我的第一篇issue，issue17，欢迎大家拍砖

黑竹UID: 2753377

这是我的第一篇issue，
前两天一直郁闷，看北美范文那个郁闷阿，勉强看的懂，好多单词不认识，
心里面想，看都有点看不通，要写出这样的文章那岂不是难上加难？！
今天终于咬牙逼着自己写了一篇issue，
一个G友说他写第一篇issue花了4个小时，
我今天开始写时想，不管花多少时间，即使8个小时，也要写出一篇，
当我写时发现并没有那么难，我只用了3个半小时，其中还包含了吃晚饭的时间。
下面贴出我写的issue17，请大家拍砖，
我知道我写的不好，字数只有275；没有首段。如果非要加个首段，我也只能把结尾再重复一遍放在首段了
我写完读了一遍，觉得很生硬，请大家给出宝贵意见。


It is too extreme to catogory laws into two types:just or unjust.Laws are designed to protect most people in the society.Laws are designed to make sure our society would not be in a state of chaos.Laws protect most people ,while it restrain a few people who will do harm to others.In the eyes of the small-sum harmful people,the laws turning against them ,of course, will be regarded as unjust.As a result, whether a law is just depends on people's interests.For example,laws that regulate the companies which emit pollution into the environment will probably be regarded as unjust by the companies,while the residents living nearby the pollution-emit company will regard the law as just laws.As a result,laws can not be simply categorized into two sorts.
Now we can come to a conclusion that laws can not be simply categorized into two sorts:just or unjust,that is,there is no absolutely unjust laws.Unjust laws can be a good excuse for people who don't like a specific law to disobey it.For example,people can refuse paying personal income tax to the government by asserting that the laws of personal income tax is unjust.Thus,disobeying a law can be quite easy.When people disobey a particular law,he or she can merely assert that the law is unjust in his or her opinion.As a result,all kinds of laws can be disobeyed in this way.The carefully designed law system is actually not put into operation.
In summary,laws can not be categorized into just or unjust laws.Laws are designed to ensure that our living society will run in order.Disobeying unjust laws actually means disobeying all sorts of laws,and the society will be in a state of anerchy.

justbegunUID: 2746795

不是要写出像北美范文那样的文章啦~那样的水准是很难的
LZ的文中貌似还用了其中的例子？ ~请尽量不要用那些啊

我觉得这个题目并不是很好写
第一篇的话不是很适合
确实LZ自己也说了很生硬 开始几句话全都是LAW开头的

不一定要急着写文
理清思路再写会好些的吧
加油

只是随便说了点想法
不要在意
而且我看得也不是很仔细……

黑竹UID: 2753377

谢谢一楼的建议和二楼的热心修改，
昨晚我又自己仔细想了一下，
我觉得一个issue首先就是要知道写什么，能写出几点内容，需要哪些例子来支持自己的观点，
这个我可能会参考北美范文和ets官方范文吧。
然后就是语言问题，用词准确、句子之间的衔接、地道的语言、文章的结构等方面，我都需要多多的练习，
再次感谢各位的建议和修改：）