皇甫秋荻的独立作文~begin with 1.27

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In this day and age, do-it-yourself travel is becoming more and more prevalent. Indeed, it can allow us to master our time freely which we'd rather not make it something formal and structured, (这里另起一句)while from my own perspective, I prefer (to) join in a group led by a tour guide than take a DIY tour. Here are reasons followed.
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To begin with, following a cicerone can be more convenient for us, especially on the aspect of time-saving. A vast majority of people often complain that they have to spend much time on(去掉)
booking tickets and finding hotels which disturb them through the whole trip，for the booking office are always congested and rumbustious and the guesthouse have already have no vacancy. However, if we have a tour guide, the entire nuisances mentioned above are inexistent. The guide will get everything ready for our journey. Meanwhile, during the trip, with the leading of a guide, we, who is unfamiliar with the roads(感觉有点怪，其实这里有一个转折although we have never been the travel place, we do not worry about getting lost in it), will not worry about where way should to go. Besides, it also can reduce the rate of unpredictable danger when we hike with guide. Therefore, tourist guide can bring dozens of convenience for us.4 q5 d3 j& \( F

What's more, travelling with a group of person can be more economical as well. Because only the tour guides know the latest information about the price in food, shelter and transportation(这里有两个问题，一是because 是个连词，后面只是个原因从句，主句还是前面那个，就改句号为逗号，二是太绝对了，去掉only). They can prepare a way of saving money for us(没有这么好的导游吧). Besides, the tickets price and hotel charge with a large number of people(generally speaking, the price of ticket and other aspects in a group is much lower than a person), can be much lower than a person alone, and sometimes even the half of the primary one. And we can also save more money enjoying the local food not only in a delicious taste but also a low price.) d' ~, ]) W( ~& f6 X/ ^  W( P

Last but not the least; travelling isn't just(only)
for fun, while with a tour guide, we can get a deeply understanding about the local culture and customs. For example, if we take a visit on an ancient relic，we should not just see it and then go away. On the contrary(不是转折，是递进关系,改用furthermore), we should know "when did it start" , "how did it disappear" and "is there any amazing stories during the time" And only follow the guide, can we learn from all the things which mentioned above which The tour guide can explain to us in detail. In this way, we can have a better cognition about the area.
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To sum up, after several careful arguments, I do claim that we should have a conducted tour instead of a self-service trip.