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发表于 2010-9-14 18:02:34 |只看该作者

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发表于 2010-10-1 17:26:45 |只看该作者

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The question shows a dilemma (to choose)between(holding) the friendship and (being )loyalty of friend.(to them) But if one make the decision based from(on)one's friend's benefit, the answer would be obvious. Thus personally, I prefer to directly or potentially prevent my friend from making a mistake even that might destroy the friendship, since I hold the belief that my friend could understand me eventually. If she/he is not wise enough to forgive me, I guess there is no need to be a friend any more.
I once have experienced a similar situation. My friend, who is my roommate in junior school, always missed(to perform) her duty of cleaning the dormitory room. I saw her behavior by myself and also heard other roommates' complaint about that. So I told her that she should clean the room timely.(routinely) She annoyed me after that conversation because I directly point out her lazy behavior. But fortunately, she never avoids cleaning the room after that. And around 3 months later, we began to talk again and she apology to me later.(删掉) From this childhood experience, I firmly believe (convince)that a friend will understand if you do the right thing.
We can also think about this dilemma from opposite side. If you are doing some wrong, do you expect your friend to correct your behavior and prevent you from making a huge mistake? I guess the answer for most people, including me, would be yes. So if you expect your friend to stop you from the wrong way, there is no reason letting our friend to make a mistake when we can retard. And if your friend knows you allowing her/him to make a mistake when you can stop it, you will lose your friendship forever.( Besides,when you decide to hide the truth from your friend you need to know the risks of losing them still existing.They won’t forgive you once they find out your behavior behind their back.)

It is not easy to make a friend or find a one care you truly. Thus, I treasure the friendship very much.( I treasure the friendship very much for it is not easy to make a friend you deeply care.) And I think I care more about my friend's happiness than our friend. (friendship)Thus no matter what situation is, I would not allow my friend to make a mistake just to preserve our friend.(friendship)

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