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Majority of famous people in the world all make decisions by themselves when they face dilemma situation, after a period of time training, which lead them to walk on a successful way. And few people in this famous people region(few people in this famous people region有点啰嗦,两个people是否可以替换掉一个) are willing to be designed the way by other people. I deem that making decisions by other people for ourself (ourselves) is ridiculous, because no one, even our parents, cannot(应该的肯定吧,can) know more than yourself about your features.
To start with, the people who know you overall and basicly(这个放在这里是不是合适啊) is always yourself, no matter where your (you) are and what time it is. Everyone has his/her own ideas, even they described it to other people, however, they(会和前面那个they混淆,指代不明) maybe not set up a comprehensive plan for you because they do not know what is the true and essential meaning your idea. On the contrary, people can based on himself(his or her) convention to think out a good idea. For instance, my mother accompanied with me bought clothes for me in the first 20 years of my life, with the time changing, my style of clothes have already been changed, like last time, she bought a childfish (childish) clothes for me, if i wear that clothes walking on the road of college, that everyone would laugh (at) me. Even though, parents are the second most familiar people (of us, they) also make some errors.
On the other hand, making decisions provide opportunities to practice our judgement ability, which has huge influence on people's future life. Take millionaire Bill Gates for example. He made up his mind to be the owner of himself, when he was a child, and at that time he had already choose his clothes by himself rather than his parents. Hence, he created a well foundament(基础?) of independent, leading to a big decision for himself, at(in) fact a big change for the world, (which) is choosing to quit the school and opening his company with his friends, Microsoft, the most influencial company in the world. If he just followed his parents plan going on studying at the college, and (什么not have, 少了点什么吧)maybe not have a Bill Gates who already be known in all over the world.
In a nutshell, people who make decisions by themselves are (more) likely to be success.
有些单词拼写错误已经直接改过来了,呵呵,感觉总体还是不错的,结尾有点太单薄了吧,呵呵,是不是时间不够了~ |
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