions about the second theory which contends that this structure were made for conserving food,especially maize, he tell us that scientists have not found the any evidence that can show there were maize containers or maize on there.

Finally, in the lecture we can also know that there are other materials in the pots, such as sands, stones, which may be used for construction. So the third theory about the pots may not be used for serving or prepareing food in ceremonies is not so convincing. And the professor doubts that the stone builings were used for ceremonies.

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In the set of the materials, we can know three theories about the usage of the massive stone buildings in New Mexcio in the American Southwest in the reading part(三个in，读起来有点不顺). While, in the lecture we can find opposite information.

First of all, taking about the opinon that the Chaco structure were residential（句子头重脚轻）, the professor says that since there were few fire places for cooking, it is not likely that the stone builings were used for living.(其实这段还可以补充的更详细些)

In addition, when professor mentions about the second theory which contends that this structure were made for conserving food,especially （for）maize, he tells us that scientists have not found the any evidence that can show there were maize containers or maize on（多余，删） there.

Finally, in the lecture we can also know that there are other materials in the pots, such as sands, stones, which may be used for construction. So the third theory about the pots may not be used for serving or prepareing food in ceremonies is not so convincing（句子结构也是头重脚轻）. And the professor doubts that the stone builings were used for ceremonies.

总：在规定时间内完成开始都是有点难，以后勤加练习相信会有进步。共勉！