2.4作业O(∩_∩)O哈哈~

mangohahaUID: 2758178

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Technology makes people’s lives simpler in turn to make people’s lives more complicated.

I totally agree with the statement that the increasingly developmental technology brings to human life a series of convenience and benefit. Yet, in some degree, this development has not made people’s life simpler, but much more complicated.

Admittedly, there is no denying that as the developmental technique, people’s life has been much more convenient and comfortable. There are various illustrations can be taken as example, to name a few, the appearance of automobile, airplane, and so forth, which has improved the condition of people’s transportation. Also, the development of medical system, which develops the health care. In general, the advanced technology exerts posstive effect on human life.

However, even I can concede that this development benefit the modern society, it is unfair to say that people’s life has became simpler in consideration of the growing number of problems apparing in modern society. As we all know, the developmen of the Internet influences deeply on the progress of society, nevertheless, numerous problems appare with this technology, such as the cybercirme. In addition, the nuclear power has not only brought people the clean fuel, but also the terrible massive distructive weapons. All of these crucial problems catch a great deal of attention and make people’s life unpeaceful and uneasy.

Lastly, dating back the progress of human society, people have to acknowledge that as the development of technology, our life have been becoming increasingly complicated. In the ancient age, people only have to worry about the food and clothing. Nonetheless, nowaday people have to worry much more problems than before, such as the airpullsion, the global warming and so forth. In this condition, people’s life have not became simpler, but more complianted.

Summarily, I agree with insofar as that the developmental technology brings to convenience and benefit to people’s life. While behind this superfical phenomenon, people have to face much more problems and our life have become much more complianted.


感谢您的批改 O(∩_∩)O哈哈~

lxg198607UID: 2564115

I totally agree with the statement that the increasingly developmental technology brings to human life a series of convenience and benefit. Yet, in some degree, this development has not made people’s life simpler, but much more complicated.+ H( {4 m2 O- W: R! w8 b

Admittedly, there is no denying that as the developmental technique（这句话有点便扭，不如改成as the advancement of technique）, people’s life(people 用复数) has been much more convenient and comfortable. There are various illustrations can be taken as example, to name a few, the appearance of automobile, airplane, and so forth, which has improved the condition of people’s transportation. Also, the development of medical system, which develops the health care. In general, the advanced technology exerts posstive effect on human life.: E5 E% o4 y1 w; P, I. E) `

However, even I can concede that this development benefit the modern society, it is unfair to say that people’s life has became simpler in consideration of the growing number of problems apparing (appearing)in modern society. As we all know, the developmen of the Internet influences deeply on the progress of society, nevertheless, numerous problems appare with this technology, such as the cybercirme. In addition, the nuclear power has not only brought people the clean fuel, but also the terrible massive distructive weapons. All of these crucial problems catch a great deal of attention（用复数，加S） and make people’s life unpeaceful and uneasy.

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Lastly, dating back the progress of human society, people have to acknowledge that as the development of technology, our life have been becoming increasingly complicated. In the ancient age, people only have to worry about the food and clothing. Nonetheless, nowaday people have to worry much more problems than before, such as the airpullsion, the global warming and so forth. In this condition, people’s life have not became simpler, but more complianted.

Summarily, I agree with insofar as that the developmental technology brings to convenience and benefit to people’s life. While behind this superfical phenomenon, people have to face much more problems and our life have become much more complianted. 4 t+ ]
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句式多样，长短句结构，好文章。。。感觉同学肯定写过GRE文章，但是有一点不明白同学论点是大正小负， 下面的论据确实大负小正，是否有点矛盾。

mangohahaUID: 2758178

2# lxg198607
嗯(⊙_⊙) 是考过G ^_^这都能看出来。。。
这两天写T的文章被打击不小。
主要是自己的总是错词还有就是总是丢主语。。。痛心疾首。。。
这篇文章本意是想写，承认科技发展为人们生活带来便利，不过这种便利所带来的并不是简单化，而是更加复杂
可能是后面在过渡或是其他地方没写好，给人感觉不知所谓。。。
谢谢批改O(∩_∩)O哈哈~

slimhUID: 2438517

I totally agree with the statement that the increasingly developmental technology brings to human life a series of convenience and benefit(s). Yet, in some degree, this development has (does)not made(make) people’s life(lives) simpler, but much more complicated.4 H3 S/ m( `0 z- m# I- r5 i9 X- q# ]

Admittedly, there is no denying that as the developmental technique, people’s life(lives) has(have) been much more convenient and comfortable. There are various illustrations can be taken as example, to name a few, the appearance （登场，上场，的意思，汽车飞机都是创造发明吧？）of automobile, airplane, and so forth, which has improved the condition of people’s transportation. Also, the development of medical system, which develops the health care. In general, the advanced technology exerts posstive effect on human life.(生活健康部分用一句话概括了，感觉匆忙，要么去掉，把上面交通工具的内容写详细）

However, even I can concede that this development benefit（s) the modern society, it is unfair to say that people’s life(lives) has(have) became simpler in consideration of the growing number of problems appearing in modern society. As we all know, the development of the Internet influences deeply on the progress of society, nevertheless, numerous problems appear with this technology, such as the cybercirme. In addition, the nuclear power has not only brought people the clean fuel, but also the terrible massive distructive weapons. All of these crucial problems catch a great deal of attention and make people’s life（lives） unpeaceful and uneasy.

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Lastly, dating back the progress of human society, people have to acknowledge that as the development of technology, our life （lives） have been becoming increasingly complicated. In the ancient age, people only have to worry about the food and clothing. Nonetheless, nowaday people have to worry much more problems than before, such as the airpullsion, the global warming and so forth. In this condition, people’s life(lives( have not became simpler, but more complianted. " ?( U+ V+ ?. I' U0 u

Summarily, I agree with insofar as that the developmental technology brings to convenience and benefit to people’s life. While behind this superfical phenomenon, people have to face much more problems and our life have become much more complianted. / c7 W! D& C1 c$ I; @" y; `6 `- N

总结：意见很明确，很多关联词用的也很好. 内容跟语法上面没什么大意见啦。继续加油！

slimhUID: 2438517

BTW，我跟朋友讨论了一下people这个词后面加life还是lives的问题，不同的人有不同的说法。。。。最终结论是，尽管我们要表达的意思是人们的生活，但是因为每个人各有各的生活，所以加了lives。。所以给楼主修改的时候也这么修改了

mangohahaUID: 2758178

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嗯 受教了^_^
谢谢您的批改 能力有限让您辛苦了 加油。。。。