1.25 作文互改

Jessie28UID: 2754605

1.25 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement ? It is better to use own knowledge and experience to solve question, or ask other people for advice.

In our daily lives, we face different kinds of problems and questions. Sometimes we can solve them by ourselves , sometimes we may ask other people to help us. In my view, we should solve question with our own knowledge and experience.

Different people have significantly different personalities and experiences. We always solve problems using our own knowledge and undergoing, because other people do not understand our own circumstances, the solution that they gave to us may not suitable for our conditions. Moreover, due to different personalities we have, when we face the same question, we may solve the question in contradictable ways. So because of our own characters and experience, we should solve problems by ourselves.

In different countries, we have divergent habits and cultural backgrounds. Maybe  one question in some countries is a vital issue , but in other countries is not a problem at all. I will cite an example to support my opinion. In Middle East, ethnic problem is an extremely severe question to people living there. This problem can lead to a battle and injury. In some regions, it can cause a war. In United States, however, it is not even a question, different people with different religions live together and respect each other. In this regard, in different countries especially in some specific areas, we should fix a problem according to our own experience and knowledge.

Although we should solve question depending on our own undergoing and knowledge, in this information and technology times, we should accept other's suggestion. Because the advice others offer to us would solve the question more effective sometimes.

Consequently, in my viewpoint, we face different kinds of questions everyday, we should solve the problem by our own knowledge and experience , and at the same time we can consider to take the advice others offer to us.

ivybettyUID: 2328308

In our daily lives, we face different kinds of problems and questions. Sometimes we can solve them by ourselves , sometimes we may ask other people to help us. In my view, we should solve question with our own knowledge and experience.

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Different people have significantly different personalities and experiences. We always solve problems using our own knowledge and undergoing(什么意思?), because other people do not understand our own circumstances, the solution that they gave to us may not be suitable for our conditions. Moreover, due to different personalities we have, when we face the same question, we may solve the question in contradictable ways. So because of our own characters and experience, we should(是不换成had better会更好体现楼主的逻辑) solve problems by ourselves.: g# N7 K* [& ]6 g; J7 X6 `5 ~* c
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In different countries, we have divergent habits and cultural backgrounds. Maybe  one question in some countries is a vital issue , but in other countries is not a problem at all. I will cite an example to support my opinion. In Middle East, ethnic problem is an extremely severe question to people living there. This problem can lead to a battle and injury. In some regions, it can cause a war. In United States, however, it is not even a question, different people with different religions live together and respect each other. In this regard, in different countries especially in some specific areas, we should fix a problem according to our own experience and knowledge.9 |, F% G% S( b7 |

Although we should solve question depending on our own undergoing and knowledge, in this information and technology times, we should accept other's suggestion. Because the advice others offer to us would solve the question more effective sometimes.

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Consequently, in my viewpoint, we face different kinds of questions everyday, we should solve the problem by our own knowledge and experience , and at the same time we can consider to take the advice others offer to us.

楼主的语法和词汇都很棒,但是个别词还是注意下比如undergoing不可等同于experience,因为undergoing更多表示经历苦难.
另外,文章开宗明义赞成自己解决问题,为什么到最后两段又开始打圆场?
第三段的论点如果可以鲜明的提出,可能会更好.
互相学习,互相进步!

Jessie28UID: 2754605

谢谢，互相学习，互相进步:loveliness: