2.6作业

mangohahaUID: 2758178

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers should not show their political or social views known in the classroom.
I partly agree with the tpoic that teachers ought to brings their social and political views to the class. By inserting these information into students, for the educational system, these information would amplify it; for students, these information would enable them learn much information about their live and the condition of soceity. Nevertheless, we have to make sure that teacher’s view should be healthy and harmonious.
To begin with, they is no denying that modern education should not only contain the information about student’s majors, but also something involving the modern events and social condition. This is to say, teacher’s political and social view, in some degree, fill the blank of education. Common sense informs us that the real purpose of education should be cultivating person who can contribute to the development of society. If education only emphsize on the basic knowledge, such as mathmatics, Chinese, and English, but little information about the changing society, students would hardly be used after they graduate directly. In this condition, we have to admit that this kind of education is meaningless. Generally, inserting political and social views is necessary in order to improve the education system.
Secondly, beside the political and social view play essential role to education’s improvement, it also exerts positive effect on student’s growth. In the competitive society, students have to face a growing number of pressure and problems from the society after their gradation. Hence, it is necessary for students to learn the condition and the coming challengs in the future. Yet, though they can gain the kind of information from the TV and Internet, it would be too complex for them to understand. So, Social and political view from their teachers would be the most direct and effective way for them to learn the changing society and hence prepare for it. In general, as for student, teacher has the responsibility of informing students the social events which is of benefit to their growth.
Lastly, even assuming that teacher’s political and social view is a necessary part of education and in some cases benefit to students’ growth, we have to make sure that these information is healthy and optimistic. As we all know, teacher, as the guide and compass in the grwoth of children, have the responsibility to guide the right way for students. If the teacher’s opinion is wrong and even anti-society, the result would be terrible. In this situation, school should have a complete and effective system to oversight and ensure that the teacher’s thought is healthy. Under this prerequisite, teacher’s view should introduce their children and help them grow in the right way.
Ultimately, I agree with the topic that as for the educational system as well as the children’s growth, teacher’s view involving social condition is necessary. Withal, school and educational system should have ability to ensure the healthy condition of teacher’s thought.  

O(∩_∩)O 辛苦了 谢谢您。。。

小心littleheartUID: 2726034

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers should not show their political or social views known in the classroom.7 q0 x: _# s0 w: g: U3 u
I partly agree with the topic that teachers ought to brings their social and political views to the class. By inserting these（指代什么？） information（什么information？） into students, for the educational system, these information（？） would amplify it（it指代什么？）; for students, these information（？） would enable them learn much information about their live and the condition of society. Nevertheless, we have to make sure that teacher’s view should be healthy and harmonious.
To begin with, they（there） is no denying that modern education should not only contain the information about student’s majors, but also something involving the modern events and social condition. This is to say, teacher’s political and social view, in some degree, fill （compensate for如何？）the blank of education. Common sense informs us that the real（very如何） purpose of education should be cultivating (is to cultivate) person who can contribute to the development of society. If education only emphasize on the basic knowledge, such as mathematics, Chinese, and English, but little information about the changing society, students would hardly be used after they graduate directly (apply those theoretical knowledge into practice after graduation). In this condition, we have to admit that this kind of education is meaningless. Generally, inserting political and social views is necessary in order to improve the education system.
Secondly, beside (besides) the political and social view play essential role to education’s improvement, it also exerts positive effect on student’s growth. In the competitive society, students have to face a growing number of pressure and problems from the society after their gradation. Hence, it is necessary for students to learn (how to deal with) the condition and the coming challenges in the future. Yet, though they can gain the kind of (a majority of ) information from the TV and Internet, (最好加个sometimes)it would be too complex for them to understand. So, social and political view from their teachers would be the most direct and effective way for them to learn the changing society and hence prepare for it. In general, as for student, teacher has the responsibility of informing students the social events which is of benefit to their growth.
Lastly, even assuming that teacher’s political and social view is a necessary part of education and in some cases benefit to students’ growth, we have to make sure that these（types of） information is healthy and optimistic. As we all know, teacher, as the guide and compass in the growth of children, have the responsibility to guide the right way for students. If the teacher’s opinion is wrong and even anti-society, the result would be terrible. In this situation, school should have a complete and effective system to oversight and ensure that the teacher’s thought is healthy. Under this prerequisite, teacher’s view should introduce their children and help them grow in the right way.
Ultimately, I agree with the topic that as for the educational system as well as the children’s growth, teacher’s view involving social condition is necessary. Withal, school and educational system should have ability to ensure the healthy condition of teacher’s thought.（整篇文章一直在说支持老师将自己的各种view展示给学生，可是最后又说学校和教育体制应该对老师的思想负责，然而每个人都是有自己的思想的，这一点无法保证，而且我觉得这个是和你的观点相反的方面，因此这样一说反而使你的论证不够充分有力，我个人认为可以把这一点作为一个反面展开说一下，单独成一段，最后再说大多数老师的view还是很健康的~~至于语言，句式多样，词汇稍微有点少，导致你表达某些意思的时候不是很准确~~个人拙见，加油~~ ）

小心littleheartUID: 2726034

1# mangohaha 不辛苦~~~，只是为什么2.8了，你还没有给我改2.6的作业？？？

mangohahaUID: 2758178

3# 小心littleheart
对不起。。。
请原谅。。。
因为是突然有意外事件。。。
没办法上网。。。
请您原谅。。。 请您原谅。。。
我会帮你多改一次作文，希望能用这种方式表达我的歉意。。。

小心littleheartUID: 2726034

4# mangohaha 呵呵~~~这样啊~~没关系的~我以为你忘了呢~~改2.6的就可以啦~

mangohahaUID: 2758178

5# 小心littleheart
O(∩_∩)O~ 真的实在是不好意思。。。因为事情绝对的突然，又没办法上网就没办法给你解释。。。
能力有限^_^ 改的不对的地方就忽略，有帮助的地方是我的荣幸。。。

小心littleheartUID: 2726034

6# mangohaha 呵呵~~O(∩_∩)O~真的没事儿的，我都有些不好意思了~刚看过你改的啦，谢谢你的批改，很受用呢~~~