Issue103

CynthiaMomoLeeUID: 2587828

History is a very significant role in the development of humanity and society. As a textbook, history may express and reflect the advancement of all aspects in our life. Throughout the history, we can summarize the precious experience from how to found or even govern a country or obtain the hardworking progress of a cultural or thinking's development and so on. So I concede that it is the information relevant to our daily live that reveals the true value of the study of history.

Consider the author's assertion that the study of history has value only to the extent that it is relevant to our daily life. Undoubtedly, due to studying the history of human being, mankind knows gradually how we can be what we are like now or realize how the change of civilization can bring the various societies nowadays. In the realm of education, people always takes some historical story as examples to pass children the right values such as probity, honesty, kindness, persistence and so on, the core lessons inculcated by parents and school systems. Additionally, we have used to define a society as one characterized by greater tolerance of viewpoints and people, who are different from ourselves or greater respect for individual rights, so this ability can be obtained by the story, the great man in Chinese history often ask question to the common
people honestly and humbly for example, passed by generation from generation.

Also, in the realm of technology, we cannot ignore the world has been more different than ever before in history, with more and more talents standing the shoulders of great men in the history and inventing meaningful subjects and novelty, which push our society to move forward. The same as the art, art creates awareness of social issues, for instance a painting in the 15th century could express the inner struggle and unhelp of life from the ordinary class of people. When the breakthrough in the average person's life was helpful of the new hope after getting though the starvation for many years or the war was over, more and more smile would be showed and recorded. All the above changes indicate the importance of studying history.

Finally, there were lots of countries, thriving and falling down. To the government and socialists, the most valuable thing is to master the fundamental reason of the phenomenon in history and to explore the best method to beautify their country and to avoid the resistance from people. Thus, when more beneficial suggestion could be practiced in the reality, the common people would taste the favor of happiness. Efficient and safe protect in hospitals could let people check their bodies easily and shortening the tax would weaken the arduous working burden. So in the any parts of our daily life, the value of history cannot be ignored.

To sum up, the value of history indeed has been showed in the every aspects of our life from the education of a child or the changes in technology and art, and even the style of bettering our country situation. Therefore we should study continuously the history from any country in order to deepen the realization of our relevant life.

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1# CynthiaMomoLee


History is a very significant role in the development of humanity and society(The sentence does not reead smoothly ). As a textbook, history may express and reflect the advancement of all aspects in our life. Throughout the history, we can summarize the precious experience from how to found or even govern a country or obtain the hardworking progress of a cultural or thinking's development and so on. So I concede that it is the information relevant to our daily live that reveals the true value of the study of history.

Consider the author's assertion that the study of history has value only to the extent that it is relevant to our daily life. Undoubtedly, due to studying the history of human being, mankind knows gradually how we can be what we are like now or realize how the change of civilization can bring the various societies nowadays. In the realm of education, people always takes some historical story as examples to pass children the right values such as probity, honesty, kindness, persistence and so on, the core lessons inculcated by parents and school systems.(good point!!) Additionally, we have used to define a society as one characterized by greater tolerance of viewpoints and people, who are different from ourselves or greater respect for individual rights, so this ability can be obtained by the story, the great man in Chinese history often ask question to the common
people honestly and humbly for example, passed by generation from generation.(This example is not well illustrate your point of "education")

Also, in the realm of technology, we cannot ignore the world has been more different than ever before in history, with more and more talents standing the shoulders of great men in the history and inventing meaningful subjects and novelty, which push our society to move forward. The same as the art, art creates awareness of social issues, for instance a painting in the 15th century could express the inner struggle and unhelp of life from the ordinary class of people. When the breakthrough in the average person's life was helpful of the new hope after getting though the starvation for many years or the war was over, more and more smile would be showed and recorded. All the above changes indicate the importance of studying history.(You begin with "technology" , but what you really talk about is "Art",)

Finally, there were lots of countries, thriving and falling down. To the government and socialists, the most valuable thing is to master the fundamental reason of the phenomenon in history and to explore the best method to beautify their country and to avoid the resistance from people. Thus, when more beneficial suggestion could be practiced in the reality, the common people would taste the favor of happiness. Efficient and safe protect in hospitals could let people check their bodies easily and shortening the tax would weaken the arduous working burden. So in the any parts of our daily life, the value of history cannot be ignored.(this paragraphy totally make me confused )

To sum up, the value of history indeed has been showed in the every aspects of our life from the education of a child or the changes in technology and art, and even the style of bettering our country situation. Therefore we should study continuously the history from any country in order to deepen the realization of our relevant life.

(1) I think more examples will be better .
(2) The artical is not structured well
(3) the grammar and language need to improved too.(So as I ,I am poor in grammar too~~)