2。7大作文作业

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2.7 Do you think success is important, or it is more important to remain happy and optimistic when you fail?


Though I admit that success is important, I agree with the statement that it is more important to remain happy and optimistic when you fail in the process of chasing success. Indeed, without optimistic attitude, you will give up when you confront with frustrate.

To begin with, it is indisputable that optimistic attitude is indispensable for a successful man. Keeping an optimistic attitude when you experience failure is helpful to cultivate your confidence. Take Edison, the inventor of lamp, for example. As far as I know, he was a person with optimistic attitude. When he commenced to do the research on the electrical lamp, he certainly met sorts of plights. In order to take place of coral which was wildly used at that time, he tried to find the suitable material. However, after countless experiments, he still failed. Whereas, it is the optimistic attitude help him remain confident. Without strong confidence, he would not be sure that he could successfully find the most suitable material as a replacement. Hence, optimistic attitude can help people keep confident, playing an important role to assist individuals achieving success.

Furthermore, it is undoubted that when you meet plight, you will not give up your object because of optimistic attitude. Take my professor Jones, who taught me Biology, for another instance. When I joined his research team, he was handling a tough subject to identify a kind of bacterial would have a negative impact on human's neuron. During the observation experiments lasting for one year, we seldom found anything important to our research. However, my professor still remained optimistic attitude and did daily observation without interruption. He told me he had met similar problem before and keeping persistent was an essential character. So, optimistic attitude is helpful for an individual keep persistent when he encounter failure.

Finally, we had to admit that success is important for every person. Nevertheless, comparing with the optimistic attitude, success is just a result. Whereas remaining optimistic when you fail would bring you more than a result of success. Because we can gain more experience from optimistic attitude.

Judging from what I mentioned above, Keeping happy and optimistic while facing the failure will help you persist your final object and make you be confident to embrace the next challenge. Therefore, optimistic attitude plays a more important role than success for a person who is on the way to success.

shirley072UID: 2712200

Though I admit that success is important, I agree with the statement that it is more important to remain happy and optimistic when you fail in the process of chasing success. Indeed, without optimistic attitude, you will give up when you confront with frustrate.

To begin with, it is indisputable that optimistic attitude is indispensable for a successful man. Keeping an optimistic attitude when you experience failure is helpful to cultivate your confidence. Take Edison, the inventor of lamp, for example. As far as I know, he was a person with optimistic attitude. When he commenced to do the research on the electrical lamp, he certainly met sorts of plights. In order to take place of coral which was wildly used at that time, he tried to find the suitable material. However, after countless experiments, he still failed. Whereas, it is the optimistic attitude help him remain confident. Without strong confidence, he would not be sure that he could successfully find the most suitable material as a replacement. Hence, optimistic attitude can help people keep confident, playing（play，主语应该是attitude吧）an important role to assist individuals achieving success.

Furthermore, it is undoubted that when you meet plight, you will not give up your object because of optimistic attitude. Take my professor Jones, who taught me Biology, for another instance. When I joined his research team, he was handling a tough subject to identify a kind of bacterial would have（主语是哪个？句子结构需要再调整一下）a negative impact on human's neuron. During the observation experiments lasting for one year, we seldom found anything important to our research. However, my professor still remained optimistic attitude and did daily observation without interruption. He told me he had met similar problem before and keeping persistent was an essential character（我觉得and前后并不是并列关系，后面部分更像是一个小结论）. So, optimistic attitude is helpful for an individual keep persistent when he encounter failure.

Finally, we had to admit that success is important for every person. Nevertheless, comparing with the optimistic attitude, success is just a result. Whereas remaining optimistic when you fail would bring you more than a result of success. Because we can gain more experience from optimistic attitude.（从乐观的态度中积累经验？一般来说都是从失败的教训中积累经验吧）

Judging from what I mentioned above, Keeping happy and optimistic while facing the failure will help you persist your final object and make you be confident to embrace the next challenge. Therefore, optimistic attitude plays a more important role than success for a person who is on the way to success.

虽然理由还是有点难想，但是两个例子太相似了，plight用了两次分别一段一次，感觉例子也就是两次遇到困难，然后怎么解决。恩，所以显得内容比较空