2.8作文

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2.8 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Being creative, rather than planning carefully, will come up with best solution to a problem.
Which would be helpful for people to come up with best solution, planning carefully or being creative? In my point of view, the answer is the latter. Since, creative, as the source and motivation, help people look into a question from various angles and effectively solve changing ones. Yet, the function of careful planning would be of benefit to help people prevent problems, but not solve them.
Admittedly, there is no denying that planning carefully in some degree is necessary and indispensable for people to face the coming problems. I’ll take myself as an example, I have a planner which is an effective tool helping me make plane for every day. Under the help of it, I can know one day’s work and deal with them step by step. It make my life productive. Also, as for the government, it have to make a detailed plan for five or ten years. Governmet’s plan play key role in the process of building a harmonious society. In genral, careful plan is necessary not only for an individual but also government to prevent the coming problems.
Secondly, even it is true that detailed design is an effective method, however, in consideration of coming up with best solution to problems, being solution is the perfect choice. Commone sense informs us that creatively exerts an positive effect on the development of society. Without good creatively, Wright Brother might be unable to invented the plane and final solve and improve human problems involving transporation. Also, without high creatively, Watt would have inability to invented the stream and hence tackle with the problems of motion. All of these foregoing examples point out the fact that creatively always can help people come up with various ideas to solve big problems.
Lastly, considering a series of emergencys appearing in the progress of human society, careful plan is unable to deal with them. In this condition, creatively would play the role of creating apt solutions to solve them. Such as the financial crisis last year, since few people had predicted this incident, government’s plan lose its power. Fortunately, numerous economists using their high creatively came up with a series of useful solutions , according to the condition of economy. In short, since the social problems is
changing every minute, creatively instead of plan is requirement of society.
Ultimately, partly I agree with the assertion that careful plan is useful for people in the development of society. Nevertheless, creatively as an effective tool help people come up with ideas dealling with changing and growing problems.

O(∩_∩)O谢谢

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我第一次帮别人改作文啊，改的不好，请多多包涵……只是一己之见啊……


2.8 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Being creative, rather than planning carefully, will come up with best solution to a problem.4 |" j: ?' H1 J( }

Which would be helpful for people to come up with better(我觉得题目出的也有问题,总觉得应该是better) solution, planning carefully or being creative? In my point of view(In my view), the answer is the latter. Since, being creative, as the source of motivation, helps people look into a question from various angles and effectively solve changing ones. Yet, the function of careful plan(ning) would be of benefit to help people prevent problems, but not to solve them. : L  U0 j2 v8 ?: G9 v; ?
Admittedly, there is no denying(It is undeniable) that planning carefully in some degrees is necessary and indispensable for people to face the coming problems. I’ll take myself as an example, I have a planner which is an effective tool helping me make plan (for) every day. (Under)With the help of it, I can know one day’s work and deal with them step by step. It makes
my life productive. Also, as for the government, it has to make a detailed plan for five or ten years. Government’s plan plays a key role in the process of building a harmonious society. In general, careful plan is necessary not only for an individual but also government to prevent the coming problems. （某沙插嘴：呃，这一段我知道是想要表达制定计划是为了防止问题的发生，而不是问题的最佳解决方案，可是这掩盖不了这一整段都在夸制定计划的好处的事实啊……）
Secondly, even it is true that detailed design is an effective method, however, in consideration of coming up with best solution to problems, being (solution)creative is the perfect choice. Common sense informs us that (creatively)creation exerts a positive effect on the development of society. Without good (creatively)creation, Wright Brother might be unable to invent(ed) the plane and finally solve and improve human problems(插嘴：我也不知道这里对不对，但是单从解释上看，发展人类问题，好像不符合规律的说) involving transportation. Also, without high creation, Watt would (have inability)not have ability to invent(ed) the stream and hence tackle with the problems of motion. All of these foregoing examples point out the fact that (creatively)being creative always can help people come up with various ideas to solve big problems.
Lastly, considering a series of emergency appearing in the progress of human society, careful plan is unable to deal with them. In this condition, (creatively)creation would play the role of creating apt solutions to solve them. Such as the financial crisis last year, since few people had predicted this incident, government’s plan loses its power. （Fortunately, numerous economists (using)used their (high creatively)great creation(插嘴：会有更好的表达，暂时没想到) came up with a series of useful solutions , according to the condition of economy.）According to such situation of economy, numerous economists fortunately came up with a series of useful solutions with their great creation.) （In short, since the social problems is changing every minute, creatively instead of plan is requirement of society.） (插嘴：最后一句和第一段矛盾，第一段中提出计划对于避免问题出现有帮助，这里提到有创造力就能取代计划好像不妥) In short, since the social problems is changing every minute, being creative seems more important in solving problems than just planning carefully.
Ultimately, partly I agree with the assertion that careful plan is useful for people in the development of society. Nevertheless, (creatively)being creative as an effective tool helps people come up with ideas dealing with changing and growing problems.



我觉得中间两段举的例子很好，很能说明自己的观点并且辅助讨论。话说我最差的就是在恰当的话题下取出恰当的例子……但是细节方面，比如说单复数、词性、用词的准确，童鞋还要加强……

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2# 奇流沙
O(∩_∩)O~谢谢你的批改。。。
单词还有语法是我的大问题。。。
哎。。。。。。

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3# mangohaha
也谢谢你帮我修改了啊……今天下午出去了，现在回来写今天的作业……O(∩_∩)O哈哈~