关于Argument一种攻击模式和开头结尾段安排

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首先，我3月8日机考，还有20天出头。

从第一篇A到现在已经20天了，截止到目前全文写了10多篇，提纲（一道一道自己按逻辑顺序排）终于刷到200以后了，在总结和写作的过程中渐渐出现的问题却不知如何是好了。

1 关于文章安排：
   最开始的A模板基本以韦晓亮老师的讲义为主，以错误点为攻击对象，但在刷提纲的时候发现，按照Assumption->supported evidence->relation between each assumptions  or assumptions, conclusions, suggestions写最顺利，但这样模板就不能用了，最后一节XDF AW课上问了小宝老师，说是可以按这种模式，但要自己总结模板。于是就开始纠结了。。。问题如下：
  1）Assumption需要在首段复述么？

如A 177
177The following is a letter that recently appeared in the Oak City Gazette, a local newspaper.

"Membership in Oak City's Civic Club—a club whose primary objective is to discuss local issues—should continue to be restricted to people who live in Oak City. People who work in Oak City but who live elsewhere cannot truly understand the business and politics of the city. It is important to restrict membership to city residents because only residents pay city taxes and therefore only residents understand how the money could best be used to improve the city. At any rate, restricting membership in this way is unlikely to disappoint many of the nonresidents employed in Oak City, since neighboring Elm City's Civic Club has always had an open membership policy, and only twenty-five nonresidents have joined Elm City's Club in the last ten years

我的提纲
177 1)A1:nonresidents are not familiar with the city
      A2:restriction will not dissatisfy nonresidents
      2)E1:gratuitous assertion---pay tax != know how the money be use(tax---improve basic facilites///nonresidents---useful complementarity)
      E2:EC false comparison(number of nonresidents;different attitude and policy)

开头如果写Based on two assumption that ... and gauge by some associating evidence, the author suggests...显得很罗嗦，而且之前看了一个帖子，说首段复述可以不必要。会被看成NO TS, 那么这一段需要么？另外首段用复述Evidence内容么？


  2）如果两个Assumption其中一个论据很多而另一个几乎没有笔墨，是每个Assumption都攻击到还是可以忽略一个另一个集中攻击清楚就好？
比如A 141
140The following appeared in a report of the Committee on Faculty Promotions and Salaries at Elm City University.

"During her seventeen years as a professor of botany, Professor Thomas has proved herself to be well worth her annual salary of $50,000. Her classes are among the largest at the university, demonstrating her popularity among students. Moreover, the money she has brought to the university in research grants has exceeded her salary in each of the last two years. Therefore, in consideration of Professor Thomas' demonstrated teaching and research abilities, we recommend that she receive a $10,000 raise and a promotion to Department Chairperson; without such a raise and promotion, we fear that Professor Thomas will leave Elm City University for another college."
我的提纲
141 1)A1:CCC will cause an environmental disaster
      A2:This disaster can be prevented by avoiding the purchase of CCC
    2)E1:No E
      E2:mining company---can not be avoided
         These spots refuse to purchase---Other markets
         Other copper companies?
    3)Sollution： Other measures

几乎所有列出的证据都在证明第二个Assumption， 而第一个A完全没有证明。虽然可以攻击No Supports，但是怎么展开呢？听人说如果不够展开论证不是还不如不讨论么。。。那这时我该怎么办？如果不讨论又会和首段提到的两个Assumption冲突。。。

  3）结尾一定要suggestion么？？有的广告性质的A没法提建议吧，本来就是特意误导的。。
      另外结尾S很占时间和字数的，一般A我都是想到好多错误攻击不完。。

2 关于一些AW经验、AWINTRO范文和XDF的冲突
  就比如说开头概括和结尾建议，分歧很大，我该听谁的？

3 关于复习：明天后天就能把提纲全写完了，之后重点肯定会放在ISSUE上，而且参加的小组的模考也快开始了。那么一般建议A一天花多少时间？怎么过自己写过的提纲？一天写多少篇合适。。？

我AW总目标目标订的是>=4.5。目前I的前60高频提纲没过完，写过11篇（244道brainstorm做过），应该还现实吧。。。

望前辈们指教！

【p.s拜托不要沉！】

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没有人理么。。。因为过年么？？？
有没有建议？？眼看就不到20天了，怕误导自己都不敢写A了，拜托有什么建议吭一声都行。。。我干着急着。。

跪谢了！！！！！