Issue里的个人例子

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在intro中，提示可以写个人经验感受，但怎么觉得写出来以后觉得像argu里专门给人攻击的论据。。。。写personal experience是否合适呢？

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• think about the issue in relation to your own ideas and experiences, to events you have read about or observed, and to people you have known; this is the [url=]knowledge[/url] base from which you will develop compelling reasons and examples in your argument that reinforce, negate, or qualify the claim in some way

AW INTRO原话～证明Personal experience肯定是可以接受的··


但关键是

The readers know that a writer can earn a high score by giving multiple examples or by presenting a single, extended example. Look at the sample Issue responses, particularly at the 5 and 6 score levels, to see how other writers have successfully developed and organized their arguments.

你的个人经验能否推广到大部分人的常识，即你举的例子是否有代表性，说明的正是一个人的论证水平。
建议你可以看看专才与通才5分的那篇作文，通篇就两个大例子，但说服力是很可怕的。