【红尘笑看沧桑】互改小组第三次作业by maggie

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Does the study of  history have value only to the extent that it is relevant to our daily lives,as the  speaker asserts? In a sense,I tend to agree that the study of history can give us direct help when it is relevant to our daily lives.However,whether or not it relevant to our daily life,history is worth of studying.

To begin with,we often say that history is a mirror.It shows us the view of the past and let us control better of our current circumstances.When making a significant decision,the study of history of ourselves can support us with numerous experiences and make us more conscious of the state to make it.When talking about the wars in the past,the study of history can provide the experiences and advantages which can lend credible support to make the plans.Studying the history,learing the prosperity and dooming of different ages can also instruct us to work well to make the society developing more harmonious.

In addition,although some circumstances in our daily life is completely different from the past,the study of history can give us in direct help from many other ways,like in spiritual.When a man loses hope,the study of some great figures in history can give him courage to overcome the troubles and stimulate him to persue his dreams,although this sort of history study seems to have nothing to do with the current life,it did help the man from struggling his life and guide him to live ambitious everyday.This kind of study seldom relevant to our daily life, but it is worth studying,cause this indirect help,somewhat, to an extent,are more influential than a direct help.

Finally, nowadays our society developing at an incredible speed,finding much relevances between daily life and the past is almost impossible,but this doesnot prevent history give us a positive effect.Afterall,there are facts didnot change during the days,and last for perpetual.Taking the environmental problems for example,the overlooking of environment while developing the society give us a punishment and a lesson that if developing so fast and regardless of the endurance of the nature,the nature will slow down this speed in return by virious environmental problems like the acid rain,the global warming.

In sum, the study of history has value not only when it relevant to our daily lives,it can give us virous support like in spiritual,and the experiences we learn from it can lend as to control the current and future better.

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最后一句  and the experiences we learn from it can lead us  to control the current and future better.不好意思，上面打成lend us 了

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Does the study of history have value only to the extent that it is relevant to our daily lives, as the
speaker asserts? In a sense, I tend to agree that the study of history can give us direct help when it is relevant to our daily lives. However, whether or not it relevant to our daily life(whether用法注意~~缺少成分，或者it is relevant或者关联用别的动词代替~~), history is worth of studying.

To begin with, we often say that history is a mirror. It shows us the view of the past and let us control better of our current circumstances. When making a significant decision, the study of history of ourselves can support us with numerous experiences(是经验吗 那要不可数) and make us more conscious of the state to make it. When talking about the wars in the past, the study of history can provide the experiences and advantages which can lend credible support to make the plans. Studying the history, learing (learning) the prosperity and dooming of different ages can also instruct us to work well to make the society developing more harmonious.

In addition, although some circumstances in our daily life is completely different from the past, the study of history can give us in direct help from many other ways, like in spiritual. When a man loses hope, the study of some great figures in history can give him courage to overcome the troubles and stimulate him to persue(pursue) his dreams, although this sort of history study seems to have nothing to do with the current life, it did help the man from struggling his life and guide him to live ambitious every day. This kind of study seldom relevant to our daily life, but it is worth studying, cause this indirect help, somewhat, to an extent, are more influential than a direct help.

Finally, nowadays our society developing at an incredible speed, finding much relevances (relevance) between daily life and the past is almost impossible, but this does not prevent history give us a positive effect. After all, there are facts did not change during the days, and last for perpetual. Taking the environmental problems for example, the overlooking of environment while developing the society give us a punishment and a lesson that if developing so fast and regardless of the endurance of the nature, the nature will slow down this speed in return by virious(various) environmental problems like the acid rain, the global warming.

In sum, the study of history has value not only when it relevant to our daily lives, it can give us virous (various) support like in spiritual, and the experiences we learn from it can lead us  to
control the current and future better.

(我喜欢这篇文章，是因为作者行文让我感到非常舒服，很好理解，结构也很清晰，但由于我个人的原因，在群里也提到我对issue103的问题表示无法理解。所以，有鉴于此我无法对于作者的逻辑和思路进行评价。说声抱歉，但仍想向作者提问，什么是与日常生活联系的历史？这指的是研究历史的范围吗？那这个范围是什么，怎样的历史才能被算作与日常生活  所联系的？如果说是研究历史的成果呢？那就作者所言的经验教训都会被运用到日常生活中去，无论是商场，还是情场等等。因此，由于我个人无法解答这个问题，因此对此辩题无法更细化地去批改。

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另外 maggie同学的格式要注意，要空格，尤其是在标点后要再空一格。~~~留下一个链接是关于issue103的同主题写作，希望有所帮助~~~https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=988980&highlight=